NR: FINAL Edit/Rewrite/Touchup 11, 12, 13 and epilogue. (#7683)
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[message]
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speaker=Tallin
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message= _ "Gods of Light! Look at that fortress. The castle Angthurim is even grimmer than its reputation."
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message= _ "Gods of Light, look at that fortress! The castle Angthurim is even grimmer than its reputation!"
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# Hidel part takes place only if Eryssa is alive
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[then]
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[message]
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speaker=Eryssa
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message= _ "I was not idle in my captivity; I watched, and listened, and learned. The hints I got from my guards’ boastings and foul jests have been confirmed by our scouts; Angthurim is the linchpin of their entire eastern flank. If we could reduce it, their defense would be near to collapse."
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message= _ "I was not idle in my captivity; I watched, and listened, and learned. The hints I got from my guards’ boastings and foul jests have been confirmed by our scouts; Angthurim is the linchpin of their entire eastern flank. If we could take it, their defense would be near to collapse."
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[unit]
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[else]
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[message]
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speaker="Ro'Arthian"
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message= _ "Fitting. My gryphons tell me Angthurim is the keystone of their entire eastern flank. If we can reduce it their defense will be near to collapse."
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message= _ "Fitting. My gryphons tell me Angthurim is the keystone of their entire eastern flank. If we can destroy it their defense will be near to collapse."
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[/else]
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[message]
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speaker=Tallin
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message= _ "Foul one, the only one who will be dying here is you and anyone who comes between us. Stand and fight!"
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message= _ "Foul one, the only one who will be dying here is you. Stand and fight!"
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Rakshas
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message= _ "Bah! I have better things to do than stamp out your insignificant life. Generals, kill him and bring me his head!"
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message= _ "Bah! I have better things to do than stamp out your insignificant life. Generals, bring me his head!"
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[then]
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[message]
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speaker=Tallin
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message= _ "Blast it! The coward has fled. Eryssa, your elves are good at moving quickly through the forests. Do you think they can overtake and pin him down while we deal with this fortress?"
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message= _ "Blast it! The coward has fled. Eryssa, your elves are good at moving quickly through the forests. Do you think they can overtake him while we deal with this fortress?"
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[story]
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[part]
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# wmllint: local spelling Angthurim
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story= _ "After reducing Castle Angthurim, the party set off after Rakshas, hoping that Hidel’s elves had been able to hold him."
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story= _ "After conquering Castle Angthurim, the party set off after Rakshas, hoping that Hidel’s elves had been able to hold him."
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music=sad.ogg
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[/part]
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[part]
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story= _ "Orcs are heavy-footed creatures; Rakshas’s trail was readily followed. But an ominous silence, broken only by the cawing of ravens, brooded over the road he had taken."
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[/part]
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[part]
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story= _ "Soon they encountered the wrack of a great battle. Bodies of elves and orcs lay everywhere. Broken weapons and smashed armor were strewn about in profusion. Elvish arrows and orcish crossbow bolts bristled from the nearby trees. The ground was splotched red with blood."
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story= _ "Soon they encountered the wrack of a great battle. Bodies of elves and orcs lay everywhere. Broken weapons and smashed armor were strewn about and elvish arrows and orcish bolts bristled from the nearby trees. The ground was red with blood."
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[/part]
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[part]
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story= _ "They paused for scant minutes to bind the wounds of a few surviving elves and leave them a small guard. Then they pressed onward to rescue Hidel — and they found him."
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story= _ "There were some survivors. Father Morvin oversaw their healing, while Tallin followed Eryssa as she anxiously walked among the dead."
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[/part]
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[part]
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story= _ "Scattered around Hidel were the bodies of at least three orcish warlords, and nearly a score of grunts, warriors and crossbowmen. His weapons were notched and broken; his armor dented and smashed. It was clear to all that his fall had been an epic of valor and glory, worthy to be remembered in the songs of all the kindred races until the end of days."
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story= _ "Suddenly, Eryssa cried out. In front of her lay Hidel."
