DM: Proofread Pass (#6178)

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[story]
[part]
story = _ "This is the true story of Delfador the Great from his humble beginnings; the tale of how he became the most famous and powerful of all the mages of Wesnoth."
story = _ "This is the true story of how Delfador the Great arose from his humble beginnings, the tale of how he became the most famous and powerful of all the mages of Wesnoth."
[/part]
[part]
story = _ "It begins on the Isle of Alduin, at the Academy which trains mages from throughout the Great Continent."
story = _ "It begins on the Isle of Alduin, at the Academy, which trains mages from throughout the Great Continent."
[/part]
[part]
story = _ "After ten years of training, two tests stand between that apprentice and attainment of the degree of Mage:"
story = _ "After ten years of training, two tests stand between one particular apprentice and attainment of the degree of Mage:"
[/part]
[part]
story = _ "<i>The New Mage Ceremony</i>"

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story = _ "Delfadors wandering time with Methor took them to many strange places, both within and beyond the lands of men. They studied and practiced, applying magecraft to aid those they traveled among and to deepen their understanding of the hidden currents and powers of the world."
[/part]
[part]
story = _ "But the elder mages health was taxed by the rigors of the journey. A year after the two left Alduin, Methor settled in a tranquil valley at the edge of the Dulatus Hills, not far southeast of the capitol at Weldyn. He opened a small school of his own, and with Delfador assisting him he began training a handful of youths who might in time be worthy to enter the great Academy on Alduin."
story = _ "But the elder mages health was taxed by the rigors of the journey. A year after the two left Alduin, Methor settled in a tranquil valley at the edge of the Dulatus Hills, not far southeast of the capitol at Weldyn. He opened a small school of his own; and with Delfador assisting him, he began training a handful of youths who might in time be worthy to enter the great Academy on Alduin."
[/part]
[/story]
{DM_TRACK {SEARCH_STAGE2}}
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name=start
[message]
speaker=Methor
message=_"Delfador, your time as my apprentice is now almost over. You are a fully-trained mage, and may choose your own path in life. I hope, however, that you will take my advice, and enroll yourself in the service of King Garard. I have many contacts at the court and..."
message=_"Delfador, your time as my apprentice is now almost over. You are a fully-trained mage and may choose your own path in life. I hope, however, that you will take my advice and enroll yourself in the service of King Garard. I have many contacts at the court and"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Grogor-Tuk

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{NAMED_UNIT 1 Horseman 30 21 Gar _"Gar" ()} {FACING ne}
[message]
speaker=Derrin
message=_"Beware, stranger! I come to warn you — a party of orcs have moved into the Great Valley to the north, and have been raiding the lands around. If you press on westward, you will have to fight them."
message=_"Beware, stranger! I come to warn you — a party of orcs have moved into the Great Valley to the north and have been raiding the lands around. If you press on westward, you will have to fight them."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador

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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
message=_"Kill them all! For our murdered friend."
message=_"Kill them all! For our slain friend."
[/message]
[/event]
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name=victory
[message]
speaker=Leollyn
message=_"Well now, you arrived just in the nick of time. A fellow mage, too, I see. Now what did you say your name was?"
message=_"Well now, you arrived just in the nick of time. A fellow mage too, I see. Now what did you say your name was?"
[/message]
[if]
[variable]

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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Lionel
message=_"Bad news, my liege. The orcs mass in great numbers on the north shore of the river, near to the Ford of Abez. We have been cut off from the dwarves of Knalga — the rumor is that the orcs plan to overrun them, then turn their attention to Wesnoth. The good people of our northern provinces flee, and the land there falls into anarchy. We were attacked more than once by thugs and bandits, and by evil creatures that roamed the night in the shapes of men."
message=_"Bad news, my liege. The orcs mass in great numbers on the north shore of the river, near the Ford of Abez. We have been cut off from the dwarves of Knalga — the rumor is that the orcs plan to overrun them, then turn their attention to Wesnoth. The good people of our northern provinces flee, and the land there falls into anarchy. We were attacked more than once by thugs and bandits, and by evil creatures that roamed the night in the shapes of men."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Leollyn

