Liberty S3: revise dialogue
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[story]
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[part]
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story= _ "Fearing that the Queen’s army would return in force in the wake of its fallen patrol, Baldras and his men fled Dallben. They tracked to Delwyn and sent ahead for the magistrate, Relana, to meet them in a secluded strath in the swamps."
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story= _ "Baldras’ journal, 10 Deeproot, 501 YW:
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Been a strange few days. Had to leave Dallben real quick. Grabbed as much stuff as we could in just a day, some food, some clothes, sis’s lucky bracelet... made off for Delwyn as quick as these old bones let me. Be a three day journey there, but I sended Harper ahead for Relana first. Said we’d meets her in the usual hiding spot in the swamp."
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[/part]
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[part]
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story= _ "As morning dawned over the day after next, they found Relana already waiting for them."
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story= _ "This whole mess be such a stew of stupidness. Of all the blasted things to be driving us from our home, how dids it ended up being those accursed Wesnothians? Blasted Crown. Don’t matter whoever’s the one giving out them orders, those stinkers in Weldyn always be making trouble for us countryfolk."
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story= _ "Maybe Relana still be having plenty of energy, but I’m too old for all this. Them orc raids already be plenty for me to deals with. I don’t be keen on fighting no war with Wesnoth, but don’t really got no choice either. Harper’s still too younger to be leading anyone, and don’t seem like anyone else in the village be wanting the responsibility."
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story= _ "It been a long time, but I still wish Erwen was here with us. Little sis were always the better of us two, always knews how to keeps her temper and her wits abouts her. What woulds she say to me now? Probably something like, “Quit yapping ya old dog and focus on what yer doing. We gots to be getting them people to safety.” Cheeky kid, that one. But, she’d be right, I has me a responsibility to our people. Gots a lot of trouble ahead of us..."
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[/story]
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[recall]
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id=Harper
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x,y=25,13
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x,y=21,13
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[/recall]
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[recall]
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role=Advisor
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id=Baldras
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[/scroll_to_unit]
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[message]
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speaker=Baldras
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message= _ "Relana, thank you for welcoming our messenger and agreeing to meet with us. In your many years as Delwyn’s magistrate I have never known your judgment to err."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Relana
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message= _ "It has been a long time, old friend. Your news worries us. Yet, there is no problem we have not worked out together."
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message= _ "Baldras! Ya made it! Lil Harper here tolds me all abouts what happened."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Baldras
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message= _ "You do not understand. We attacked a Wesnoth army patrol. Not only that, the leader was no man I had ever seen in Annuvin Province before. Never has one been sent out here as a patrol captain who was so ruthless and cruel."
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message= _ "Aye, Relana. It were one o’ the Queen’s patrol, strange as it do sound. Turns out they were itchin’ ta attack us soon as I wasn’t willing to leave with ‘em."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Harper
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message= _ "Had they taken my uncle, they would have surely shown up in Delwyn today with the same ultimatum. As it is, several riders escaped."
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message= _ "But we fought those ugly scoundrels off!"
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Relana
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message= _ "Well, it won’t be long until they report back to the local garrison with the details of your encounter."
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message= _ "Queen’s patrol, ya say? They sent them a messenger our way a couple days ago, asking fer our allegience to some ‘Asheviere’. Weren’t that Garard’s young bride or something? Why’s she the one sending out all these men now?"
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Baldras
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message= _ "I don’t know, but some of those riders escaped us. Bet they’ll report back to their local garrison, tell them we’re a bunch o’ traitors."
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[message]
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role=Advisor
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message= _ "Then they’ll be back in force."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Relana
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message= _ "We needs more information. We should consult ourselves with Elensefar. Lord Maddock surely gots ta know more than we do."
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[message]
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speaker=Baldras
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message= _ "An offense to decency, this is! Since when has Wesnoth been ruled by fear and treachery? We should consult with Lord Maddock of Elensefar. We have known him for years to be noble in deed as well as in name."
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message= _ "Elensefar? Why him?"
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[message]
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speaker=Relana
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message= _ "I agree. But, Baldras, what will you tell him? We know something has been going badly wrong in Wesnoth of late, that more than ordinary corruption and incompetence is afoot. But when the effects fall on mere peasants, the wrong of it may not seem so obvious from a noble’s chair."
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message= _ "Well, all Annuvin be technically ruled by Elensefar, no? We don’t technically gots to heed anything Wesnoth says."
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[/message]
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[sound]
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name=ambient/wardrums.ogg
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[/sound]
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[message]
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speaker=Baldras
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message= _ "We need evidence. Hard evidence... but wait— Are those orcish war drums I hear?"
