several smaller fixes to Two Brothers:

* removed some double spaces

* make "Counselor Hoban" a "Caretaker Hoban", since it is a small
  village that likely has no huge council

* fix the year in the epilogue, it has to be two years after the other
  events, so 365YW is correct, not 355YW
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Nils Kneuper 2011-01-09 12:56:55 +00:00
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story=_ "12 V, 363 YW
Excerpt from the journal of Bjarn of Maghre
If I could but face this Mordak! I think my magic might prove stronger than his. But he bides in the hills, well-guarded by his servants, and I muster frightened peasants to fight his minions with blades and sticks. I need my brother; he always had a better head for battle than I.
If I could but face this Mordak! I think my magic might prove stronger than his. But he bides in the hills, well-guarded by his servants, and I muster frightened peasants to fight his minions with blades and sticks. I need my brother; he always had a better head for battle than I.
Will he heed the call? I do not know if he has kept the amulet; we have not spoken since that evil day at Toen Caric. If he will not come for me, perhaps he will return to aid our village in its hour of desperate need.
"
Will he heed the call? I do not know if he has kept the amulet; we have not spoken since that evil day at Toen Caric. If he will not come for me, perhaps he will return to aid our village in its hour of desperate need."
background=story/Two_Brothers_M1P2.png
[/part]
[part]

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@ -123,8 +123,8 @@ But I am still troubled. I wonder... is this sense of foreboding I feel merely a
[side]
type=Longbowman
id=Councillor Hoban
name= _ "Councillor Hoban"
id=Caretaker Hoban
name= _ "Caretaker Hoban"
unrenamable=yes
side=3
controller=ai
@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ But I am still troubled. I wonder... is this sense of foreboding I feel merely a
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Bjarn
message= _ "We should find Counselor Hoban. Maybe he knows what is going on here."
message= _ "We should find Caretaker Hoban. Maybe he knows what is going on here."
[/message]
[/event]
@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ But I am still troubled. I wonder... is this sense of foreboding I feel merely a
side=3
[/filter]
[message]
speaker=Councillor Hoban
speaker=Caretaker Hoban
message= _ "I am glad to see you returned."
[/message]
[message]
@ -220,15 +220,15 @@ But I am still troubled. I wonder... is this sense of foreboding I feel merely a
message= _ "No gladder than I am to be here. But what has happened to Maghre?"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Councillor Hoban
speaker=Caretaker Hoban
message= _ "Soon after you departed we were beset by orcs. With half the men of Maghre gone, we could not stop them."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Councillor Hoban
speaker=Caretaker Hoban
message= _ "The orcish warlord aims to enslave us. We will not be able to hold out for much longer."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Councillor Hoban
speaker=Caretaker Hoban
message= _ "Have a care, his men are fell fighters and have killed many. Very few remain who can bear arms, but I will send them to aid you in battle."
[/message]
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background=story/Two_Brothers_M4P1_the_end.png
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "22 IX, 355 YW
Excerpt from the journal of Arne of Maghre:
story= _ "22 IX, 365 YW
Excerpt from the journal of Arne of Maghre
Maghre is looking much better than the last time I saw it. Bjarn has done wonders in two years. The village is rebuilt, and the surrounding farmlands are restored and reoccupied. Despite my brothers worries, our people have faced no new threats in that time.