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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Lionel
message=_"While it appears fortune favored us this time, I fear for the travelers for whom this man does NOT keep his word..."
message=_"While it appears fortune favored us this time, I fear for the travelers for whom this man does <i>not</i> keep his word..."
[/message]
#else
[message]
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[then]
[message]
speaker=Garrath
message=_"Hey, that was one of OUR villages! Deals off; were no longer protecting you!"
message=_"Hey, that was one of <i>our</i> villages! Deals off; were no longer protecting you!"
[/message]
# Need to conditionalize here to ensure Garrath's reply makes sense:
[if]
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[then]
[message]
speaker=Harold
message=_"So... does that mean that OUR deal is back on now, Garrath?"
message=_"So... does that mean that <i>our</i> deal is back on now, Garrath?"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Garrath

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[/filter]
[message]
speaker=unit
message=_"I am defeated... My children: hear my last words! Destroy the humans, and never let them set foot on our island again!"
message=_"I am defeated... My children, hear my last words! Destroy the humans, and never let them set foot on our island again!"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
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[/filter]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
message=_"Ur-Thorodor, listen to me! We are not here to take your island. If you will let just me remain here, then I promise you, on behalf of King Garard, that no Wesnothian will set foot on your island without your permission again. As a token of good faith, I command my army to return to the mainland."
message=_"Ur-Thorodor, listen to me! We are not here to take your island. If you will let me remain here, then I promise you, on behalf of King Garard, that no Wesnothian will set foot on your island without your permission again. As a token of good faith, I command my army to return to the mainland."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Lionel
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
message=_"Its the only way! Lionel, lead our soldiers back to the mainland. I will rejoin you when I have carried out my mission, and determined what is amiss in the world of the dead."
message=_"Its the only way! Lionel, lead our soldiers back to the mainland. I will rejoin you when I have carried out my mission and determined what is amiss in the world of the dead."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Ur-Thorodor

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story=_ "It was one of those moments that altered the destiny of the world. The orc warrior held many possibilities in his hand. He could simply have taken Delfadors head. Had that occurred, the orcs might have overrun the whole of Wesnoth and ruled it for ages. But what he chose, thinking it rare sport to abuse one of the hated human mages, was to strike Delfador with his gauntleted fist."
[/part]
[part]
story=_ "The blow interrupted Delfadors meditation. He began to topple over to the ground, but before his head reached it he vanished as though he had never been there at all."
story=_ "The blow interrupted Delfadors meditation. He began to topple over to the ground; but before his head reached it, he vanished as though he had never been there at all."
[/part]
[/story]
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{MEMOIRS_DEAD_HOUSE 36 18 Ghoul Penella ( _ "Penella") (
[message]
speaker=Penella
message=_"Do not fear me, Delfador. It is my doom to appear as you see me. I was a serf of a cruel lord. He demanded great taxes to fight many wars... then plague came... my family were starving, and we were forced to eat the flesh of those who had died."
message=_"Do not fear me, Delfador. It is my doom to appear as you see me. I was a serf of a cruel lord. He demanded great taxes to fight many wars... then plague came... my family was starving, and we were forced to eat the flesh of those who had died."
[/message]
[allow_recruit]
type=Ghoul
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
message=_"I am only a man, a living man seeking a way home from the house of the dead."
message=_"I am only a man, a living man seeking a way home from the Land of the Dead."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=narrator

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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Chantal
message=_"Yes. I am Chantal, and I know many things. I know you come from the great human kingdom of the south, and are a master of magic. You have faced great adversity, and visited a place from where few hope to return, and from where none before have returned unchanged. Fate is heavy upon you, and you deserve our help."
message=_"Yes. I am Chantal, and I know many things. I know you come from the great human kingdom of the south and are a master of magic. You have faced great adversity and visited a place from where few hope to return, from where none before have returned unchanged. Fate is heavy upon you, and you deserve our help."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
message=_"Oh... well... very nice of you, but I dont feel very fated. In fact, Ive been positively blundering! I was just trying to defend my master Methors school against the orcs, and then to find out the source of the undead activity... and I have failed at both."
message=_"Oh... well... very nice of you, but I dont feel very fated. In fact, Ive been positively blundering! I was just trying to defend my master Methors school against the orcs, and then I was tasked with finding the source of the undead activity... and now I have failed at both."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Chantal