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[/part]
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[part]
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story= _ "Scattered around him were the bodies of at least three orcish warlords, and nearly a score of grunts, warriors and crossbowmen. His weapons were notched and broken; his armor dented and smashed. It was clear that his fall had been a battle of valor and glory, worthy to be remembered in the songs of all the kindred races until the end of days."
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music=heroes_rite.ogg
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[/part]
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[part]
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story= _ "With tears streaming down her face, Eryssa approached the fallen hero and cradled his head in her lap. As she stroked his face, his eyes fluttered open."
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story= _ "With tears streaming down her face, Eryssa knelt and cradled his head in her lap. As she stroked his face, his eyes fluttered open."
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[/part]
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{STORY_PART_HIDEL (_ "I am sorry, my lady... We held him for... as long as we could... but his bodyguards... were... just too many and powerful... And then... the orcish... reinforcements arrived...")}
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[part]
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story= _ "Her face streaked with tears, Eryssa gazed imploringly at Father Morvin and Sister Thera. They simply sighed and shook their heads. It was too late to save Hidel. In a broken voice Eryssa addressed him:"
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story= _ "Her face streaked with tears, Eryssa gazed imploringly at Father Morvin and Sister Thera. They sighed and shook their heads. In a broken voice Eryssa addressed him:"
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[/part]
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{STORY_PART_ERYSSA (_ "Hidel, I am sorry. I have sent you to your death, and I grieve.")}
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{STORY_PART_ERYSSA (_ "Hidel, I am sorry. I have sent you to your death.")}
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{STORY_PART_HIDEL (_ "... Don’t tax yourself... Eryssa... I have died... a warrior’s death... You should be proud...")}
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{STORY_PART_HIDEL (_ "I held out as... long as... I could... but they... defeated us... Rakshas went... east and the... rest... went... after... Sisal...")}
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{STORY_PART_HIDEL (_ "Now... uphold the honor... of the Northern... Elves... Recover... the gold... slay this monster... and bring peace and... prosperity... back to the... Northlands... Tallin?")}
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{STORY_PART_HIDEL (_ "Now... uphold the honor... of the Northern... Elves... Recover... the gold... slay this monster... and bring peace... to the... Northlands... Tallin?")}
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[part]
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story= _ "At Hidel’s call Tallin approached and knelt beside Hidel, bowing his head in respect."
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story= _ "At Hidel’s call Tallin approached. He knelt beside, bowing his head in respect."
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[/part]
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{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "At your service, sir.")}
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{STORY_PART_HIDEL (_ "Eryssa has been... my charge ever... since she was born... I now return... to the earth... from which... I sprang... Please take care... of her.")}
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{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "Rest assured, sir, I will place myself between Eryssa and any ill that strength or love may counter.")}
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{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "I will.")}
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{STORY_PART_HIDEL (_ "Thank you... Tallin... Now I may rest... in... peace... May you... be victorious...")}
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[part]
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story= _ "With these words Hidel closed his eyes and breathed his last. As Eryssa wept with Hidel’s head in her lap, Tallin approached her, hesitating, and then wrapped her gently in his arms."
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story= _ "Then Hidel closed his eyes and took one last breath."
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[/part]
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[part]
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story= _ "Slowly Tallin aproached her. He hesitated before wrapping her gently in his arms."
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music=love_theme.ogg
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[/part]
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[part]
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story= _ "Sobbing against Tallin’s chest, Eryssa told him of the many ways Hidel had cherished and warded her since the hour of her birth. How he had comforted her childhood hurts; how in later years, he had guided her in the green paths of the forest, and taught her the deep mysteries of elven-kind."
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story= _ "Sobbing against Tallin’s chest, Eryssa told him of the many ways Hidel had cherished and warded her and her sister. How he had comforted their childhood hurts; how in later years, he had guided them in the green paths of the forest, and taught them the deep mysteries of elven-kind."
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[/part]
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story= _ "A torrent of childhood memories and the depth of her grief left her unable to speak. She and Tallin sat together silently holding each-other for some time."
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story= _ "The torrent of childhood memories and the depth of her grief left her unable to speak. She and Tallin sat together silently holding each-other for some time."
