DiD S12: touch up dialogue

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nemaara 2019-11-06 14:34:12 -05:00
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story= _ "He needs none. Philosophy only begets misery. Violence and savagery have been the essence of his existence, the forces that once controlled his life, the ones unrelinquished in undeath. Better to simply kill without deliberation, for what use is there to dwell on any alternative? He has never been one for regrets."
story= _ "He needs none. Philosophy only begets misery. Violence and savagery have always been the essence of his existence, a conviction that he has only embraced more wholly in undeath. Better to simply kill without deliberation, without consideration. He has never been one for regrets."
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{VARIABLE_CONDITIONAL timesForever greater_than 2}
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story= _ "The book still sits on a dusty shelf in Mal Keshars keep, untended and untouched, but constantly plaguing the forefront of the lichs mind."
story= _ "The book still sits on a dusty shelf in Mal Keshars keep, untended and untouched, but constantly plaguing his mind."
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story= _ "If he allowed a foolish hero to take a copy of the book, would others eventually follow in his footsteps? Would the authors plan actually work, or would people continue to view necromancy as only a corrupting power? One voice tells him that being accepted by society should not be of any concern to him. Another says that it would not harm him to try. He does not come to any conclusions, but a slightly embellished copy of the tome sits there in his lair, waiting to be taken."
story= _ "If he allowed a foolish hero to take a copy of the book, would others eventually follow in his footsteps? Would the authors plan actually work, or would people continue to view necromancy as only a corrupting power? One voice tells him that being accepted by society should not be of any concern to him. Another says that it would not hurt to try. He does not come to any conclusions, but a slightly embellished copy of the tome sits there in his lair, waiting to be taken."
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{STARTING_VILLAGES 1 15}
# ability macros
{DID_SOUL_EATER1}
{DID_SOUL_EATER2}
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story= _ "Retreating outside the cave, the foolish hero tried to destroy the book. None of the attempts left so much as a single dent or char, yet each one caused another scream to echo from the cave mouth. Eventually, the cave entrance collapsed, and everything was still. Satisfied, and slightly intrigued, the foolish hero left the ruined lair behind, book stowed away safely — and secretly — in his pack."
story= _ "Retreating outside the cave, the foolish hero tried to destroy the book. None of the attempts left so much as a single dent or char, yet each one caused another scream to echo from the cave mouth. Eventually, the cave entrance collapsed, and everything was still. Satisfied, the foolish hero left the ruined lair behind, book stowed away safely — and secretly — in his pack."
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[message]
role=speakinghero
message= _ "It matters not. He embraced death over life, and thus relinquished his right to our mercy. Let us return home; the town will need us to help defend against the orcish raids."
message= _ "It matters not. He embraced death over life, and thus relinquished his right to mercy. Let us return home; the town will need us to defend against the orcish raids."
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[message]
role=speakinghero
message= _ "It is done. He will trouble us no more."
message= _ "Its done. Hell trouble us no more."
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role=speakinghero
message= _ "Probably. Anyway, there is no use in dwelling upon one so wicked. Let us go."
message= _ "Probably. Anyway, theres no use in dwelling upon one so wicked. Lets go."
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