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# 417 YW; Parthyn is strongly garrisoned within the next
# few years. It is now 470 YW and Garard I died a few months
# previously. Garard II, the new King, is 30 years old.
message= _ "This is the nearest human garrison, Delfador. Here is the only place to cross the river. Soon after the last King of Wesnoth began his reign, he put a strong garrison not far south of here in the town of Parthyn, and orcs have not been able to cross into Wesnoth over this part of the river since."
message= _ "This is the nearest human garrison, Delfador — the only place where the river can be crossed. Soon after the last King of Wesnoth began his reign, he put a strong garrison not far south of here in the town of Parthyn, and orcs have not been able to cross into Wesnoth over this part of the river since."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
message= _ "Prepare to fight them! We must keep the Ford clear!"
message= _ "Prepare to fight them! We must keep the ford clear!"
[/message]
[fire_event]
name=enemies
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[/message]
[message]
role=Commander
message= _ "Yes, close by the southeast wall of our fort across the Ford. But they are jealous of their privileges and hold aloof from us."
message= _ "Yes, close by the southeast wall of our fort across the ford. But they are jealous of their privileges and hold aloof from us."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador

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#po: "errantry" is an archaic English word associated with medieval
#po: knights. It means he wandered around looking for monsters to
#po: slay and wrongs to right.
story=_"There was an elf named Kalenz who had already in Delfadors time been a legend among his people for centuries; his tale, <i>The Legend of Wesmere</i>, is known throughout the elven lands. Prolonged in life by a necromantic potion, he put aside the High Lordship of the Elves after the death of his beloved wife, and wandered the Great Continent in errantry."
story=_"There was an elf named Kalenz who had already, in Delfadors time, been a legend among his people for centuries; his tale, <i>The Legend of Wesmere</i>, is known throughout the elven lands. Prolonged in life by a necromantic potion, he put aside the High Lordship of the Elves after the death of his beloved wife, and wandered the Great Continent in errantry."
[/part]
[part]
story=_"But Kalenz half-knew and half-feared he would be needed again, and the day he had long foreseen finally arrived. Report came to him of large orcish forces attacking the outskirts of elvish forests, including Lintanir itself. Kalenz quickly gathered a small troop of picked guards. War had returned to the land of the elves."
story=_"But Kalenz half-knew and half-feared he would be needed again, and the day he had long foreseen finally arrived. Reports came to him of large orcish forces attacking the outskirts of elvish forests, including Lintanir itself. Kalenz quickly gathered a small troop of handpicked guards. War had returned to the land of the elves."
[/part]
[/story]
{DM_TRACK {KALENZ_STAGE1}}
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name=start
[message]
speaker=Tan-drul
message= _ "Kill these filthy elves! All warlords will then accept our leader, Zorlan, as king and he will reward you all!"
message= _ "Kill these filthy elves! Show all warlords the might of Zorlan! When they accept him as sovereign we will all be rewarded!"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Kalenz
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Chantal
message= _ "No. But Cleodil gave some of the Books least dangerous secrets to her daughters, and so I had them from my mother. And I think I have found the one we have been awaiting since Cleodil accepted the guardianship of the Book. You know of what I speak."
message= _ "No. The preparation of holy water was a secret that Lady Cleodil passed on to her daughters and granddaughters. She thought it wise to share the least dangerous secrets of the Book."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Chantal
message= _ "Returning to present matters, I believe I have found the one we have been awaiting ever since Lady Cleodil accepted guardianship of the Book. You know of what I speak."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Kalenz

