NR: Rewrite/Edit/Touchup: 08a, 09a, 10a (#7682)
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story= _ "One day a gryphon came screeching into the caves with the news that a large elvish force approached from the east. Messages were quickly dispatched to the elves asking their purpose. The haughty reply was that their purpose was none of any dwarf’s or human’s business, and that all would be well-advised to stay in their holes when the elves passed near."
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[/part]
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story= _ "Before the humans and dwarves could respond to this message, another gryphon arrived with the news that the orcs were holding an elvish sorceress prisoner in the castle of Bitterhold, less than a day’s march distant to the northwest. The castle had attracted notice because it had been recently rebuilt and manned by a unit known to include some of the hardiest and toughest of veteran orcs."
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story= _ "Before the humans and dwarves could respond to this message, another gryphon arrived with the news that the orcs were holding an elvish sorceress prisoner in the castle of Bitterhold, less than a day’s march to the northwest. The castle had attracted notice because it had been recently rebuilt and manned by a force known to include some of the hardiest and toughest of veteran orcs."
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story= _ "Gryphons and a picked force of human woodsmen were sent out that very night, and less than two days later managed to ambush an orcish messenger on the road out of Bitterhold. The messenger was carrying a ransom demand to the elves — for the sorceress was, in fact, a princess of the highest rank."
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# wmllint: local spelling Pah
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{STORY_PART_ARTHIAN (_ "Pah! Who cares? Let the elves and orcs chop each other into mincemeat. It will just make things easier for us.")}
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{STORY_PART_STALRAG (_ "Hah! I ken yer brain has rotted awa’ entire. Think on it, skull-head, what would happen if the elves dinna’ fight and pay the ransom instead?")}
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{STORY_PART_STALRAG (_ "Hah! Yer brain has rotted awa’ entire. Think on it, skull-head, what would happen if the elves dinna’ fight and pay the ransom instead?")}
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{STORY_PART_ARTHIAN (_ "Do you want to die, dwarf?")}
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{STORY_PART_FATHER_MORVIN (_ "Peace, peace! If you two want to kill something, there are plenty of orcs outside.")}
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{STORY_PART_FATHER_MORVIN (_ "But you do have a point, Stalrag. That ransom will buy more troops and weapons for the orcs, worse news for us.")}
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{STORY_PART_FATHER_MORVIN (_ "But you do have a point, Stalrag. That ransom will buy more troops and weapons for the orcs, and that is bad news for us.")}
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{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "I think we have a chance to make some new allies here...")}
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{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "Well, suppose we do join up with the elves — assuming they will let us — and we make a combined raid on the fortress, what will the orcs most likely do when the ransom slips from their grasp?")}
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{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "Kenning the way of orcs, belike they’d kill the Princess, especially if it seems the rescue ha’ any chance of succeeding.")}
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{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "Kenning the way of orcs, they’d kill the princess, especially if it seems the rescue ha’ any chance of succeeding.")}
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{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "Exactly. On the other hand, if we raided the fortress while the orcs were talking ransom with the elves, the orcs might hesitate just long enough.")}
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{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "Exactly. On the other hand, if we raided the fortress while the orcs were talking ransom with the elves, the orcs might hesitate just long enough for us to free her.")}
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{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "Hmmm... I think you’ve the right of it, lad. Most orcs being thicker than a wood-knot, I’d lay odds on Rakshas giving strict orders that she not be touched without his direct word on the matter.")}
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{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "But it would be unwise to trust that the orcs will stay stupid forever. If we do go ahead with this raid, we are going to have to be in and out like lightning.")}
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# po: My shinsplitters are invaluable for this kind of job. They are brave warriors and don't stop fighting until either they or their opponent lies dead. No fortress can stand against them.