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[/part]
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[part]
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story= _ "As Tallin comforted Eryssa, the rest of the party spread out and rallied the scattered elves, and tending to the wounded. This being done, they once again came before Tallin and Eryssa."
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story= _ "As Tallin comforted Eryssa, the surviving elves gathered all of the fallen warriors, and with the humans’ help, laid them to rest. For Hidel, the dwarves raised a monument so that his heroic death would long be remembered. Then, they came before Tallin and Eryssa."
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[/part]
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{STORY_PART_FATHER_MORVIN (_ "My lady... it is a hard thing, I know, but you must put your grief behind you. Or at least, put it aside for a little while. We must go quickly to the aid of Sisal and recover our gold.")}
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{STORY_PART_ARTHIAN (_ "Forge your sorrow into rage, girl, and visit it on the slayers of your kinsmen. Teach them what happens to those who make an enemy of an elf.")}
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[part]
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story= _ "At these words, Eryssa arose and wiped away her tears. She took command of the surviving elvish forces, for all knew she was a princess of high rank and looked to Hidel’s ward as their leader by right. Scarcely a face among them was less grim than her own as they took arms and started down Rakshas’s back-trail."
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story= _ "At these words, Eryssa arose and wiped away her tears. She took command of the surviving elvish forces, for all knew she was a princess of high rank and looked to Hidel’s ward as their leader. Scarcely a face among them was less grim than her own as they took arms and started down Rakshas’s trail."
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music=vengeful.ogg
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[message]
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speaker=narrator
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image=wesnoth-icon.png
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message= _ "After making haste through the forest for most of a watch, the party arrived at the battle scene."
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message= _ "After several hours of hard travel the party arrived at the battle scene."
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[/message]
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[message]
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[message]
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id=Sisal
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message= _ "The dung-spawned bastards! Verily, Tallin, had it not been for Hidel we would all be dead and Rakshas would be gleefully counting his gold."
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message= _ "The dung-spawned bastards! Verily, had it not been for Hidel we would all be dead and Rakshas would be gleefully counting his gold."
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[/message]
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[message]
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id=Eryssa
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message= _ "I don’t think so, you bastard orcs! That gold belongs to us. Besides, we now have a few scores to settle with you. Take them, troops — I want no orc left alive!"
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message= _ "I don’t think so, you bastard orcs! That gold belongs to us. Besides, we now have a few scores to settle with you. Take them, troops! I want no orc left alive!"
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[/event]
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[then]
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[message]
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id=Tallin
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message= _ "Thanks to Hidel and the elves, we have recovered our gold. Now let’s run down Rakshas and settle up with him once and for all."
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message= _ "Thanks to Hidel and the elves, we have recovered our gold. Now let’s run down Rakshas and end this once and for all."
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id=Tallin
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message= _ "Hidel’s death was a grievous loss; our thirst for vengeance must do what the stolen gold cannot. Now let’s run down Rakshas and settle up with him once and for all."
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message= _ "Hidel’s death was a grievous loss; our thirst for vengeance must do what the stolen gold cannot. Now let’s run down Rakshas and settle this once and for all."
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story= _ "The gryphon further reported that a few more leagues west was a large force of dwarvish veterans, advancing steadily on the orcish fortress."
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story= _ "Battle plans were quickly made; the party split into three groups. Two of the groups immediately set off northwest and southwest respectively while the third group rested for an hour and then set off directly west."
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story= _ "Battle plans were quickly made; the party split into three groups. Two of the groups immediately set off northwest and southwest respectively while the third group rested for an hour and then set off west."
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story= _ "The idea was to completely surround Rakshas on all sides, cutting off any chance of escape or reinforcements."
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story= _ "The idea was to completely surround Rakshas, cutting off any chance of escape or reinforcements."
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{NR_TRACK {SHOWDOWN_STAGE1}}
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message= _ "Good luck, you monster. You are cut off and surrounded. We shall kill you and feed your carcass to the vultures and wild beasts."
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message= _ "Good luck, you monster. You are cut off and surrounded. We shall kill you and feed your carcass to the vultures!"