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[/lift_fog]
[message]
role=enemy_speaker
message= _ "We have more help!"
message= _ "We have reinforcements!"
[/message]
{MODIFY_UNIT (role=enemy_speaker) role ""}
[/event]
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[/lift_fog]
[message]
role=enemy_speaker
message= _ "And now even more help!"
message= _ "And now even more reinforcements!"
[/message]
{MODIFY_UNIT (role=enemy_speaker) role ""}
[/event]
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Chantal
message= _ "That is Delfador. Do you see, now?"
message= _ "That is Delfador. Do you see now?"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Kalenz
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Kalenz
message= _ "You speak my thought, granddaughter. May it be so."
message= _ "You speak my thoughts, granddaughter. May it be so."
[/message]
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[/fire_event]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
message= _ "I arrive too late for the entertainment, it would seem."
message= _ "I have arrived too late for the entertainment, it would seem."
[/message]
[/then]
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
message= _ "Agreed, but we must make haste, for the King is hard pressed."
message= _ "Agreed, but we must make haste, for the King is hard-pressed."
[/message]
[/event]
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Kalenz
message= _ "Delfador, our weapons are weak against the undead, but perhaps we have other help to give you. Centuries ago the great mage Crelanu entrusted to us a book of lore, powerful knowledge, perilous secrets that it took Crelanu all his life to gather."
message= _ "Delfador, our weapons are weak against the undead, but perhaps we have other help to give you. Centuries ago, the great mage Crelanu entrusted to us a book of lore and perilous secrets that took him his entire life to gather."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Kalenz
message= _ "Crelanu charged us to guard his book until someone worthy of it appeared. We believe you are that one, Delfador. The book may help you find a way to close that portal."
message= _ "Crelanu charged us with guarding this book until someone worthy of it should arrive. We believe you are the one, Delfador. The book may help you find a way to close the portal."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
message= _ "Friends, your words do me perhaps greater honor than I deserve. I am not sure I am worthy of this charge."
message= _ "Friends, your words do me greater honor than I perhaps deserve. I am not sure I am worthy of this charge."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Kalenz
message= _ "Chantal and I are sure of your quality. But be warned: there is a curse on this book. Crelanu fairly warned us that his arts would bring much woe down upon us. And so it proved, though at the time we had no other choice. The victories you win with it may cost you as dearly."
message= _ "You may have some doubts, but Chantal and I are sure of your quality. But be warned: there is a curse on this book. Crelanu fairly warned us that his arts would bring much woe down upon us. And so it proved, though at the time we had no other choice. The victories you win with it may cost you as dearly."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
message= _ "Curse or no, we must close that portal soon, or else we are all doomed."
message= _ "Curse or no, we must close the portal soon, or else we are all doomed."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Kalenz
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
message= _ "Thank you, friends. May we meet again in happier times. Now I must make haste, for I need to study the book and prepare for the battle with the undead."
message= _ "Thank you, friends. May we meet again in happier times. Now I must make haste, for I need to study the book and prepare for battle with the undead."
[/message]
{ELVES_DEPART}

