minor language corrections

data/campaigns/Under_the_Burning_Suns/scenarios/7_2_TrollInterlude.cfg

@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ victory_when_enemies_defeated=no
 	[/part]
 
 	[part]
-	story= _ "Zurg told us that they had just captured this city from the dwarves, and that the Great Leader had moved here to set up his base of operations. They were clearly worried about a dwarf counterattack. Luckily the trolls were quite skilled at stonework and the walls were quickly repaired. The trolls didn't talk much, but were very intelligent and clearly weren't the bloodthirsty savages they were purported to be. Overall they actually seemed quite peaceful, except when provoked. I learned that rulership was balanced between the warriors and the shamans, the trolls shamans were the ones that chose the military leader of the people."
+	story= _ "Zurg told us that they had just captured this city from the dwarves, and that the Great Leader had moved here to set up his base of operations. They were clearly worried about a dwarf counterattack. Luckily the trolls were quite skilled at stonework and the walls were quickly repaired. The trolls didn't talk much, but were very intelligent and clearly weren't the bloodthirsty savages they were purported to be. Overall they actually seemed quite peaceful, except when provoked. I learned that rulership was balanced between the warriors and the shamans, the troll shamans were the ones that chose the military leader of the people."
 	[/part]
 
 	[part]
@@ -706,7 +706,7 @@ name=start
 
 	[message]
 		description=Elyssa
-		message= _ "I have learned a lot about the trolls in my time here, and yet there's so much more to learn. Their magic is amazing. Have you seen their shamans? They make fire with their bare hands. They are very interested in my magic and they have offered to teach me how they create fire. I thought I was one of the last people still practicing magic, who knew I would find trolls still teaching it deep under the earth? There is just so much that I can learn from the them, I can't leave now."
+		message= _ "I have learned a lot about the trolls in my time here, and yet there's so much more to learn. Their magic is amazing. Have you seen their shamans? They make fire with their bare hands. They are very interested in my magic and they have offered to teach me how they create fire. I thought I was one of the last people still practicing magic, who knew I would find trolls still teaching it deep under the earth? There is just so much that I can learn from them, I can't leave now."
 	[/message]
 
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data/campaigns/Under_the_Burning_Suns/scenarios/8_Frying_Pan.cfg

@@ -4539,7 +4539,7 @@ message= _ "Watch what?"
 [message]
 description=Keratur
 image=portraits/uncloaked.png
-message= _ "They brought some humans, bound up tight. So beautiful...she had flaming red hair...they cut her...I can still her screaming. But that was only the beginning. They chanted words of power, and spilled the hot blood onto the sand and then I heard their screams of agony and pain..."
+message= _ "They brought some humans, bound up tight. So beautiful...she had flaming red hair...they cut her...I can still hear her screaming. But that was only the beginning. They chanted words of power, and spilled the hot blood onto the sand and then I heard their screams of agony and pain..."
 [/message]
 
 [message]
@@ -5250,7 +5250,7 @@ time=100
 
 	[message]
 		description=Sergeant Durstrag
-		message= _ "Oh they're no need to explain, it's pretty obvious what you're up to. Here we have a whole legion of elves, consorting with trolls, sneaking up behind our defenses. This looks an awful lot like an invasion to me."
+		message= _ "Oh there is no need to explain, it's pretty obvious what you're up to. Here we have a whole legion of elves, consorting with trolls, sneaking up behind our defenses. This looks an awful lot like an invasion to me."
 	[/message]
 
 	[/then]
@@ -5576,7 +5576,7 @@ first_time_only=no
 
 	[message]
 	description=Nym
-	message= _ "Anyway you've really gotten us into a mess. The good news is that the outpost isn't guarded as heavily as you might think. The garrison seems only the half-manned. They obviously didn't expect any serious attack to come from this direction."
+	message= _ "Anyway you've really gotten us into a mess. The good news is that the outpost isn't guarded as heavily as you might think. The garrison seems only half-manned. They obviously didn't expect any serious attack to come from this direction."
 	[/message]
 
 	[message]
@@ -5715,7 +5715,7 @@ first_time_only=no
 
 		[message]
 		description=Undead Emissary
-		message= _ "Cursed Elves, you tracked your filth through our halls and you defiled our sanctuary. Your have besmirched our honor, and we will have our revenge. We are the order of the crimson talon, and even death shall not stop us. You shall rue the day that you ever trespassed into out lair!"
+		message= _ "Cursed Elves, you tracked your filth through our halls and you defiled our sanctuary. You have besmirched our honor, and we will have our revenge. We are the order of the crimson talon, and even death shall not stop us. You shall rue the day that you ever trespassed into out lair!"
 		[/message]
 
 		[kill]
@@ -6096,7 +6096,7 @@ message= _ "The rest of the humans are fleeing."
 
