SoF Proofread Pass and Campaign Prose edits (#6177)
* SoF Proofread Pass and Campaign Prose edits This is a proofread pass. But this also has edits that are more than just minor edits which try to improve the campaign text. commit * SoF Proofread Second Draft This is a changelog relative to the first draft: - Fixed up "nor" in S1. - reverted the ellipsis I added to indicate pause in story part of S2. - Reworded my edit in S3 to be closer to the original. - Followed Wedge's suggestion for S4. - S5: Exchanged Shorbear dwarves and elves, removed introductory clause in ln 560, rewording in ln 592. - Reverted my edit in S6. - in S8, converted comma into ellipsis to indicate pause. - S9: Reworded exposition of Thursagan, changed wording in ln1221, changed a period to a semi-colon. * SoF Proofread Third Draft * Update 4t_The_Jeweler.cfg * Update 1_A_Bargain_is_Struck.cfg removed a comma * Update 1_A_Bargain_is_Struck.cfg * More prose edits (SoF) * Update 4t_The_Jeweler.cfg * SoF Proofread Pass edits * Capitalize Sceptre * S5 and S9 small dialog change * S6 change semicolon to period * S9 change semicolon to exclamation
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# the background images are placeholders from the core assets
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[part]
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# wmllint: local spelling Ay
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story= _ "Ay, the Sceptre of Fire. The sceptre has a long, glorious, and fearful history. But I am not here to tell you how the jewel within it was brought over the ocean by Haldric the Great. Nor will I tell the story of Garard I, and the challenge he set, or that of Konrad, King of Wesnoth by virtue of the Sceptre."
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story= _ "Ay, the Sceptre of Fire. The Sceptre has a long, glorious, and fearful history. But I am not here to tell you how the jewel within it was brought over the ocean by Haldric the Great, nor will I tell the story of Garard I and the challenge he set, nor that of Konrad, King of Wesnoth by virtue of the Sceptre."
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background=story/landscape-castle.jpg
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[/part]
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[part]
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Haldric II
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message= _ "Exactly. I want you to craft it into a mighty artifact, that will leverage the stone’s power, but contain it also."
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message= _ "Exactly. I want you to craft it into a mighty artifact that will not only leverage the stone’s power, but contain it also."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Rugnur
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Rugnur
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message= _ "They would refuse to come. You must come into the caves, and go to the city in person, or send a representative."
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message= _ "They would refuse to come. You must come into the caves and go to the city in person, or send a representative."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Haldric II
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Rugnur
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message= _ "I’ll see what I can do. But I will need five thousand silver in advance, to pay for the materials."
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message= _ "I’ll see what I can do. But I will need five thousand silver in advance to pay for the materials."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Haldric II
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message= _ "Very well. I have the silver here, ready to ship, and I will send someone over with the stone itself. He will stay with you as you make the sceptre, and make sure you are going to get it done on time. I expect it done before my reign as king is ended."
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message= _ "Very well. I have the silver here, ready to ship, and I will send someone over with the stone itself. He will stay with you as you make the sceptre, and make sure you get it done on time. I expect it done before my reign as king is ended."
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[/message]
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[unit]
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x,y=10,29
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Glildur
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message= _ "Nevertheless, if you try to move your caravans here you have to pay the toll, or face our wrath!"
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message= _ "Nevertheless, if you try to move your caravans here, you have to pay the toll or face our wrath!"
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Haldric II
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Glildur
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message= _ "I was never among those who agreed to that treaty. Not all of us elves are as low as Kalenz, or make deals with those who betrayed us."
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message= _ "I was never among those who agreed to that treaty. Not all of us elves are as low as Kalenz or make deals with those who betrayed us."
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scroll=no
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[/message]
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[message]
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Rugnur
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message= _ "Very well. Glildur, if the high elvish council has made an alliance with the men, I would advise you to follow it, but not doing so is your choice."
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message= _ "Very well. Glildur, if the high elvish council has made an alliance with these humans, I would advise you to follow it. But not doing so is your choice."
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[/message]
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# to make it very hard for player to just kill the elves
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[unit]
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[/filter]
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[message]
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speaker=Alanin
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message= _ "Here’s the stone, for you dwarves! Now, if you’ll excuse me, I think I’ll be taking refuge here... I don’t much like fighting."
