NR Dialog Rewrite/Edit/Touchup: 2-2 3, 4 (#7663)
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[story]
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[part]
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story= _ "After reaching the dwarvish keep and tending to their wounded, the humans led by Tallin and the dwarves led by Lord Hamel hurried deeper into the caverns for a hasty council."
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story= _ "After reaching the dwarvish keep and tending to their wounded, the humans led by Tallin, and the dwarves led by Lord Hamel, hurried deeper into the caverns for a hasty council."
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[/part]
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[/story]
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[message]
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speaker=Hamel
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message= _ "Oh, there are orcs enough down here, but ye’ll not likely see them; they hide from us like vermin. You see, lad, in these caves there is no more fearsome a foe than a dwarf. Not only do we move through the caves swiftly, but we know them like the backs of our hands. The orcs did indeed manage to swamp our defenses with their sheer numbers all those long years ago, but not before we surprised and slew their leader — the cursed Khazg Black-Tusk. Since then, although the orcs still foul these caves with their stench, their attacks have been uncoordinated and erratic, wi’ the orcs as likely to attack each other as they are to attack us."
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message= _ "Oh, there are orcs enough down here, but ye’ll not likely see them; they hide from us like vermin. You see, lad, in these caves there is no more fearsome a foe than a dwarf. Not only do we move through the caves swiftly, but we know them like the backs of our hands. All those years ago, the orcs did indeed manage to swamp our defenses with their sheer numbers, but not before we surprised and slew their leader — that cursed Khazg Black-Tusk! Since then, although the orcs still foul these caves with their stench, their attacks have been uncoordinated and erratic, wi’ the orcs as likely to attack each other as they are to attack us."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Hamel
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message= _ "In more recent years, however, I ha’ noticed that there have been fewer orcs and more skeletons around. The orcs seem to fear them and shy away from them whenever possible, but their troll allies are another matter. Yon trolls actually seem to take great pleasure out of crushing the skeletons to the dust and sucking any marrow that remains in their bones..."
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message= _ "In more recent years, however, I ha’ noticed that there have been fewer orcs and more skeletons around. The orcs seem to fear them and shy away from them whenever possible, but their troll allies are another matter. Yon trolls actually seem to take great pleasure out of crushing the skeletons to the dust and sucking what marrow remains in their bones."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Tallin
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message= _ "What is the story with those skeletons anyway? They look like they were dwarves when they lived, but now they just seem to be mindless killers, attacking anyone and anything."
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message= _ "What is the story with those skeletons anyway? They look like they were dwarves when they lived, but now they just seem to be mindless killers."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Hamel
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message= _ "In truth, we ha’ no idea. They just started appearing one day some years after we were trapped here — by ones and twos in the beginning, and now by the hordes. We were fair frightened when we first encountered them, but we soon discovered they fell to our hammers just as readily as the orcs fell to our axes. So, it is not their existence I fear — for we have faced far worse trials — but their rising numbers gives cause for worry..."
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message= _ "In truth, we ha’ no idea. They just started appearing one day. They came by ones and twos in the beginning, and now by the hordes. We were fair frightened when we first encountered them, but we soon discovered they fell to our hammers just as readily as the orcs fell to our axes. So, it is not their existence I fear — for we have faced far worse trials — but their rising numbers gives cause for worry..."
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[/message]
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[message]
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[message]
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speaker=Tallin
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message= _ "With all respect, my Lord Hamel, we the people from Dwarven Doors have faced certain death many times now. Rising up against the orcs was said to be certain death. Plunging headfirst into these bleak caves was said to be certain death. If our fate is death then so be it. Until that time comes, my people will fight and I will lead them to fight!"
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message= _ "With all respect, my Lord Hamel, we the people from Dwarven Doors have faced certain death many times now. Rising up against the orcs was said to be certain death. Plunging headfirst into these bleak caves was said to be certain death. If that is our fate, so be it. Until that time comes, I will lead my people to fight for our freedom!"
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[/message]
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[message]
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{GOLD 200 150 100}
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team_name=rebels
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user_team_name= _ "Rebels"
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# Use stock flags, Tallin's troops are ceasing to be ragged
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# Use stock flags, Tallin’s troops are ceasing to be ragged
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# wmllint: recognize Tallin
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{CHARACTER_STATS_TALLIN}
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[message]
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speaker=Hamel
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message= _ "Bah! They look like fat slugs to me. Come on boys, let’s chop them to pieces before they can leave the canal."
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message= _ "Bah! They look like fat slugs to me. Come on boys, let’s chop them to pieces before they can leave the canal!"
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[/message]
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[/then]
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[else]
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[message]
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speaker=Hamel
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message= _ "Ghouls! They have an insatiable hunger for flesh and even one scratch from their claws will weaken you with sickness and disease. Nasty things; let’s chop them to pieces before they can leave the canal."
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message= _ "Ghouls! They have an insatiable hunger for flesh. One scratch from their claws will weaken you with sickness and disease. Nasty things; let’s chop them to pieces before they can leave the canal."
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[/message]
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[/else]
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[/if]
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[/sound]
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[kill]
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id=Malifor
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fire_event=yes # probably required if he's the last enemy leader
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fire_event=yes # probably required if he’s the last enemy leader
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animate=no
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[/kill]
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)}
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