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[story]
[part]
music=loyalists.ogg
story=_"Kalenz and Chantal and their troops departed to ride against the remnants of the orcish Great Horde. Delfador returned to Weldyn with the King and his gift from the elves, the Book of Crelanu. However, despite the victory, Delfador was deeply worried by the undead menace. On the way back they met with Lionel who was arriving with reinforcements, and were deeply saddened to learn that Leollyn had died under very suspicious circumstances."
story=_"Kalenz, Chantal, and their troops departed to ride against the remnants of the orcish Great Horde. Delfador returned to Weldyn with the King and his gift from the elves, the Book of Crelanu. However, despite the victory, Delfador was deeply worried by the undead menace. On the way back, they met with Lionel who was arriving with reinforcements, and were deeply saddened to learn that Leollyn had died under very suspicious circumstances."
[/part]
[part]
background=story/portraits/garard-large.png
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[/part]
[part]
background=story/portraits/garard-large.png
story={CAPTION ( _ "Garard II")} + _ "Peace, Lionel. The elves fought well and have earned Our respect. But this council is here to address an alarming matter. Young master Delfador here reports of an undead threat. He was able to fight them off at Parthyn Ford, but more are coming."
story={CAPTION ( _ "Garard II")} + _ "Peace, Lionel. The elves fought well and have earned our respect. But this council is here to address an alarming matter. Young master Delfador here reports of an undead threat. He was able to fight them off at Parthyn Ford, but more are coming."
[/part]
[part]
background=portraits/lionel.png
story={CAPTION ( _ "Lionel")} + _ "With your permission, sire, I will take some picked men north and crush these abominations."
story={CAPTION ( _ "Lionel")} + _ "With your permission, sire, I will take some handpicked men north and crush these abominations."
[/part]
[part]
background=story/portraits/young_delfador-large.png
story={CAPTION ( _ "Delfador")} + _ "Your Majesty, these are no stray undead; this lunatic, Iliah-Malal, has opened a portal to the Land of the Dead. Unless we close this portal soon, the relatively small numbers of enemy troops he now commands will swell into an endless stream of undead. And our army, having equipped and trained primarily to fight raiding orcs, is not well suited to fight even the forces he fields now. Mages, in combination with heavy infantry are most effective against them."
story={CAPTION ( _ "Delfador")} + _ "Your Majesty, these are no stray undead; this lunatic, Iliah-Malal, has opened a portal to the Land of the Dead. Unless we close this portal soon, the relatively small numbers of enemy troops he now commands will swell into an endless stream of undead. And our army, having equipped and trained primarily to fight raiding orcs, is not well suited to fight even the forces he fields now. Mages, in combination with heavy infantry, are most effective against them."
[/part]
[part]
background=story/portraits/sagus.png
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[/part]
[part]
background=story/portraits/young_delfador-large.png
story={CAPTION ( _ "Delfador")} + _ "There are three things we must do. First, we must organize our defenses as best we can. Second, we need to ask the elves to create a diversion, to distract and delay Iliah-Malal. The elves will not be able to fight the undead head on on the field, but they can harass them by striking from forests where the undead dare not follow. And last, I have been studying and I think I now know how to close Iliah-Malals portal to the Land of the Dead. I will need a small escort, but this must be done immediately."
story={CAPTION ( _ "Delfador")} + _ "There are three things we must do. First, we must organize our defenses as best we can. Second, we need to ask the elves to create a diversion that will distract and delay Iliah-Malal. The elves will not be able to fight the undead head-on on the field, but they can harass them by striking from forests where the undead dare not follow. And last, I have been studying the Book of Crelanu and I think I now know how to close Iliah-Malals portal to the Land of the Dead. I will need a small escort, but this must be done immediately."
[/part]
[part]
background=portraits/lionel.png
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[/part]
[part]
background=story/portraits/young_delfador-large.png
story={CAPTION ( _ "Delfador")} + _ "These are only the first steps. If we are to defeat the undead, we need to use and train the army differently than we have. First, you must recall every mage in Wesnoth, from Alduin and elsewhere. And you must prepare more heavy infantry."
story={CAPTION ( _ "Delfador")} + _ "These are only the first steps. If we are to defeat the undead, we need to reform the composition of our army. First, you must recall every mage in Wesnoth, from Alduin and elsewhere. And you must prepare more heavy infantry."
[/part]
[part]
background=portraits/lionel.png
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[/part]
[part]
background=story/portraits/garard-large.png
story={CAPTION ( _ "Garard II")} + _ "Delfador could. You will command the heavy infantry. Make sure to shield the mages in battle, for they are precious. Now, go, close the portal and come back soon!"
story={CAPTION ( _ "Garard II")} + _ "Delfador could. You will command the heavy infantry. Make sure to shield our mages in battle, for they are precious. Now go, close the portal and come back soon!"
[/part]
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[story]
[part]
story= _ "Delfador took a small escort to the north in order to attempt to close the portal. But with Iliah-Malals army at large north of the Great River, this was a perilous road. Delfador was constrained to avoid well-trodden paths. This meant a detour..."
story= _ "Delfador took a small escort to the north on a mission to close the portal. But with Iliah-Malals army at large north of the Great River, this was a perilous road. It was imperative that Delfador avoid well-trodden paths. This meant a detour..."
show_title=yes
[/part]
[/story]
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
message=_"Dwarves, attacked by undead. We must help them."
message=_"Dwarves, under attack by undead. We must help them."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Gruv-Malal