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message= _ "Here’s the stone for you dwarves! Now, if you’ll excuse me, I think I’ll be taking refuge here... I don’t much like fighting."
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[/message]
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[set_variable]
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name=havestone
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Haldric II
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message= _ "That’s a bluff, what sort of reinforcements can this little band of thieves possibly count on?"
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message= _ "That’s a bluff. What sort of reinforcements can this little band of thieves possibly count on?"
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[/message]
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[/event]
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[event]
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Rugnur
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message= _ "We cannot match you above ground, but in the caves we may still defeat you."
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message= _ "We cannot match you above ground, but in the caves, we may still defeat you."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Glildur
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[message]
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speaker=unit
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# wmllint: local spelling Landar
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message=_ "Die, humans, in the name of Landar!"
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message=_ "Die, humans! In the name of Landar!"
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=second_unit
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[message]
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speaker=unit
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message=_ "Die, dwarvish scum, in the name of Landar!"
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message=_ "Die, dwarvish scum! In the name of Landar!"
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=second_unit
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[/filter]
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[message]
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speaker=unit
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message=_ "This gains you nothing, we will not rest!"
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message=_ "This gains you nothing! We will not rest!"
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[/message]
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[store_unit]
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[filter]
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[story]
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[part]
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story= _ "Next in our story, Rugnur retreated into the caves of Knalga. But the elves pressed on, and would enter the caves shortly."
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story= _ "Next in our story, Rugnur retreated into the caves of Knalga. But the elves pressed on and would enter the caves shortly."
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[/part]
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[/story]
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Baglur
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message= _ "Argh! I’m a retired warrior... it looks like I’ll ha’ to come out and help you, else we’ll be overrun by the damn elves... argh again. Well, listen here. This entrance to the city can be closed. There’s a gate. If we can close it, the elves will no’ be able to enter. And you elves; begone from here!"
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message= _ "Argh! I’m a retired warrior... it looks like I’ll ha’ to come out and help you, else we’ll be overrun by the damn elves... argh, again. Well, listen here. This entrance to the city can be closed. There’s a gate. If we can close it, the elves will no’ be able to enter. And you elves; begone from here!"
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Glildur
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Baglur
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message= _ "Och, well, no. Lately trolls have been more in charge of those caves where the glyphs are than we dwarves have."
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message= _ "Och, well, no. Lately, trolls have been more in charge of those caves where the glyphs are than we dwarves have."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Rugnur
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[message]
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speaker=Glildur
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message= _ "Agh! Well, you have defeated me for now, but eventually you will have to exit these caves, to give Haldric back his jewel. And when you do, we will be ready for you."
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message= _ "Agh! Well, you have defeated me for now, but eventually you will have to exit these caves to give Haldric back his jewel. And when you do, we will be ready for you."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Baglur
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[then]
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[message]
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speaker=Rugnur
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message= _ "There are still some elves left in here. We have to eliminate them, too, unless they surrender."
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message= _ "There are still some elves left in here. We have to eliminate them too, unless they surrender."
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[/message]
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[message]
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side=2
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[story]
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[part]
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story= _ "The journey to the far northern wastelands was long and perilous. The tunnels were narrow, but by following the old mining rails, Rugnur and his group could make good time. After a few days journey, they saw a dim red glow in the tunnel ahead, and could feel sporadic vibrations in the rails."
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story= _ "The journey to the far northern wastelands was long and perilous. The tunnels were narrow, but by following the old mining rails, Rugnur and his group could make good time. After a few days journey, they saw a dim red glow in the tunnel ahead and could feel sporadic vibrations in the rails."
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[/part]
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[part]
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story= _ "As the group got near the source of the glow, they heard metallic banging and guttural shouting, and their noses were assaulted by a fetid smell..."
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[/filter]
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[message]
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speaker=Bragdash
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message= _ "Arg, I never should’a come to this stinkin’ cathole!"
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message= _ "Argh, I never should’a come to this stinkin’ cathole!"
