several smaller fixes to Two Brothers:
* removed some double spaces * make "Counselor Hoban" a "Caretaker Hoban", since it is a small village that likely has no huge council * fix the year in the epilogue, it has to be two years after the other events, so 365YW is correct, not 355YW
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story=_ "12 V, 363 YW
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Excerpt from the journal of Bjarn of Maghre
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If I could but face this ‘Mordak’! I think my magic might prove stronger than his. But he bides in the hills, well-guarded by his servants, and I muster frightened peasants to fight his minions with blades and sticks. I need my brother; he always had a better head for battle than I.
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If I could but face this ‘Mordak’! I think my magic might prove stronger than his. But he bides in the hills, well-guarded by his servants, and I muster frightened peasants to fight his minions with blades and sticks. I need my brother; he always had a better head for battle than I.
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Will he heed the call? I do not know if he has kept the amulet; we have not spoken since that evil day at Toen Caric. If he will not come for me, perhaps he will return to aid our village in its hour of desperate need.
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Will he heed the call? I do not know if he has kept the amulet; we have not spoken since that evil day at Toen Caric. If he will not come for me, perhaps he will return to aid our village in its hour of desperate need."
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background=story/Two_Brothers_M1P2.png
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[/part]
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[part]
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[side]
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type=Longbowman
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id=Councillor Hoban
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name= _ "Councillor Hoban"
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id=Caretaker Hoban
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name= _ "Caretaker Hoban"
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unrenamable=yes
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Bjarn
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message= _ "We should find Counselor Hoban. Maybe he knows what is going on here."
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message= _ "We should find Caretaker Hoban. Maybe he knows what is going on here."
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[/message]
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[/event]
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side=3
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[/filter]
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[message]
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speaker=Councillor Hoban
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speaker=Caretaker Hoban
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message= _ "I am glad to see you returned."
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[/message]
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[message]
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message= _ "No gladder than I am to be here. But what has happened to Maghre?"
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[message]
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speaker=Councillor Hoban
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speaker=Caretaker Hoban
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message= _ "Soon after you departed we were beset by orcs. With half the men of Maghre gone, we could not stop them."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Councillor Hoban
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speaker=Caretaker Hoban
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message= _ "The orcish warlord aims to enslave us. We will not be able to hold out for much longer."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Councillor Hoban
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speaker=Caretaker Hoban
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message= _ "Have a care, his men are fell fighters and have killed many. Very few remain who can bear arms, but I will send them to aid you in battle."
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background=story/Two_Brothers_M4P1_the_end.png
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[/part]
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[part]
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story= _ "22 IX, 355 YW
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Excerpt from the journal of Arne of Maghre:
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story= _ "22 IX, 365 YW
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Excerpt from the journal of Arne of Maghre
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Maghre is looking much better than the last time I saw it. Bjarn has done wonders in two years. The village is rebuilt, and the surrounding farmlands are restored and reoccupied. Despite my brother’s worries, our people have faced no new threats in that time.
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