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{STORY_PART_STALRAG (_ "My Shinsplitters be invaluable for this kind o’ job. They be braw warriors and dinna stop their assault till either they or their opponent lie dae. Nae a fortress ken stand against them.")}
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{STORY_PART_STALRAG (_ "My Shinsplitters will be invaluable for a job like this. They are fierce and never give ground and will not stop attacking until either they or their opponent lies dead. No fortress can stand long against them.")}
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{STORY_PART_ARTHIAN (_ "Ha ha, I like this plan! Once we get our hands on this little sorceress the elves will be forced to do whatever we want them to!")}
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{STORY_PART_ARTHIAN (_ "Ha ha, I like this plan. Once we get our hands on this little sorceress the elves will be forced to do whatever we want them to.")}
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{STORY_PART_FATHER_MORVIN (_ "Remember, Ro’Arthian, we need willing allies rather than resentful lackeys that would turn on us at the first chance. If we rescue their princess, the elves may yet choose not to help us, but that is a risk we’ll have to take.")}
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{STORY_PART_FATHER_MORVIN (_ "Remember, Ro’Arthian, we need willing allies rather than resentful lackeys that would turn on us at the first reverse. If we rescue their princess, the elves may yet choose not to help us, but that is a risk we’ll have to take.")}
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{STORY_PART_SISTER_THERA (_ "Elves are deeply honor-bound, especially in matters that touch their kin. If we rescue the Princess, I am certain the deed will not go without reward.")}
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{STORY_PART_SISTER_THERA (_ "Elves are deeply honor-bound, especially in matters that touch their kin. If we rescue the princess, I am certain the deed will not go without reward.")}
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{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "And at the very least, the orcs will not be able to raise troops with ransom money they don’t have.")}
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{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "So it shall be, Tallin, I’ll hold the caves here while you and Stalrag’s Shinsplitters fare to Bitterhold. The orcs still haven’t given up their attack on our southern tunnels.")}
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{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "Then to arms, men! For Knalga and the Princess!")}
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{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "Then to arms, men!")}
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[/story]
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{NR_TRACK {RECOVERY_STAGE1}}
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[message]
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speaker="Ro'Arthian"
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message= _ "Are we here to sight-see or to rescue this blasted sorceress? And if you really want to sight-see, then check out that orcish encampment south of us."
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message= _ "Are we here to sight-see or to rescue this blasted sorceress? If you really want to sight-see, then check out that orcish encampment south of us."
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[/message]
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[message]
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[message]
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speaker=Elenia
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message= _ "Yes, I thought you would think that. What actually happened was that I was captured by that disgusting old bone-bag of a lich."
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message= _ "Yes, I was afraid that would be your conclusion. What actually happened was that I was captured by an old bonebag of a lich."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Elenia
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message= _ "None other. I was his prisoner for many years until these brave people rescued me. It being far too dangerous to travel back to the elvish forests by myself with all these orcs about, and in consideration of the debt I owe to them, I have been with them ever since."
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message= _ "None other. I was his prisoner for many years until these brave people rescued me. With all these orcs about it was far too dangerous to travel back to the elvish forests by myself. And in consideration of the debt I owe to these brave people, I have been with them ever since."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Elenia
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message= _ "Here we have our leader and hero, Tallin."
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message= _ "Here we have our leader and hero, Lord Tallin."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Elenia
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message= _ "Then Tallin and his ragtag band hunted down Malifor and reduced him to dust. Now Tallin is building an alliance of humans, dwarves, dead mages and whatever critters he can find to crush the orcs."
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message= _ "Then Tallin and his band hunted down Malifor and destroyed him. Now Lord Tallin is building an alliance of humans, dwarves, dead mages and whatever critters he can find to crush the orcs."
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[message]
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speaker=Eryssa
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message= _ "That could hardly count as repayment of our debt to you, Tallin. This Rakshas fellow is an enemy to every Northern Elf as well. Why, it can’t have been more than a few months ago that the orcs attacked our forests and took me prisoner. Helping you defeat them would be serving our own interests as much as yours."
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message= _ "That could hardly count as repayment of our debt to you, Tallin. This Rakshas is an enemy to every Northern Elf as well. Why, it can’t have been more than a few months ago that the orcs attacked our forests and took me prisoner. Helping you defeat them would be serving our own interests as much as yours."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Tallin
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message= _ "My lady, we are not seeking to do business here: <i>“I do this for you and you do this for me.”</i> No, we seek to build everlasting friendships which will forever ensure the peace and prosperity of these Northlands. Therefore, let there be no talk of debts and repayments between us."
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message= _ "My lady, we are not seeking to do business here: <i>“I do this for you, and you do this for me.”</i> No, we seek to build everlasting friendships which will forever ensure the peace and prosperity of these Northlands. Therefore, let there be no talk of debts and repayments between us."
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[message]
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speaker=Eryssa
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message= _ "Well and nobly spoken, Tallin. Very well, I shall join you in your quest to crush this orcish menace. Let gryphons immediately be sent to our people; I shall use all the influence I have, or can induce our father to use, to raise elvish troops for the battles ahead."
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message= _ "Well and nobly spoken, Tallin. Very well, I shall join you in your quest to crush this orcish menace. Let gryphons immediately be sent to our people; I shall use all the influence I have, to raise elvish troops for the battles ahead."