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[/message]
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[/event]
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story= _ "It was a couple more weeks of marching along the tracks before a chill breeze touched Rugnur’s group, washing over them from a side tunnel leading up to the surface. Had they reached the Northlands?"
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[/part]
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[part]
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story= _ "Much to his chagrin, Alanin was dispatched to scout further up the rails, but he soon came back and claimed the rails ended, the main tunnel was unfinished to the north. For this reason, Rugnur lead the dwarves up the cold passage, and began to search for the runesmith named Thursagan. Thursagan, the Sage of Fire."
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story= _ "Much to his chagrin, Alanin was dispatched to scout further up the rails, but he soon came back and claimed the rails ended — the main tunnel was unfinished to the north. For this reason, Rugnur led the dwarves up the cold passage and began to search for the runesmith named Thursagan. Thursagan, the Sage of Fire."
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[/part]
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[/story]
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[message]
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speaker=Krawg
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message= _ "Yes...
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<i>(Quickly shifts gaze to nearby woods, adopts a hostile stance, then glances back to the dwarves.)</i>"
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<i>(Quickly shifts gaze to nearby woods, adopts a hostile stance, then glances back at the dwarves.)</i>"
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Baglur
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Baglur
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message= _ "He doesn’t want to talk to the gryphons, apparently. I think we’ll have to get someone there he will talk to..."
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message= _ "He doesn’t want to talk to gryphons, apparently. I think we’ll have to get someone there he will talk to..."
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[/message]
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[/if]
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[/filter]
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speaker=Rugnur
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message= _ "Well, now we reached the caves again! Come on, back south, to the city."
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message= _ "Well, we can finally get back in our caves — away from these trolls and ogres! Come on, let’s head back south, to the city."
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[/message]
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{MAKE_LOYAL_NORMAL Baglur}
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{CLEAR_VARIABLE thur_x,thur_y}
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Durstorn
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message= _ "What? You mean you found Thursagan and got him to return with you? Astounding! But what is that gryphon doing there?"
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message= _ "What? You mean you found Thursagan and got him to return with you? Astounding! But what is that gryphon doing here?"
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[/message]
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speaker=Baglur
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message= _ "Yes, we did. And that is Krawg, who helped us in the Northlands."
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message= _ "Yes, we did get Thursagan to come along. And that is Krawg, who helped us in the Northlands."
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speaker=Krawg
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[/recall]
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[message]
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message= _ "Well, these are the eastern mines. Trolls and ogres live here, be prepared to fight them; also be prepared to spend quite some time here — mining can take a while."
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message= _ "Well, these are the eastern mines. Trolls and ogres live here, be prepared to fight them; also, be prepared to spend quite some time here — mining can take a while."
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message= _ "For me to make the artifact Haldric wants, I need a special type of gold. I do not know where it was found, but Baglur said these mines were the source of it."
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message= _ "For me to make the artifact Haldric wants, I need a special type of gold. I know not exactly where it can be found, but Baglur said these mines were the source of it."
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message= _ "Here is some of the coal that we need! Bring the miners to take it!"
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message= _ "Here is some of the coal that we need! Send a miner here to take it!"
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[allow_undo][/allow_undo]
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message= _ "Here is the mine of precious gold! Send the miners this way."
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message= _ "Here is the mine of precious gold! Send a miner here to take it!"
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#dialogue starts
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message= _ "So, you have returned. I assume you have obtained the required materials? My jeweler Theganli has spent great time and expense buying jewels from some of the northern clans. So now go to the forge and make your sceptre. What do you need to annoy me for?"
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message= _ "So, you have returned. I assume you have obtained the required materials? My jeweler Theganli has spent great time and expense buying jewels from some of the northern clans. Now go to the forge and make your sceptre. What do you need to annoy me for?"
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message= _ "Well... Maybe you can ask the Shorbear clan? They have good tools... Chisels and grit of some rare mineral, I don’t know what it is or how they got it, but their work is well known among us gem crafters."
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message= _ "Well... Maybe you can ask the Shorbear clan? They have good tools... chisels made of some rare mineral. I don’t know what mineral it is or how they got it, but their work is well known among us gem crafters."
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message= _ "We can’t just go in there and take their property. We’ll have to buy, or rent, it from them."