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[story]
[part]
story= _ "The dwarves led Delfador through a veritable maze of tunnels. Delfador was amazed at the speed with which the dwarves could move through their tunnels. Far sooner than he would have believed possible they reached their destination, undetected by Iliah-Malal."
story= _ "The dwarves led Delfador through a veritable maze of tunnels; Delfador was amazed at the speed with which the dwarves could move through them. Far sooner than he would have believed possible, they reached their destination, undetected by Iliah-Malal."
show_title=yes
[/part]
[/story]
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name=start
[message]
speaker=Prepolur
message=_"Living men and dwarves are nearing. Rise, Portal Guard and slay the intruders!"
message=_"Living men and dwarves are nearing. Rise, my fellow dead, and slay the intruders!"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
message=_"The portal must be closed at any cost. You must allow me to get close to it, so I can seal it."
message=_"The portal must be closed at all costs. You must allow me to get close to it, so I can seal it."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Ulrek
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
message= _ "They have reinforcements. Hurry, we must close the portal before we are overrun!"
message= _ "(<i>To the dwarves</i>). Their master has arrived with reinforcements. Hurry, we must close the portal before we are overrun!"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Iliah-Malal
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
message= _ "We cannot defeat him now. We must carry out our mission first, so we will be able to defeat him later."
message= _ "We cannot defeat him now. We must allow some time to pass after the portal has been closed. By then, his power will have weakened, rendering him vulnerable."
[/message]
# He gets a full heal, not an advance, otherwise we'd have to make sure we ported him to the next scenario properly
{FULL_HEAL id=Iliah-Malal}
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Iliah-Malal
message=_"Delfador, you have proven your skill. I have an offer for you. Join me and you will live as my right hand. Together our magic skills will be unmatched and irresistible."
message=_"Delfador, you have proven your skill. I have an offer for you. Join me, and you will live as my right hand. Together, our magic skills will be unmatched and irresistible."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
message=_"(<i>To the dwarves</i>). Now that the portal is closed, his power will start to weaken, but that doesnt help us now. Quickly, back in the tunnel! I will stay last to seal the entrance."
message=_"(<i>To the dwarves</i>). Now that the portal is closed, his power will start to weaken. It will be some time until he is rendered vulnerable; at the moment, we must flee. Quickly, back to the tunnel! I will enter it last to seal the entrance."
[/message]
#Delf collapses the cave entrance

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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
message= _ "Your mindless minions will be no match for the spirit and fire of the living."
message= _ "Your mindless minions are no match for the spirit and fire of the living."
[/message]
{MODIFY_UNIT (id=Lionel) facing nw}
[message]
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[/if]
[message]
speaker=Lionel
message=_"And the portal, it is sealed for good?"
message=_"And the portal, is it sealed for good?"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
message=_"Yes, it is. But it was too great a work of magic to be entirely undone; there is a flaw still remaining, a trace of Iliah-Malals way between worlds. Raising undead will be a little easier in the future than it has been before. Those who come after us will have to be vigilant against the corruption of the dark arts, and show themselves worthy of the land they live in."
message=_"Yes, it is. But it was too great a work of magic to be entirely undone; there is a flaw still remaining, a trace of Iliah-Malals way between worlds. Raising undead will be a little easier in the future than it has been before. Those who come after us will have to be vigilant against the corruption of the dark arts and show themselves worthy of the land they live in."
[/message]
# This is set-up for the next scenario, where Kalenz leads side 1 again

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[/part]
[part]
# Eldred's raid takes place in 496
story= _ "One day reports came of Wesnothian forces seizing elvish land on the border. Kalenz gathered a small force and hurried to the disputed country."
story= _ "One day, reports came of Wesnothian forces seizing elvish land on the border. Kalenz gathered a small force and hurried to the disputed country."
[/part]
[/story]
{DM_TRACK {BOOK_STAGE1}}
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[/lift_fog]
[message]
speaker=Kalenz
message= _ "Generals of Wesnoth: you have attacked defenseless elvish land. You must leave immediately. I am Kalenz, High Lord of the Elves. Delfador the Great will confirm the treaty between us."
message= _ "Generals of Wesnoth, you have attacked defenseless elvish land. You must leave immediately. I am Kalenz, High Lord of the Elves. Delfador the Great will confirm the treaty between us."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Eldred
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Kalenz
message= _ "I wonder if the Book of Crelanu is not behind this. The Book is not evil in itself, but the power it gives tends to magnify any evil in the readers soul. Delfador, has anyone but you opened its covers since you got it from us?"
message= _ "I wonder if the Book of Crelanu is behind this. The Book is not evil in itself, but the power it gives tends to magnify any evil in the readers soul. Delfador, has anyone but you opened its covers since you got it from us?"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador

