DiD S11: tweak dialogue

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nemaara 2019-11-05 03:37:33 -05:00
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{STORYTXT_BACKGROUND book.jpg}
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "Malin closes the book. After all this time and all that he has struggled for, could he just surrender to despair and perish? Could he... would he just give up, just like that? Still, the words, that terrifying idea, stick in the back of his mind. Life has offered him nothing; could death be any worse? Death... and not rebirth, but undeath."
story= _ "Malin closes the book. After all this time and all that he has struggled for, could he just surrender to despair and perish? He has never been one to simply give up, but then, is there anything left for him to struggle for? Still, the words, that terrifying idea, stick in the back of his mind. Life has offered him nothing; could death be any worse? Death... and not rebirth, but undeath."
{STORYTXT_BACKGROUND book.jpg}
[/part]
[part]
@ -476,14 +476,9 @@
{MODIFY_UNIT role=advisor facing se}
[delay]
time=250
time=1500
[/delay]
[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "Im ready. Do it."
[/message]
[animate_unit]
flag=attack
hits=yes
@ -866,7 +861,7 @@
[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "I remember a time when I thought skeletons were repulsive, sickening things. I suppose it is only natural for the living to fear the most prominent figure of death. Even if I grew out of such a naive thought... I suppose I could not have expected Drogan and Dela to follow suit so easily. My family and friends, yes, but they were nothing but simpletons. Would that they had tried to understand me instead of shunning me outright."
message= _ "I remember a time when I thought skeletons were repulsive, sickening things. I suppose its only natural for the living to fear the most prominent figure of death. Even if I grew out of such a naive thought... I suppose I couldnt have expected Drogan and Dela to follow suit so easily. My family and friends, yes, but they were nothing but simpletons. If only they had tried to understand me instead of shunning me outright."
[/message]
[message]
@ -1074,17 +1069,17 @@
[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "The soul. Dela always said I was a creature without a soul. I suppose she was jesting at the time, but perhaps not after I killed Drogan."
message= _ "The soul. Dela always said I was a creature without a soul. I suppose she was jesting at the time, but maybe not after I killed Drogan."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "Bah! Two can play that game. I have only ever fought to protect my people and my family, but the only thing I received in return was scorn and exile. My own sister would not listen to me. My people would rather feed themselves to orcs than follow my sorcerous ways. Drogan, Dela... all of them! They are the ones without souls, not me!"
message= _ "Bah! I dont deserve this, and I certainly dont answer to someone like her. I have only ever fought to protect my people and my family, but the only thing I received in return was scorn and exile. My own sister thought I was a monster for using my power to save our town. My people would rather feed themselves to orcs than follow my sorcerous ways. Drogan, Dela... all of them! They are the ones without souls, not me!"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "I should not really care anymore. According to them, I have forsaken my soul already. So what does it matter?"
message= _ "I should not really care anymore. I dont care anymore. According to them, I have forsaken my soul already. So what does it matter?"
[/message]
[message]
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[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "I feel an aching in my bones, as if my joints are about to fall apart."
message= _ "I feel an aching in my bones, as if they are crumbling inside me."
[/message]
[/event]
[event]
@ -1257,7 +1252,7 @@
[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "Cold... its so very cold. Not a biting chill, but a numbness, an emptiness, as if there is nothing left inside of me..."
message= _ "Cold... its so very cold. Not a biting chill, but a numbness, an emptiness that eats at me from within..."
[/message]
[/event]
@ -1972,7 +1967,7 @@
[/message]
[/event]
# small flavor events
# small flavor events
[event]
name=attack
[filter]
@ -2032,7 +2027,26 @@
[message]
speaker=Mal Keshar
message= _ "Dela used to be afraid of spiders. Imagine if I showed her something like this..."
message= _ "Dela used to be afraid of spiders. Imagine if she saw something like this..."
[/message]
[/event]
[event]
name=die
[filter]
type=Giant Spider
[/filter]
[filter_condition]
[variable]
name=scenario_stage
numerical_equals=2
[/variable]
[/filter_condition]
# a little bit of breaking the fourth wall
[message]
speaker=Mal Keshar
message= _ "For a moment, I was a little worried there. To have come so far and conquered death... only to be slain by an oversized arachnid! What a tale that would be."
[/message]
[/event]
@ -2456,7 +2470,6 @@
[message]
speaker=narrator
message= _ "Mal Keshar drinks the potion and feels energy flow through his skeletal form. The power of death surges in his vacant body, threatening to overflow, to burst free, but at the last moment, he reins it in. The stream of magic trickles down to drops, diminished, tempered, but manageable."
image=wesnoth-icon.png
[/message]
# reward: +1 RANGED DMG
@ -2524,7 +2537,6 @@
Unmasked by a lick of flame,
Transmuted by the altar of darkness
Into pitch black shadow.</i>"
image=wesnoth-icon.png
[/message]
[fire_event]
name=potion text
@ -2753,7 +2765,6 @@ Into pitch black shadow.</i>"
[message]
speaker=narrator
message= _ "Ash swirls upward, charred remnants of the once living. Charcoal from bone, embers from flesh, he consumes the pallid cinders, siphoning away the energy with a draining touch."
image=wesnoth-icon.png
[/message]
# reward: +2 MELEE DMG
@ -2811,7 +2822,6 @@ Reside outside their coffin, locked away,
In eternal wakefulness.
Then, the key is found and the lid opened,
And the tongue of fire begets ashen repose.</i>"
image=wesnoth-icon.png
[/message]
[/event]
@ -3130,7 +3140,7 @@ And the tongue of fire begets ashen repose.</i>"
[message]
speaker=Mal Keshar
message= _ "Peasant, warrior, king or emperor, all living things are the subjects of death. Eternity will claim your soul as its own if I do not."
message= _ "Peasant, warrior, king, and emperor, all living things are the subjects of death. Eternity will claim your soul as its own if I do not."
[/message]
[/event]
@ -3377,7 +3387,7 @@ And the tongue of fire begets ashen repose.</i>"
[message]
speaker=Mal Keshar
message= _ "There are many corpses around here. I can use them to my advantage."
message= _ "There are many corpses around here. I can put them to use."
[/message]
[/event]
@ -3426,7 +3436,7 @@ And the tongue of fire begets ashen repose.</i>"
[message]
speaker=Xanthric
message= _ "<i>I feel... so... cold...</i>"
message= _ "<i>Its... so... cold...</i>"
[/message]
[kill]
@ -3577,7 +3587,7 @@ And the tongue of fire begets ashen repose.</i>"
[message]
speaker=Mal Keshar
message= _ "Excellent! My will is even strong enough to conquer a dragon. None can stand against me any longer! To those who cursed me prior: I spit at thee! For I am Mal Keshar the Damned, spurned by all men, forsaken by all who live and draw breath! I laugh, for now, you are all naught but remains and dust, and I live on, alone..."
message= _ "Excellent! My will is even strong enough to conquer a dragon. None can stand against me any longer! To those who cursed me prior, I spit at thee! For I am Mal Keshar the Damned, he who is spurned by all who live and draw breath! I laugh, for now, you are all naught but remains and dust, and I live on, alone..."
[/message]
[endlevel]