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message= _ "We can’t just go in there and take their property. We’ll have to buy or rent it from them."
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message= _ "We can’t just go in there and take their property. We’ll have to buy, or rent, it from them."
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message= {WHISPER _"Bah! Getting this cut isn’t worth that much; what with Rugnur’s mistake earlier, and all the other expenses, if we pay more than a thousand we’ll barely even make a profit!"}
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message= {WHISPER _"Bah! Getting this cut isn’t worth that much — what with Rugnur’s mistake earlier, and all the other expenses. If we pay more than a thousand, we’ll barely even make a profit!"}
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message= _ "Krah!"
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message= _ "Suddenly, the air was filled with the cries of another gryphon responding to Krawg’s call. The dwarves heard the flaps of wings and looked up to the sky to see another gryphon arriving."
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message= _ "A brave dwarf ran out, grabbed a friendly gryphon by the sturdy neck-feathers, and hauled himself up over its back. The big animal took it all in stride, and seemed to understand what the pats and strokes of the dwarf’s hands meant."
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message= _ "A brave dwarf ran out, grabbed it by the sturdy neck-feathers, and hauled himself up over its back. The big animal was friendly, took it all in stride, and seemed to understand what the pats and strokes of the dwarf’s hands meant."
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message= _ "How about this — We defeat these crazed cave-dwellers, then you keep the spoils and their territory and we keep the ruby?"
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message= _ "How about this — we defeat these crazed cave-dwellers, then you keep the spoils and their territory, and we keep the ruby?"
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||||
speaker=Thursagan
|
||||
message= _ "Don’t be a fool! We can’t take the elves, and it was a mistake to attack these dwarves, but if we have to fight we should retreat once we get what we came for, the tools!"
|
||||
message= _ "Don’t be a fool! We can’t take the elves, and it was a mistake to attack these dwarves, but if we have to fight, we should retreat once we get what we came for, the tools!"
|
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[/message]
|
||||
|
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{VARIABLE elves_come yes}
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[/kill]
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[message]
|
||||
speaker=Durstorn
|
||||
message= _ "Ha! Now we can get those tools easily, and go back to our own caves."
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||||
message= _ "Ha! Now we can easily take their tools back to our own caves."
|
||||
[/message]
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||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Thursagan
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||||
|
|
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[/message]
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||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Durstorn
|
||||
message= _ "You are right... well, we will be able to break out eventually, and while we’re here, we’ll be able to finally make the sceptre."
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||||
message= _ "I'm aware! Close the gates and keep them out! It should be easy to come up with a plan to outwit them later. Meanwhile, since the Shorbear's rune workshops are in here, you and your runecrafters might as well make the sceptre now."
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[/message]
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[if]
|
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[have_unit]
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[then]
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[message]
|
||||
speaker=Thursagan
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||||
message= _ "Well, back to the battle — we are all in the caves, but there are still enemies in here also!"
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||||
message= _ "Well, back to the battle — all of us are already inside, but there are still some enemy forces in here with us!"
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||||
[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Durstorn
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[else]
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[message]
|
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speaker=Thursagan
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||||
message= _ "We have driven all of the dwarves and elves out of these caves. They are not ours, though, and we can’t stay here forever."
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||||
message= _ "We have driven all of the elves and Shorbear dwarves out of these caves. They are not ours, though, and we can’t stay here forever."
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[/message]
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[message]
|
||||
speaker=Durstorn
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||||
message= _ "True. I suspect these elves will try to besiege us here."
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||||
message= _ "True. I suspect these elves will try to besiege us."
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||||
[/message]
|
||||
[endlevel]
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result=victory
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[else]
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[message]
|
||||
speaker=Thursagan
|
||||
message= _ "Well, back to the battle — we need everyone to get into the Shorbear caves. And then stop any enemies from coming in here."
|
||||
message= _ "Well, back to the battle — we need to get everyone into the Shorbear caves before we can close the gates."
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||||
[/message]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Durstorn
|
||||
|
|
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|
|||
[else]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Durstorn
|
||||
message= _ "We have driven all of the dwarves and elves out of these caves! Now, seal the gates!"
|
||||
message= _ "We have driven all of the elves and Shorbear dwarves out of these caves! Now, seal the gates!"