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message= _ "Hahahahah! You fools, do you not see that you are right in the heart of orcish territory, surrounded yourselves! Why, at this very moment my entire western army is marching this way. They will soon be here and will scatter your forces like straw!"
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message= _ "Hahahahah! You fools, do you not see that you are in the heart of orcish territory? You’ve surrounded yourselves! Why, at this very moment my entire western army is marching this way. They will soon be here and will scatter your forces like chaff!"
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# wmllint: local spelling PAH
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message= _ "PAH! You fools, know that you shall soon be outnumbered and surrounded. At this very moment my entire western army is marching this way. They will soon be here and will scatter your puny forces like straw!"
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message= _ "PAH! You fools, know that you shall soon be outnumbered and surrounded. At this very moment my entire western army is marching this way. They will soon be here and will scatter your puny forces!"
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message= _ "Aye, and not just any orcs either, those are all hardened veterans!"
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message= _ "Aye, and not just grunts either, those are all hardened veterans!"
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message= _ "Die, you murderous beast! No longer shall you terrorize the people of the North."
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message= _ "Die, you murderous beast! No longer shall you terrorize the people of the North!"
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message= _ "At these words all the allied forces gave out a combined and thunderous cheer. Their long ordeal was finally over."
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message= _ "At these words all the allied forces gave out a combined and thunderous cheer. The war was finally over."
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message= _ "(<i>Small voice lost in the uproar</i>) Awww, is it over already?"
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message= _ "(<i>Small voice lost in the uproar</i>) Awww, is it done already?"
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message= _ "Father Morvin and his wife saw to the wounded as the rest set about preparing a victory feast."
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# Place Krash, Eryssa and Hamel on players recall list to go
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# around some engine limitations Empty recall lists of sides
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# Short story
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story= _ "The dead and wounded having been cared for, and after the party had wound down, everyone gathered in the conquered castle to decide on their course of action."
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story= _ "After the feast had wound down, everyone gathered in the conquered castle to decide on their course of action."
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message= _ "The orcs are exceedingly numerous and warlike. While they squabble among themselves, their warlike nature turns upon itself and they are no threat; but when a strong warlord like Rakshas arises among them, their battle-lust becomes a plague upon their neighbors."
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message= _ "The orcs are exceedingly numerous and warlike. While they squabble among themselves, their warlike nature turns upon itself, and they are no threat; but when a strong warlord like Rakshas arises among them, their battle-lust becomes a plague upon their neighbors."
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message= _ "The orcs have just experienced a crushing defeat; it shouldn’t be too hard to get them to agree. In the future, if they should renege on their treaties, and threaten the peace and prosperity of the North, then the army maintained by the warders would crush them."
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message= _ "The orcs have just experienced a crushing defeat; it shouldn’t be too hard to get them to agree. In the future, if they should renege on their treaties, and threaten the peace of the North, then the army maintained by the warders would crush them."
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message= _ "On Father Morvin’s advice, the Council approached all the different orcish tribes and made treaties with them. If a chieftain refused to cooperate with the Alliance, he was forcibly removed and a more favorably-disposed leader put in his place."
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message= _ "On Father Morvin’s advice, the Council approached all the different orcish tribes and made treaties with them. If a chieftain refused to cooperate with the Alliance, he was forcibly removed from his post and a more favorably-disposed leader put in his place."
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message= _ "On Father Morvin’s advice, the Council approached all the different orcish tribes and made treaties with them. If a chieftain refused to cooperate with the Alliance, he was forcibly removed and a more favorably-disposed leader put in his place."
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message= _ "In time, Knalga’s caverns were refurbished, becoming a busy and prosperous home to many dwarves. Under the protection of the Northern Alliance, people of all races began coming, as they did before, from all corners of the known — and unknown — world to trade with the Dwarves of Knalga."
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message= _ "In time, Knalga’s caverns were restored and became a busy and prosperous home to many dwarves. Under the protection of the Northern Alliance, people of all races began coming, as they did before, from all corners of the known — and unknown — world to trade with the Dwarves of Knalga."
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