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Nr: Rewrite/Edit/Touchup 05_02, 06_a, 07_a (#7680)

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data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/05a_02_Dealings.cfg
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[story]
[part]
music=loyalists.ogg
story= _ "Laden with gold and filled with an elation at their victory that was tempered with sadness at the death of their friends, Tallin and his people made their way back to the mines."
story= _ "Laden with gold, and filled with both elation at their victory and sadness for their departed comrades, Tallin and his people made their way back to the mines."
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "As they approached they were met with a most welcome sight: new fortifications, looking very much like the legendary impenetrable dwarvish defenses of old, had sprung up everywhere. All of them were manned by alert and well-armed dwarves who hailed them boisterously. The mines were belching smoke from the furiously working forges. New weapons and armor for humans and dwarves alike lay neatly stacked, and the deafening clang of hammers and picks from the dwarves promised more."
story= _ "As they approached they were met with a most welcome sight: new fortifications, looking very much like the legendary impenetrable dwarvish defenses of old, had sprung up everywhere. All of them were manned by alert and well-armed dwarves who hailed them boisterously. Smoke belched from furiously working forges and the heat from the smelters was nearly staggering. New weapons and armor for humans and dwarves alike lay neatly stacked, and the deafening clang of hammers and picks from the dwarves promised more."
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "They found Hamel in a forge hammering away at a new axe. He greeted them warmly and arrangements were quickly made for all their food and accommodations, as well as care for the sick and wounded."
@ -145,7 +145,7 @@
[message]
speaker=Galim
message= _ "We have cleared the connecting tunnels to here and to the old keep as well as other parts o’ Knalga. It is slow and dangerous work, mostly due to the trolls. But it ha’ been made easier by Malifor’s ending."
message= _ "We have cleared the connecting tunnels from here to the old keep as well as other parts o’ Knalga. It is slow and dangerous work, mostly due to the trolls. But it ha’ been made easier by Malifor’s ending."
[/message]
[message]
@ -160,7 +160,8 @@
[message]
speaker=Hamel
message= _ "As you can see, Tallin, there are muckle heaps of them, all ready to be borne into battle. What’s more, some of the dwarves who are expert with the sword, mace and bow, as well as some of yer own men who have grown skilled by experience, can teach others how to wield them."
# po: As you can see, Tallin there are a lot of them ready to be born into battle. Some of us dwarves are experts in the sword, mace, and bow and can aid your veterans in teaching others.
message= _ "As ye ken see, Tallin, there be muckle heaps o’ them, all ready to be borne inta battle. And, some o’ us dwarves be experts in the sword, mace, and bow and ken aid yer veterans in teaching others."
[/message]
[message]
@ -181,7 +182,7 @@
[message]
speaker=Tallin
message= _ "That’s great! What is the price of your weapons? We have gathered much booty from Malifor’s treasury and we will be able to pay you generously."
message= _ "That’s great! What is the price of your weapons? We have gathered much gold from Malifor’s treasury and will be able to pay you generously."
[/message]
[message]
@ -191,7 +192,7 @@
[message]
speaker=Tallin
message= _ "But don’t you need the gold to help rebuild Knalga? And we have plenty."
message= _ "But don’t you need the gold to help rebuild Knalga? We have plenty."
[/message]
[message]

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data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/06a_Old_Friend.cfg
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story= _ "The humans rested for many days while they were equipped with new arms and armor and trained by the dwarves."
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "But the peace was not to last. Early one morning Tallin (sore from head to foot from his training) was startled awake by the blare of trumpets, the pounding of drums and the clash of steel as the humans and dwarves hurried to arm themselves."
story= _ "But the peace was not to last. Early one morning Tallin, sore from head to foot from his training, was startled awake by the blare of trumpets, the pounding of drums and the rattle of steel as the humans and dwarves hurried to arm themselves."
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "He sought out Hamel, who informed him that a massive host of orcs had arrived at the gates of the new Knalga."
@ -299,7 +299,8 @@
[message]
id=Rakshas
message= _ "So! Your forces are managing to advance upon me, are they? Very impressive, but it shall do you no good. KNIGHTS!!"
# po: knights means wolf riders
message= _ "So! Your forces are managing to advance upon me? Very impressive, but it shall do you no good. KNIGHTS!!"
[/message]
# Place 36 Goblin Knights. Yes. Thirty-six.
@ -407,7 +408,7 @@
[message]
speaker=second_unit
message= _ "Killed him! Got his gold too. Let’s see, hmmm, about 500 gold pieces. Not bad."
message= _ "Killed him! Got his gold too. Let’s see, hmmm, about five-hundred gold pieces. Not bad."
[/message]
[gold]
@ -504,7 +505,7 @@
[message]
id=Tallin
# wmllint: local spelling Geez
message= _ "Geez, we have been fighting them for three whole days and nights now with no end in sight. Now the fourth night is approaching, what should we do?"
message= _ "Geez, we have been fighting them for three whole days, and there’s still as many orcs as ever. What should we do?"
[/message]
[message]