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
{SOF_S5_GATES}
|
||||
[endlevel]
|
||||
|
|
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|
|||
[else]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Durstorn
|
||||
message= _ "We have driven all of the dwarves and elves out of these caves! Now, seal the gates!"
|
||||
message= _ "We have driven all of the elves and Shorbear dwarves out of these caves! Now, seal the gates!"
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
{SOF_S5_GATES}
|
||||
[endlevel]
|
||||
|
|
@ -832,7 +837,7 @@
|
|||
[else]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Durstorn
|
||||
message= _ "We have driven all of the dwarves and elves out of these caves! Now, seal the gates!"
|
||||
message= _ "We have driven all of the elves and Shorbear dwarves out of these caves! Now, seal the gates!"
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
{SOF_S5_GATES}
|
||||
[endlevel]
|
||||
|
|
|
|||
|
|
@ -167,7 +167,7 @@
|
|||
story= _ "The dwarves were besieged by the elves for several months, as there was no way out of the caverns other than above ground. But the elves could not enter the Shorbear hold, for the sturdy dwarven gates were closed."
|
||||
[/part]
|
||||
[part]
|
||||
story= _ "During this time, Thursagan crafted the Sceptre of Fire, cutting the ruby himself with the Shorbear tools. Eventually the sceptre was crafted, but something was not right, no matter what enchantment of runes Thursagan used. To finish the sceptre, the dwarves needed to leave the cave."
|
||||
story= _ "During this time, Thursagan crafted the Sceptre of Fire, cutting the ruby himself with the Shorbear tools. Eventually, the sceptre was crafted, but something was not right no matter what enchantment of runes Thursagan used. To finish the sceptre, the dwarves needed to leave the cave."
|
||||
[/part]
|
||||
[/story]
|
||||
|
||||
|
|
@ -284,7 +284,7 @@
|
|||
#dialogue starts
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Rugnur
|
||||
message= _ "Well, Thursagan has reached a conclusion. He can’t make the sceptre with the materials he has here, but he has the final plans for it, and all the jewels and gold he needs. Shouldn’t we leave now?"
|
||||
message= _ "Well, Thursagan has reached a conclusion. He can’t finish the sceptre with the materials he has here, but he has the final plans for it, and all the jewels and gold he needs. Shouldn’t we leave now?"
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Durstorn
|
||||
|
|
@ -573,7 +573,7 @@
|
|||
[then]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Rugnur
|
||||
message= _ "Alanin, ride south as fast as you can. Tell Haldric we are heading northeast, towards the old eastern mines, and if he wants his precious sceptre he should send forces to meet us there as soon as he can!"
|
||||
message= _ "Alanin, ride south as fast as you can. Tell Haldric we are heading northeast, towards the old eastern mines. And if he wants his precious sceptre, he should send forces to meet us there as soon as he can!"
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
[store_unit]
|
||||
[filter]
|
||||
|
|
@ -588,7 +588,7 @@
|
|||
[else]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Alanin
|
||||
message= _ "I have made it past those elves, but they will chase me, and elvish horses are faster than mine."
|
||||
message= _ "I have made it past these elves, but they will chase me, and elvish horses are faster than mine."
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
[store_unit]
|
||||
[filter]
|
||||
|
|
@ -627,7 +627,7 @@
|
|||
[/message]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Rugnur
|
||||
message= _ "Tell him to send forces north to aid us and fight the elves, but that we are probably going to die. We will run northeast towards the old eastern mines, and if he wants his sceptre intact he’d best send troops to meet us there."
|
||||
message= _ "Tell him to send forces north to aid us and fight the elves, but that we are probably going to die. We will run northeast towards the old eastern mines. And if he wants his sceptre intact, he’d best send troops to meet us there."
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
[store_unit]
|
||||
[filter]
|
||||
|
|
|
|||
|
|
@ -119,7 +119,7 @@
|
|||
name=start
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Alanin
|
||||
message= _ "Well, the elves are behind me for now, but their riders are fast and will catch up quick."
|
||||
message= _ "Well, the elves are behind me for now, but their riders are fast and will catch up quickly."
