Capitalisation.

Also, while 'mass' can be used as a verb (S01:503), I'd favour using 'amass' here.

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[message]
speaker=Dela Keshar
message= _ "Was it really a good idea to send out a raiding party so soon after the orcs just attacked us? Even father is no longer here..."
message= _ "Was it really a good idea to send out a raiding party so soon after the orcs just attacked us? Even Father is no longer here..."
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[message]
speaker=Dela Keshar
message= _ "You say that, brother, but you have been very close-mouthed about why the mages sent you home from Alduin. I am beginning to think that you were already dabbling in this witchcraft even before you met that necromancer!"
message= _ "You say that, Brother, but you have been very close-mouthed about why the mages sent you home from Alduin. I am beginning to think that you were already dabbling in this witchcraft even before you met that necromancer!"
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[message]
speaker=Drogan
message= _ "That was bravely done, lad, holding the orcs off by yourself. But I fear the raiding party brings grave news from the north. More warlords have begun to mass armies in the hills, no more than a few days north of the Great River. I do not know if we possess the strength to fight them off."
message= _ "That was bravely done, lad, holding the orcs off by yourself. But I fear the raiding party brings grave news from the north. More warlords have begun to amass armies in the hills, no more than a few days north of the Great River. I do not know if we possess the strength to fight them off."
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{STORYTXT_BACKGROUND travel.jpg}
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[part]
story=_ "Malin and Darken Volk continue their raids on the orcs and eventually force the usually fractious Whitefang chieftains to unite in opposition. The orcs pursue the two necromancers east toward the mouth of the river men call the Longlier and Elves call the Arkan-thoria, where they manage to surround the humans and force a fight."
story=_ "Malin and Darken Volk continue their raids on the orcs and eventually force the usually fractious Whitefang chieftains to unite in opposition. The orcs pursue the two necromancers east toward the mouth of the river Men call the Longlier and Elves call the Arkan-thoria, where they manage to surround the humans and force a fight."
{STORYTXT_BACKGROUND travel.jpg}
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speaker=Malin Keshar
# wmllint: local spelling Zephrin
message= _ "O Gods, how did it come to this? My own sister determined to personally see to my demise. Banished from Parthyn, my country, my home... spurned by my people, whom I have given everything for... nothing has gone right ever since I got into an argument with that fat, orc-loving toad Zephrin and tried to curse him. I was only testing my new spell on him! It was only supposed to be a simple curse! How was I supposed to know it would kill him? Blasted Academy."
message= _ "O gods, how did it come to this? My own sister determined to personally see to my demise. Banished from Parthyn, my country, my home... spurned by my people, whom I have given everything for... nothing has gone right ever since I got into an argument with that fat, orc-loving toad Zephrin and tried to curse him. I was only testing my new spell on him! It was only supposed to be a simple curse! How was I supposed to know it would kill him? Blasted Academy."
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speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "... you cant abandon me too, not the way they did... father, Drogan, Dela..."
message= _ "... you cant abandon me too, not the way they did... Father, Drogan, Dela..."
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{MOVE_UNIT (id=Darken Volk) 17 17}