Dead Water Proofread Pass (#6139)
DW: proofread text
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[message]
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speaker=Gwabbo
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message= _ "Kai, please lead us against them yourself, it will hearten the folk. And — if you will permit — you reach the age now where a kai must learn battle skills."
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message= _ "Kai, please lead us against them yourself, it will hearten the folk. And — if you will permit — you now reach the age where a kai must learn battle skills."
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[/message]
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[message]
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[else]
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[message]
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speaker=Cylanna
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message= _ "However, I am afraid that not everyone will follow you on so perilous an adventure. First you must prove you are not afraid of danger. If you leave now, many will think the mission is but an excuse to flee."
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message= _ "However, I am afraid that not everyone will follow you on so perilous an adventure. First, you must prove you are not afraid of danger. If you leave now, many will think the mission is but an excuse to flee."
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[/message]
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[/else]
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[/if]
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=second_unit
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#po: This should just be "translated" to whatever noise a bat makes in your language.
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message= _ "Neep, neep!"
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[/message]
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[message]
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[/if]
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[message]
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speaker=Cylanna
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message= _ "I believe it is undead and has no will of its own, but the Kai may have the will power to direct it."
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message= _ "I believe it is undead and has no will of its own, but the Kai may have the willpower to direct it."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Kai Krellis
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[else]
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[message]
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speaker=Cylanna
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message= _ "Killing these enemies was good, but there were many more on the way. It will take greater might than we have to defeat them."
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message= _ "Killing these enemies was good, but there are many more on the way. It will take greater might than we have to defeat them."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Kai Krellis
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[message]
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speaker=narrator
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image=wesnoth-icon.png
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message= _ "You can choose when the slaves come out of their villages and attack their captors. When you are ready, right click anywhere and select the slave revolt."
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message= _ "You can choose when the slaves come out of their villages and attack their captors. When you are ready, right-click anywhere and select 'Inspire the slaves to revolt'."
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[/message]
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#define PUT_SLAVE TYPE X Y
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#endif
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[message]
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speaker=narrator
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#po: "to hand" is an expression that means "nearby".
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message= _ "Cheers erupted from several villages, and former slaves rushed out with whatever meager weapons they could find, or fists and rocks if no weapons were to hand. Screams and curses came from the saurian castles."
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image=wesnoth-icon.png
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Gwabbo
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message= _ "Don’t let him go too crazy. Those saurian spears will go right through his scales."
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message= _ "Don’t let him go too crazy. Those saurian spears can go right through his scales."
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[/message]
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[/event]
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[message]
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speaker=Kai Krellis
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message= _ "So you will help us defeat them?"
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message= _ "So, you will help us defeat them?"
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[/message]
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[message]
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[then]
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[message]
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speaker=Marg-Tonz
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message= _ "I told not to bother the ships! Now you’re in for it."
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message= _ "I told you not to bother the ships! Now you’re in for it."
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[/message]
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{WAKE_ORCS}
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[/then]
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[story]
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[part]
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{DW_BIGMAP}
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story= _ "It had been more of an adventure than the Kai Krellis had planned, but they were finally at their destination. The small island where Tyegëa and her students lived was before them."
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story= _ "It had been more of an adventure than Kai Krellis had planned, but they were finally at their destination. The small island where Tyegëa and her students lived was before them."
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[/part]
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[/story]
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Tyegea
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message= _ "That remains to be seen. I find it disturbing that a Kai — and my descendant — would run here begging for help. Before I agree to save you, you have to prove that my blood flows in your veins. Prove that your are, despite appearances, courageous, and worthy of my help."
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message= _ "That remains to be seen. I find it disturbing that a kai — and my descendant — would run here begging for help. Before I agree to save you, you have to prove that my blood flows in your veins. Prove that your are, despite appearances, courageous, and worthy of my help."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Kai Krellis
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Caladon
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message= _ "Well, he calls himself Mal-Govon now, but yes. He called this land the KINGDOM of Agnovon. He was its first king. And its last, and every one in between, too! He kept getting older and older, but he never died. Well, NOW he’s dead of course. He still putters around in that castle over there, but he hasn’t really cared about keeping his kingdom under control for a good long while. I bet I can wake him up, though. Watch THIS!"
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message= _ "Well, he calls himself Mal-Govon now, but yes. He called this land the KINGDOM of Agnovon. He was its first king. And its last. And each one in between too! He kept getting older and older, but he never died. Well, NOW he’s dead of course. He still putters around in that castle over there, but he hasn’t really cared about keeping his kingdom under control for a good long while. I bet I can wake him up, though. Watch THIS!"
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=narrator
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Mal-Govon
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message= _ "What I remember, you old fool, is you leaving behind the smoldering bodies of the orcs you had hired to steal my sword. Now, you bring mer to do your dirty work. When they lay expiring like gasping fish on the shore, will you not flee again? Do not speak to <i>me</i> of fear."
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message= _ "What I remember, you old fool, is you leaving behind the smoldering bodies of the orcs you had hired to steal my sword. Now, you bring merfolk to do your dirty work. When they lie expiring like gasping fish on the shore, will you not flee again? Do not speak to <i>me</i> of fear."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Kai Krellis
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[message]
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speaker=Kai Krellis
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message= _ "I am Kai Krellis of Jotha. I am attempting to defeat Mal-Govon and take his sword. Will you to join us in battle against a common enemy?"
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message= _ "I am Kai Krellis of Jotha. I am attempting to defeat Mal-Govon and take his sword. Will you join us in battle against a common enemy?"
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[then]
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speaker=Kai Krellis
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message= _ "We thank all you humans for your help, and release you from any farther obligations. Where we are going, you cannot easily follow."
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message= _ "We thank all you humans for your help, and release you from any further obligations. Where we are going, you cannot easily follow."
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[kill]
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race=human
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Nebthun
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message= _ "Indeed, though we have not been hard pressed. The creatures have been busy fouling the waters and making the bay more to their liking. We worry that they will soon be back to finish with us, and I fear we will not survive."
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message= _ "Indeed, though we have not been hard-pressed. The creatures have been busy fouling the waters and making the bay more to their liking. We worry that they will soon be back to finish with us, and I fear we will not survive."
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[message]
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speaker=Kai Krellis
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duration=forever
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description= _ "This trident gives merfolk the power to throw lightning at their enemies."
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silent=yes
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cannot_use_message= _ "Only the merfolk can use this item."
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cannot_use_message= _ "Only merfolk can use this item."
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[filter]
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race=merman
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x={X}
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# End level:
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[message]
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speaker=Cylanna
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message= _ "Killing these enemies was good, but there were many more on the way. I’m sure it is still unsafe here."
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message= _ "Killing these enemies was good, but there are many more on the way. I’m sure it is still unsafe here."
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[/message]
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[message]
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