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Alanin
|
||||
|
|
@ -385,7 +385,7 @@
|
|||
[/unit]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Rolin # wmllint: ignore
|
||||
message= _ "We will certainly help any warrior of Wesnoth who needs our help!"
|
||||
message= _ "We will certainly help any warrior of Wesnoth in need!"
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
[/event]
|
||||
|
||||
|
|
@ -584,14 +584,14 @@
|
|||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Alanin
|
||||
# po: dragoon = his unit type
|
||||
message= _ "I’m a dragoon, with Haldric II’s personal bodyguard. I was sent on a mission in the Northlands, and now elvish horsemen are chasing me. I barely evaded them."
|
||||
message= _ "I’m a dragoon with Haldric II’s personal bodyguard. I was sent on a mission in the Northlands, and now elvish horsemen are chasing me. I barely evaded them."
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
[/then]
|
||||
[else]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Alanin
|
||||
# po: cavalier = his unit type
|
||||
message= _ "I’m a cavalier, with Haldric II’s personal bodyguard. I was sent on a mission in the Northlands, and now elvish horsemen are chasing me. I barely evaded them."
|
||||
message= _ "I’m a cavalier with Haldric II’s personal bodyguard. I was sent on a mission in the Northlands, and now elvish horsemen are chasing me. I barely evaded them."
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
[/else]
|
||||
[/if]
|
||||
|
|
|
|||
|
|
@ -112,7 +112,7 @@
|
|||
|
||||
[story]
|
||||
[part]
|
||||
story= _ "Thus Alanin escaped from his elvish pursuers. But the dwarves were not so lucky, for the section of the old eastern mines that they reached in their flight had become the lair of the dragon Khrakrahs."
|
||||
story= _ "Thus, Alanin escaped from his elvish pursuers. But the dwarves were not so lucky, for the section of the old eastern mines that they reached in their flight had become the lair of the dragon Khrakrahs."
|
||||
[/part]
|
||||
[/story]
|
||||
|
||||
|
|
@ -419,7 +419,7 @@
|
|||
[/filter_condition]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Khrakrahs
|
||||
message= _ "Stop that! You leave my pets alone!"
|
||||
message= _ "Stop that! Leave my pets alone!"
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
{CLEAR_VARIABLE dragon_sighted}
|
||||
[/event]
|
||||
|
|
@ -513,13 +513,13 @@
|
|||
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Thursagan
|
||||
message= _ "It looks like a forge, heated by the lava. It looks magic, and it looks hot enough to make the Sceptre."
|
||||
message= _ "It looks like a forge, heated by the lava. It also looks enchanted... and hot enough to make the Sceptre."
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
[/then]
|
||||
[else]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=unit
|
||||
message= _ "Look, I’ve found something here. It looks like a forge, heated by the lava. It looks magic, and it looks hot enough to make the sceptre."
|
||||
message= _ "Look, I’ve found something here. It looks like a forge, heated by the lava. It also looks enchanted... and hot enough to make the sceptre."
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
[/else]
|
||||
[/if]
|
||||
|
|
@ -612,7 +612,7 @@
|
|||
[/message]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Rugnur
|
||||
message= _ "Good! Now, let’s get out of this cave, before the elves, dwarves or lizards kill us all!"
|
||||
message= _ "Good! Now, let’s get out of this cave, before the elves, dwarves or wyrms kill us all!"
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
|
||||
[endlevel]
|
||||
|
|
|
|||
|
|
@ -462,7 +462,7 @@
|
|||
[/message]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Gathor
|
||||
message= _ "Nothing!? Even this magical piece of crap lets me down!"
|
||||
message= _ "Nothing!? Even this magical piece of troll dung lets me down!"
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=narrator
|
||||
|
|
@ -1069,15 +1069,16 @@
|
|||
[/message]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Thursagan
|
||||
message= _ "Look up, if this were a normal volcano, you’d see stars and sky. Instead, there’s a high ceiling, shaped like a cone. At the center of this chamber, we’ll find what is holding back the lava flow, and there lies our chance."
|
||||
message= _ "Look up! if this were a normal volcano, you’d see stars and sky. Instead, there’s a high ceiling, shaped like a cone. This means that something must be holding back the volcano’s lava flow. This thing, if it exists, could be our chance to trigger an eruption. The first place I would consider investigating would be the center of this chamber."