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[message]
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speaker=Tallin
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message= _ "A troll? What in the world are trolls doing this close to Knalga? Something is up, men, let’s hurry up and get back."
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message= _ "A troll? What in the world are trolls doing this close to Knalga? Something’s wrong, let’s hurry back."
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music=sad.ogg
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[/part]
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story= _ "Upon arriving there something seemed to be wrong. Instead of being hailed boisterously by the dwarves as they usually were, they were met by silent guards with downcast eyes."
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story= _ "Upon arriving there something seemed to be wrong. Instead of being boisterously hailed by the dwarves as before, they were met by silent guards with downcast eyes."
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story= _ "Fearing the worst, Tallin rushed to find Hamel who also couldn’t bear to meet his eyes."
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story= _ "Fearing the worst, Tallin rushed to find Hamel."
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{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "Hamel, what is wrong?! Why is everyone acting so strangely?")}
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{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "What do you mean?")}
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{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "Yer gold, Tallin, we ha’ failed to protect it.")}
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{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "Yer gold, Tallin, we failed to protect it.")}
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{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "My gold!? Why, what happened? Start from the beginning.")}
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{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "No sooner had ye left then the orcs once again launched a massive assault.")}
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{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "Such a massive and fierce assault it was that we had to call upon all our reserves. When that proved insufficient, we had nae other choice then to call some men off the other defenses.")}
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{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "Such a massive and fierce assault it was that we had to call upon all our reserves. When that proved insufficient, we had nae other choice then to call some dwarves off the other defenses.")}
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{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "It was a ploy. Nae sooner than we ha’ thinned the ranks of the northern defenders, a small, hardened group of trolls smashed through the defenses and made their way straight for your gold.")}
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{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "It was a ploy. Nae sooner than we ha’ thinned the ranks of the northern defenders, a small force of trolls smashed through the defenses and made their way straight for your gold.")}
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{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "We beat them back, but not before they made off with your entire stock of gold.")}
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[/elseif]
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[/if]
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{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "Och, we tried, Tallin, but with the orcs still pressing our southern defenses and other groups of trolls trying to break through everywhere, we simply ha’ not the manpower.")}
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{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "Och, we tried, Tallin, but with the orcs still pressing our southern defenses and trolls trying to break through everywhere, we simply ha’ not the power.")}
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{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "How long ago did the trolls make off with the gold?")}
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{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "It couldna’ ha’ been more than a day now.")}
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{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "Then we shall pursue them. Even if we don’t catch them then we might be able to hit Rakshas before he has had a chance to put all that gold to good use.")}
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{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "Then we shall pursue them. Even if we don’t catch them then we might be able to hit Rakshas before he has had a chance to put that gold to good use.")}
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{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "Hamel, rally the dwarves and prepare to make an all-out offensive against the orcs. It’s time to give them some of their own.")}
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speaker=Camerin
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message= _ "Krash man, you are gonna miss all the fun!"
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message= _ "Krash man, you’re gonna miss all the fun!"
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speaker=Father Morvin
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message= _ "I think he has decided that it is time for him to part ways with us."
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message= _ "I think he has decided that it is time to part ways with us."
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speaker=Eryssa
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message= _ "Very good. Our first task is to give brave Tallin here full support in defeating these trolls."
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message= _ "Very good. Our first task is to give brave Tallin here full support."
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speaker=Hidel
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message= _ "With pleasure! Quickly men, set up a base!"
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message= _ "With pleasure! Quickly, set up a base!"
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id=Oof,Glu,Tor
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message= _ "Oh no! Those blasted elves have just joined forces with the humans! This is hopeless! Flee! Flee!"
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message= _ "Oh no! Those blasted elves have joined forces with the humans! This is hopeless! Flee! Flee!"
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message= _ "Oh no! The elves have just given the humans a hoard of gold! This is hopeless! Flee! Flee!"
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message= _ "Oh no! The elves have given the humans a hoard of gold! This is hopeless! Flee! Flee!"
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message= _ "You are a fool, human! Watch how we will crush and destroy you!"
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message= _ "You are a fool, human! We will crush and destroy you!"
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{VARIABLE must_kill_enemies yes}
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message= _ "... the road ahead is clear and I am eager to blast some more orcs. Shall we proceed?"
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speaker="Camerin"
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message= _ "Yeah, let’s get on with it!"
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speaker=Tallin
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message= _ "Right. Onward, men!"
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