 [message]
 description=Kaleh
-message= _ "Let them go. We have won this battle and I weary of all this bloodshed."
+message= _ "Let them go. We have won this battle and I am weary of all this bloodshed."
 [/message]
 
 [message]

data/campaigns/Under_the_Burning_Suns/scenarios/9_Water.cfg

@@ -346,11 +346,11 @@ victory_when_enemies_defeated=no
 	[/part]
 
 	[part]
-	story= _ "Just then we crested over the last dune and I indeed saw what she meant. Sparkling blue everywhere covering the entire horizon. I feel to my knees in awe, I had never seen so much water I one place. I cannot write down in words the awe and amazement I felt. To have grown up in a land where water was a precious as gold, and then see miles and miles of it. It was only then that I understood where the merfolk truly came from. I'd been to some strange places, high up in the mountains, deep down under thousands of tons of rock, but this ocean of water was the most alien to me."
+	story= _ "Just then we crested over the last dune and I indeed saw what she meant. Sparkling blue everywhere covering the entire horizon. I fell to my knees in awe, I had never seen so much water in one place. I cannot write down in words the awe and amazement I felt. To have grown up in a land where water was as precious as gold, and then see miles and miles of it. It was only then that I understood where the merfolk truly came from. I'd been to some strange places, high up in the mountains, deep down under thousands of tons of rock, but this ocean of water was the most alien to me."
 	[/part]
 
 	[part]
-	story= _ "Which brings me to the other alien concept I was trying to figure out, our goddess Eloh. What was her plan? Why did she want me to surrender to the humans? Did the humans worship her as well? The humans seems so brutish and vile, that I can't imagine them worshipping the same god. I thought Eloh was just our god, I don't remember Zhul mentioning any other races worshipping her during the Golden age, though perhaps things have changed. Her commands don't make any sense; she doesn't seem at all like the goddess Zhul told me about. And what was Esanoo talking about? How did his master know about 'Yechnagoth' and 'Yanqui'? If Eloh won't help me, then I really need some answers. I pray to whatever gods may be left that I'm not leading my people into a trap..."
+	story= _ "Which brings me to the other alien concept I was trying to figure out, our goddess Eloh. What was her plan? Why did she want me to surrender to the humans? Did the humans worship her as well? The humans seem so brutish and vile, that I can't imagine them worshipping the same god. I thought Eloh was just our god, I don't remember Zhul mentioning any other races worshipping her during the Golden age, though perhaps things have changed. Her commands don't make any sense; she doesn't seem at all like the goddess Zhul told me about. And what was Esanoo talking about? How did his master know about 'Yechnagoth' and 'Yanqui'? If Eloh won't help me, then I really need some answers. I pray to whatever gods may be left that I'm not leading my people into a trap..."
 	[/part]
 [/story]
 
@@ -741,7 +741,7 @@ name=start
 [message]
 	description=Kaleh
 	image=portraits/kaleh.png
-	message= _ "Now that we're down off the hills, you can't even see all that water, it's hidden by the trees. I never thought so would see so many trees in one place."
+	message= _ "Now that we're down off the hills, you can't even see all that water, it's hidden by the trees. I never thought I would see so many trees in one place."
 [/message]
 
 [message]
@@ -801,7 +801,7 @@ name=start
 
 [message]
 	description=Esanoo
-	message= _ "We originally numbered much more, but we were ambushed by a band of naga on the way here. Half of our force stayed to hold off the naga while the of us fled. By the time we got to these shores, there were only five others left. But for the grace of the Sea God's I managed to hide when the rest of my group was ambushed and captured. I doubt that they have been broken yet, but I do not know how long they can last. Remember, without three of my people, you will not be able to find my master."
+	message= _ "We originally numbered much more, but we were ambushed by a band of naga on the way here. Half of our force stayed to hold off the naga while the rest of us fled. By the time we got to these shores, there were only five others left. But for the grace of the Sea God's I managed to hide when the rest of my group was ambushed and captured. I doubt that they have been broken yet, but I do not know how long they can last. Remember, without three of my people, you will not be able to find my master."
 [/message]
 
 [message]