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Rugnur
|
||||
message= _ "I see, yes. Quite a gamble, yet what choice do we have? We will continue to explore until we find it."
|
||||
message= _ "I see, yes. Quite a gamble, yet what choice do we have? Let’s explore and hope we find something like what you describe."
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Krawg
|
||||
message= _ "Krah!"
|
||||
message= _ "Krah!
|
||||
<i>(Looks about the cave, adopts a hostile stance, then glances back at the dwarves.)</i>"
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Thursagan
|
||||
|
|
@ -1219,11 +1220,11 @@
|
|||
[/filter]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=unit
|
||||
message= _ "This must be the center of the volcano! It’s plugged up with this enchanted courtyard?"
|
||||
message= _ "This must be the center of the volcano! The lava is blocked just as you surmised, Thursagan! It’s plugged up with this... enchanted courtyard?"
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Thursagan
|
||||
message= _ "Aye, it is, we need to break the enchantment somehow."
|
||||
message= _ "Aye, it is enchanted; I can tell by those runes. We need to break the enchantment somehow."
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
[/event]
|
||||
|
||||
|
|
@ -1237,7 +1238,7 @@
|
|||
[/filter]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=unit
|
||||
message= _ "It’s very hot here, above the lava. This bridge also seems rather delicate, I’d better not loiter here."
|
||||
message= _ "It’s very hot here, above the lava. This bridge also seems rather delicate — I’d better not loiter here."
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
[/event]
|
||||
|
||||
|
|
|
|||
|
|
@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
|
|||
|
||||
[story]
|
||||
[part]
|
||||
story= _ "And thus Rugnur died a glorious death, in the eyes of the dwarven sages — and with him, Thursagan, greatest of the Runesmiths, whose legacy was soon lost. But our tale is not yet complete. For Alanin lived still, as did Krawg the Gryphon."
|
||||
story= _ "And thus, in the eyes of the dwarven sages, Rugnur died a glorious death — and with him, Thursagan, greatest of the Runesmiths, whose legacy was soon lost. But our tale is not yet complete. For Alanin lived still, as did Krawg the Gryphon."
|
||||
music=the_king_is_dead.ogg
|
||||
[/part]
|
||||
[part]
|
||||
|
|
@ -143,7 +143,7 @@
|
|||
[/message]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Alanin
|
||||
message= _ "My Lord, the dwarves lead by Rugnur are dead, slain by fire and smoke as lava poured out of one of the mountains. I saw the eruption from afar as I was returning to you."
|
||||
message= _ "My Lord, the dwarves led by Rugnur are dead, slain by fire and smoke as lava poured out of one of the mountains. I saw the eruption from afar as I was returning to you."
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Haldric II
|
||||
|
|
@ -211,7 +211,7 @@
|
|||
[/message]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=narrator
|
||||
message= _ "Krawg reached over his back with his beak, and brought out a scorched parchment, which he dropped at the feet of the king."
|
||||
message= _ "Krawg reached over his back with his beak and brought out a scorched parchment, which he dropped at the feet of the king."
|
||||
[/message]
|
||||
[message]
|
||||
speaker=Alanin
|
||||
|
|
|
|||
|
|
@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
|
|||
{AMLA_DEFAULT}
|
||||
cost=24
|
||||
usage=scout
|
||||
description= _ "Cave Wyrms are strange beasts, basically stout serpents with wings, but no legs. They are relatively rare, and their presence is attributed to some eccentric wizard or dragon. Mature Wyrms have excellent control of their fire breath attack, as if they are themselves miniature dragons."
|
||||
description= _ "Cave Wyrms are strange beasts, stout serpents with wings, but no legs. They are relatively rare, and their presence is attributed to some eccentric wizard or dragon. Mature Wyrms have excellent control of their fire breath attack, as if they are themselves miniature dragons."
