Sota proofread (#6136)
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Alexander Lacson
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[then]
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[message]
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speaker=$other_human
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message= _ "How odd. I wonder what are they from. A gryphon perhaps?"
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message= _ "How odd. I wonder what they are from. A gryphon perhaps?"
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Ras-Tabahn
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[else]
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[message]
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speaker=Ras-Tabahn
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message= _ "I wonder what are they from. A large flightless bird perhaps? Let us see."
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message= _ "I wonder what they are from. A large flightless bird perhaps? Let us see."
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[/message]
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[/else]
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[/if]
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@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ Ras-Tabahn seems like an acceptable ally. He is quite different from the stodgy
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image=portraits/undead/ghost.png
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scale=no
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[/background_layer]
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story= _ "Well, these combatants were going to get a second chance for glory when they fought for me. The more strong willed among them may even remember desiring it."
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story= _ "Well, these combatants were going to get a second chance for glory when they fought for me. The more strong-willed among them may even remember desiring it."
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[/part]
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{JOURNEY_PART 11}
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[/story]
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[then]
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[message]
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speaker=Ardonna
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message= _ "Before we leave, I have an unrelated question. Vendraxis here has said that my name is untrue. Do you have an idea what could that mean?"
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message= _ "Before we leave, I have an unrelated question. Vendraxis here has said that my name is untrue. Do you have an idea what that could mean?"
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[/message]
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[/then]
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[else]
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[message]
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speaker=Ardonna
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message= _ "Before we leave, I have an unrelated question. I met a mystic who said that my name was untrue. Do you have an idea what could that mean?"
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message= _ "Before we leave, I have an unrelated question. I met a mystic who said that my name was untrue. Do you have an idea what that could mean?"
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[/message]
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[/else]
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[/if]
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Ardonna
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message= _ "I suppose you are right. I am no longer the ordinary girl Ardonna, and Vendraxis was correct. From now I shall be... Ardryn-Na."
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message= _ "I suppose you are right. I am no longer the ordinary girl Ardonna, and Vendraxis was correct. From now on I shall be... Ardryn-Na."
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[/message]
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# We will change her name, but will keep using the same id.
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[modify_unit]
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title_alignment=left
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story= _ "24 IV, 23 YW
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We reached the Ford of Abez as the dawn light spread behind the mountain peaks to the north. As we waded across, the dark water reached to our waists, which made for slow going. I dared not imagine what manner of tentacled creature lurked below, but we completed the crossing without incident. The water was chill with snowmelt, so our teeth were chattering when we reached the far shore. The rising sun was warm though, and had us dried in short order. Despite this, Ras-Tabahn was not well off. He collapsed in the sand and went into a paroxysm of coughing the like of which I had never seen. When he could speak again, he assured me that it was only on account of the cold, and I should not be unduly troubled. I am uneasy all the same."
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We reached the Ford of Abez as the dawn light spread behind the mountain peaks to the north. As we waded across, the dark water reached to our waists, which made for slow going. I dared not imagine what manner of tentacled creature lurked below, but we completed the crossing without incident. The water was chill with snowmelt, so our teeth were chattering when we reached the far shore. The rising sun was warm though, and had us dried in short order. Despite this, Ras-Tabahn was not well. He collapsed in the sand and went into a paroxysm of coughing the like of which I had never seen. When he could speak again, he assured me that it was only on account of the cold, and I should not be unduly troubled. I am uneasy all the same."
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[/part]
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{JOURNEY_PART 14}
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[/story]
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#po: "consumption" is an old word for tuberculosis
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story= _ "6 V, 23 YW
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We have reached a pass through the mountains that Ras-Tabahn knew of. The air is cool in these upper reaches. Mist rises from the snow in the afternoon, and the icicles drip the purest water from rock overhangs. I find it all refreshing, but Ras-Tabahn’s coughing fits are frequent. Sometimes he is reduced to speaking in short phrases due to lack of breath. Of course he is quite old — 50 at least — but I am also certain that he is ill. His thinness leads me to believe it is consumption, but he refuses to discuss it, preferring to deny the severity of his problem."
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We have reached a pass through the mountains that Ras-Tabahn knew of. The air is cool in these upper reaches. Mist rises from the snow in the afternoon, and the icicles drip the purest water from rock overhangs. I find it all refreshing, but Ras-Tabahn’s coughing fits are frequent. Sometimes he is reduced to speaking in short phrases due to lack of breath. Of course, he is quite old — at least fifty — but I am also certain that he is ill. His thinness leads me to believe it is consumption, but he refuses to discuss it, preferring to deny the severity of his problem."
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[/part]
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{JOURNEY_PART 15}
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[/story]
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[message]
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speaker=Ardonna
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message= _ "I wonder what are they from. A gryphon perhaps?"
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message= _ "I wonder what they are from. A gryphon perhaps?"
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Ras-Tabahn
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[message]
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speaker=Ardonna
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message= _ "We have conquered death! Let us bring the news back to Wesnoth. We should to let them know that nobody ever need die again."
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message= _ "We have conquered death! Let us bring the news back to Wesnoth! Let all in this world know that nobody ever need die again."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Ras-Tabahn
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image=story/book.png
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scale=no
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[/background_layer]
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story= _ "Ras-Tabahn has tried to persuade me to join him in his endeavor, but I have serious misgivings about his plan. I am not positive he can defeat the city guard, and enslaving the population is the one of the ways the old Wesfolk leaders earned their poor reputations. I think a more benevolent approach has a better chance of ensuring our legacy. We should spread the news of our success and invite the citizenry to join us voluntarily. I will journey south into Wesnoth proper, and visit Dan’Tonk and Weldyn. At some point in the distant future, my new friends and Ras-Tabahn’s population will probably clash, but that will be a worry for another time, and for now, we each continue to regard the other as an ally."
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story= _ "Ras-Tabahn has tried to persuade me to join him in his endeavor, but I have serious misgivings about his plan. I am not positive he can defeat the city guard, and enslaving the population is one of the ways the old Wesfolk leaders earned their poor reputations. I think a more benevolent approach has a better chance of ensuring our legacy. We should spread the news of our success and invite the citizenry to join us voluntarily. I will journey south into Wesnoth proper, and visit Dan’Tonk and Weldyn. At some point in the distant future, my new friends and Ras-Tabahn’s population will probably clash, but that will be a worry for another time, and for now, we each continue to regard the other as an ally."
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[/part]
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[part]
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[background_layer]
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