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story= _ "Delfador was granted an audience with the King and expressed his concerns about the Book, but the King put off a decision until Asheviere returned to Weldyn, and ordered Delfador to take no further action. And for once, Delfador knew he could not obey the Kings order."
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "Since he could not ask even his personal guard to go against the Kings wishes, he turned to Kalenz and the elves. Traveling by night to remain unseen they reached Ashevieres family demesne."
story= _ "Since he could not ask even his personal guard to go against the Kings wishes, he turned to Kalenz and the elves. Traveling by night to remain unseen, they reached Ashevieres family demesne."
[/part]
[/story]
{DM_TRACK {BOOK_STAGE3}}
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[message]
speaker=Delfador
message= _ "I am grieved to have to resort to this. Yet the Book must be recovered at all costs and no one should be left alive."
message= _ "I am grieved to have to resort to this. Yet the Book must be recovered at all costs; and no one should be left alive."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Kalenz

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show_title=yes
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "Delfador and the elves went through the secret door and ended in the dungeon, a veritable maze of narrow corridors."
story= _ "Delfador and the elves went through the secret door and found themselves in the dungeon, a veritable maze of narrow corridors."
[/part]
[/story]
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[/message]
[message]
speaker="Sagus"
message= _ "I am the one whose place you took in the court of Wesnoth. But my daughter brought me what you seek, and I have seized the power of it."
message= _ "I am the one whose place you took in the court of Wesnoth. But my daughter brought me what you seek, and I have gained its power."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Chantal
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
message= _ "Sagus... old friend... The Book you have taken is no good for you, your daughter or the Kingdom. It will destroy you both!"
message= _ "Sagus... old friend... The Book you have taken is no good for you, your daughter, or the Kingdom. It will destroy you both!"
[/message]
[message]
speaker="Sagus"

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[story]
[part]
music=battle-epic.ogg
story=_ "Delfador returned to Weldyn, but not before secreting the Book of Crelanu in a place known only to him. To his surprise, Asheviere made no further mention of the events in the manor. But not long after, orcish raids increased to a degree that threatened the Kingdom. The King mustered his armies to deal with the orcish menace, leading to the great battle at the Ford of Abez that was lost through betrayal."
story=_ "Delfador returned to Weldyn, but not before secreting the Book of Crelanu to a place known only to him. To his surprise, Asheviere made no further mention of the events in the manor. But not long after, orcish raids increased to a degree that threatened the Kingdom. The King mustered his armies to deal with the orcish menace, leading to the great battle at the Ford of Abez that was lost through betrayal."
[/part]
[part]
story=_"Delfadors last great quest, after that battle, was ending the usurpation of Asheviere and restoring the rightful <i>Heir to the Throne</i>."
[/part]
[part]
story=_ "Afterwards, Delfador lived the rest of his life as an advisor to the new rulers. He devoted much of his attention to restoring the Great Academy in Alduin to its former glory. But his efforts there were to bear little fruit in his lifetime; for through many years of war and strife, very few mages were left, and none of them came near in power and skill to Delfador, greatest mage ever to grace the courts of Wesnoth."
story=_ "Afterwards, Delfador lived the rest of his life as an advisor to the new rulers. He devoted much of his attention to restoring the great Academy in Alduin to its former glory. But his efforts there were to bear little fruit in his lifetime; for through many years of war and strife, very few mages were left, and none of them came near in power and skill to Delfador, greatest mage ever to grace the courts of Wesnoth."
[/part]
[/story]

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[/filter]
[message]
speaker=Delfador
message=_"With Ulrek slain we cannot count on dwarvish help! All is lost!"
message=_"With Ulrek slain, we cannot count on dwarvish help! All is lost!"
[/message]
[endlevel]
result=defeat

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[/filter]
[message]
speaker=unit
message=_"Ahh... I can slake my thirst at this well. Glug, glug glug..." # wmllint: no spellcheck
message=_"Ahh... I can slake my thirst at this well. Glug, glug, glug..." # wmllint: no spellcheck
[/message]
[/event]
#enddef