|
||||
die_sound=bat-flapping.wav
|
||||
undead_variation=drake
|
||||
|
||||
|
|
|
|||
|
|
@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
|
|||
advances_to=Cave Wyrm
|
||||
cost=13
|
||||
usage=scout
|
||||
description= _ "Cave Wyrms are strange beasts, basically stout serpents with wings, but no legs. They are relatively rare, and their presence is attributed to some eccentric wizard or dragon. The young are small, but hungry and aggressive."
|
||||
description= _ "Cave Wyrms are strange beasts, stout serpents with wings, but no legs. They are relatively rare, and their presence is attributed to some eccentric wizard or dragon. The young are small, but hungry and aggressive."
|
||||
die_sound=bat-flapping.wav
|
||||
undead_variation=drake
|
||||
|
||||
|
|
|
|||
|
|
@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
|
|||
{AMLA_DEFAULT}
|
||||
cost=24
|
||||
usage=scout
|
||||
description= _ "Red Wyrms are strange beasts, basically stout serpents with wings, but no legs. Their skin is red and rock-like, impervious to fire but more brittle than regular scales or any other lizard armor. They are relatively rare, and their presence is attributed to some eccentric wizard or dragon. Mature Wyrms have excellent control of their fire breath attack, as if they are themselves miniature dragons."
|
||||
description= _ "Red Wyrms are strange beasts, stout serpents with wings, but no legs. Their skin is red and rock-like, impervious to fire but more brittle than regular scales or any other lizard armor. They are relatively rare, and their presence is attributed to some eccentric wizard or dragon. Mature Wyrms have excellent control of their fire breath attack, as if they are themselves miniature dragons."
|
||||
die_sound=bat-flapping.wav
|
||||
undead_variation=drake
|
||||
|
||||
|
|
|
|||
|
|
@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
|
|||
advances_to=Red Wyrm
|
||||
cost=13
|
||||
usage=scout
|
||||
description= _ "Red Wyrms are strange beasts, basically stout serpents with wings, but no legs, and their skin is like some reddish rock. The rocky skin seems to protect them from fire, but is quite brittle. They are relatively rare, and their presence is attributed to some eccentric wizard or dragon. The young are small, but hungry and aggressive."
|
||||
description= _ "Red Wyrms are strange beasts, stout serpents with wings, but no legs, and their skin is like some reddish rock. The rocky skin seems to protect them from fire, but is quite brittle. They are relatively rare, and their presence is attributed to some eccentric wizard or dragon. The young are small, but hungry and aggressive."
|
||||
die_sound=bat-flapping.wav
|
||||
undead_variation=drake
|
||||
|
||||
|
|
|
|||
|
|
@ -321,7 +321,7 @@
|
|||
)}
|
||||
[/option]
|
||||
[option]
|
||||
{SOF_RUNIC_OPTION accuracy (_ "Accuracy") (_ "Increases ranged weapon accuracy 20%") ("misc/rune_icon.png~BLIT(scenery/summoning-circle5.png~CROP(6,6,60,60),0,0)") 16 (
|
||||
{SOF_RUNIC_OPTION accuracy (_ "Accuracy") (_ "Increases ranged weapon accuracy by 20%") ("misc/rune_icon.png~BLIT(scenery/summoning-circle5.png~CROP(6,6,60,60),0,0)") 16 (
|
||||
[effect]
|
||||
apply_to=attack
|
||||
range=ranged
|
||||
|
|
@ -436,7 +436,7 @@
|
|||
#define SOF_RUNIC_CHEST_ACCURACY X Y
|
||||
{SOF_RUNIC_CHEST_GENERIC (
|
||||
[option]
|
||||
{SOF_RUNIC_OPTION "accuracy" (_ "Accuracy") (_ "Increases ranged weapon accuracy 10%") ("misc/rune_icon.png~BLIT(scenery/summoning-circle5.png~CROP(6,6,60,60),0,0)") 10 (
|
||||
{SOF_RUNIC_OPTION "accuracy" (_ "Accuracy") (_ "Increases ranged weapon accuracy by 10%") ("misc/rune_icon.png~BLIT(scenery/summoning-circle5.png~CROP(6,6,60,60),0,0)") 10 (
|
||||
[effect]
|
||||
apply_to=attack
|
||||
range=ranged
|
||||
|
|
|
|||
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