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data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/07a_Settling_Disputes.cfg
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story= _ "The dwarves were more than ready for them, however, and as soon as the humans got through the defenses the well-prepared dwarves fell on the battle-weary and bloodied orcs."
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "Wave after wave of orcs crashed onto the dwarven defenses and shattered."
story= _ "Wave after wave of orcs crashed onto the dwarven defenses only to be shattered."
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "As the battle raged on, Tallin again made council with Hamel."
@ -32,13 +32,13 @@
{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "How did ye fare?")}
{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "It was fierce and bloody. We fought them for three days and nights with no end in sight. Every time we killed an orc, it seemed that two more would take his place. We most assuredly cannot win fighting like this.")}
{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "It was fierce and bloody. We fought them for three days and nights. Every time we killed an orc, it seemed that two more would take his place. We most assuredly cannot win fighting like this.")}
{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "So you withdrew. Rightly done, me lad. Our prepared defenses will be able to hold the orcs off far longer and with less loss than ye could ha’ done in the open field. I see that my training of you hasna’ been for naught.")}
{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "And I am grateful — but what should we do from here? The number of humans and dwarves is limited, unlike the orcs whose numbers seem unlimited.")}
{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "Aye. But we must utterly crush this orcish host if we are to ha’ anything other than a brief respite.")}
{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "Aye. But we must utterly crush this orcish host if we are to ever ha’ peace.")}
{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "Orcs are fickle; if we negotiated a treaty with them — assuming they would accept — it would just be broken as soon as the next warlord arose among them.")}
@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
#po: "coil" meant, in Middle and Early Modern English, a difficulty
#po: or problem.
{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "That will be very difficult. We did that last time and they will no doubt be alert to that threat now. Anyway, it would be but a temporary solution. Soon another strong leader would emerge and we’d find oursel’ back in the same coil.")}
{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "That will be very difficult. We did that last time and they will no doubt be alert to that threat now. Anyway, it would be but a temporary solution. Soon another strong leader would come along, and we’d find oursel’ back in the same coil.")}
{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "Well, back to the drawing board. What should we do?")}
@ -105,7 +105,7 @@
{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "Hey, we have had experiences with crazy mages ourselves. Believe me, they are dangerous! You will feel a lot better with some of them on your side.")}
{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "Ye’ll need to travel light to reach Highbrook Pass before the orcs mount another assault in force. I think ye should take as little gold as you think ye’ll need and leave the rest here. We’ll store it in the tunnels furthest away from the attacking orcs in case they break through.")}
{STORY_PART_HAMEL (_ "Ye’ll need to travel light to reach Highbrook Pass before the orcs mount another assault in force. I think ye should take as little gold as possible. We’ll store the rest in the tunnels furthest away from the attacking orcs in case they break through.")}
{STORY_PART_TALLIN (_ "So it shall be. Now how exactly do we get to this mountain pass?")}
[/story]
@ -369,7 +369,7 @@
[message]
speaker="Ro'Sothian"
message= _ "Leave <i>you</i> in peace?! It is your kind that won’t leave <i>us</i> in peace! Ever since you blasted dwarves built that damn road you have harassed us unceasingly! Now, it ends here! After I kill you I will split your carcass and hang it at the mouth of this pass as a warning for any other fools like you! And unlike us <i>you</i> won’t come back."
message= _ "Leave <i>you</i> in peace?! It is your kind that won’t leave <i>us</i> in peace! Ever since you blasted dwarves built that damn road you have harassed us unceasingly! Now, it ends here! After I kill you I will split your carcass and hang it at the mouth of this pass as a warning for any other fools like you! And unlike us, <i>you</i> won’t come back."
[/message]
[message]
@ -485,7 +485,7 @@
[message]
speaker=Father Morvin
message= _ "Quick, honey, we’ve got to stop him. Let’s go!"
message= _ "Quick, honey, we’ve got to stop him!"
[/message]
[if]
@ -757,7 +757,7 @@
[message]
speaker=Tallin
message= _ "So basically, you want to be left alone in peace. Right?"
message= _ "So basically, you want to be left alone in peace, right?"
[/message]
[message]