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message= _ "And in practice, Weldyn be doing whatever it likes here, while Maddock says nothing. He knows, but he don’t care."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Relana
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message= _ "I think they are, old friend. And that rank smell on the wind tells another tale: saurians approach. To arms!"
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message= _ "But we still needs that knowledge, Baldras. We can’t be coming up with a great plan in the dark. We needs ta know what be going on. We both knows that if Weldyn brings one o’ their armies here, there be no way we can fight them off."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Baldras
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message= _ "Perhaps, but — hold there. Did ya hear that? Sounded like a wolf’s howl."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Relana
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message= _ "Somethin’ smells like lizard too. We’re not alone here, seems like someone found our hiding spot. Looks like we gots ourselves a battle."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Harper
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message= _ "Finally, some action!"
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[/message]
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{INCIDENTAL_MUSIC the_city_falls.ogg}
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{MOVE_UNIT (id=Urk Delek) 33 25}
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[message]
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speaker="Urk Delek"
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message= _ "By the sound of the wolves, the scent trail of Fal Khag’s killers ends here."
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message= _ "Blasted humans and blasted Fal Khag! Stupid goblin was only supposed to scout out that puny village, not fight it by himself. Then those damned humans rejected our help and look where that got them."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker="Urk Delek"
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message= _ "“Don’t know why the Queen hired some stinkin’ orcs, we don’t need you here.” Yeah, well now they’re dead, like a bunch of animals."
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[/message]
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{MOVE_UNIT id=Thhsthss 7 6}
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[message]
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speaker="Thhsthss"
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# wmllint: local spellings uss usss promissed
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message= _ "Fal Khag is nothing to usss, orc. You promissed uss gold. Bright gold."
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# wmllint: local spellings uss usss promissed ordersss
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message= _ "Your ordersss mean nothing to usss, orc. You promissed uss gold."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker="Urk Delek"
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message= _ "You will get gold. And our wolves will get meat."
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message= _ "Shut your trap, lizard. You’ll get your gold, just as soon as my wolves get their meat."
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[message]
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speaker=Baldras
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message= _ "Something is very wrong here. Those orcs were carrying weapons with Army forge-markings."
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message= _ "Something be very wrong here. These orcs has weapons with Army forge-markings."
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[message]
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speaker=Relana
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message= _ "Aye. And the gold in their pouches looked new from the mint."
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message= _ "Aye, and the golds in their pouches look new from mint. Could just be plunder, but..."
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speaker=Baldras
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message= _ "Can the darkest rumors be true, then? Does the Kingdom— Does Queen Asheviere... send orcs against her own people?"
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message= _ "Don’t seem like it. I be thinking these orcs were hired to scout us. But for what? Of all the alliances to be making, why woulds Weldyn be hiring orcs?"
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speaker=Relana
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message= _ "I think your mission to Lord Maddock just became more urgent than we knew, Baldras. I must remain here to see to the defense of Delwyn and Dallben, but you should fly to Elensefar with all speed."
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message= _ "I thinks yer mission to Lord Maddock just became even more urgent. We needs to know what motive Wesnoth and the Queen gots to be attacking us like this, ‘specially with them orcs."
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speaker=Baldras
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message= _ "I don’t likes leaving our people here alone, but I sees your point. Ifs we wait, more wills be coming."
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speaker=Relana
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message= _ "Then fer now, I’ll stays here to defend Delwyn and Dallben. Since you be away, maybe I can talks them patrols into leavin’ Dallben alone, pretends ye were just some upstarts. But, they probably won’t believes me forever."
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speaker=Baldras
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message= _ "We’ll fly to Elensefar fast as we can. Luck be with ya, Relana."
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[message]
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speaker=Baldras
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message= _ "We have tarried here for far too long... There is no way we can reach Elensefar and return with help before the Wesnoth army destroys our homes. Retreat!"
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message= _ "We’ve no more time to be spending here, nor to be traveling to Elensefar... the Wesnoth army likely already be mobilizing against us. We’ve got to head back to Dallben!"
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[message]
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speaker=narrator
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image=wesnoth-icon.png
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message=_ "Baldras and Relana returned to their villages to find them destroyed, with those who fought left dead and the few survivors borne away to unknown fates. It was a bitter doom, and as Wesnoth descended into darkness they would live to see worse."
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message=_ "Baldras and Relana returned to their villages to find them destroyed, with any survivors borne away to unknown fates. It was a bitter doom, and as Wesnoth descended into chaos they would live to see worse."
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[/message]
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[endlevel]
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