Polishing unit descriptions.

data/units/Lord.cfg

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ alignment=lawful
 advanceto=null
 cost=150
 usage=mixed fighter
-unit_description="The noble leaders of many troops, Lords are especially strong in melee combat, and also possess skill with the bow. Like Commanders, Lords possess leadership skills, and provide leadership to all adjacent lower-level units."
+unit_description="The noble leaders of many troops, Lords are especially strong in melee combat, and also possess skill with the bow. Like Commanders, Lords possess leadership skills, and improve the fighting ability of all adjacent lower-level units."
 get_hit_sound=groan.wav
 	[attack]
 	name=sword

data/units/Mage.cfg

@@ -11,9 +11,7 @@ alignment=lawful
 advanceto=White Mage,Red Mage
 cost=21
 usage=mixed fighter
-unit_description="The mage is weak and yet potent. Moving slowly, and weak defensively, the mage attacks with magical missiles, that always have a high chance of hitting their target.
-
-For this reason, the mage is an excellent choice for flushing out enemies hiding in difficult terrain."
+unit_description="Mages are both weak and powerful. Moving slowly, and with poor defensive skills, Mages attack with magical missiles that always have a high chance of hitting their target. For this reason, Mages are an excellent choice for flushing out enemies hiding in difficult terrain."
 get_hit_sound=groan.wav
 	[attack]
 	name=dagger

data/units/Mage_of_Light.cfg

@@ -15,9 +15,7 @@ alignment=lawful
 advanceto=null
 cost=120
 usage=fighter
-unit_description="The mage of Light is an awesome ally of all lawful combatants, and a fearsome foe to the forces of chaos. The mage's powers of illumination are so great that the hex it is on and all adjacent hexes never experience night.
-
-When a unit is adjacent to a mage of Light, it will fight as if it were day when it is dusk, and as if it were dusk when it is night. Like the White Mage, the Mage of Light also cures adjacent friendly units."
+unit_description="Mages of Light are awesome allies of all lawful combatants, and fearsome foes to the forces of chaos. These Mages' powers of illumination are so great that the hexes they occupy and all adjacent hexes never experience night. As a result, when a unit is adjacent to a Mage of Light, it will fight as if it were day when it is dusk, and as if it were dusk when it is night. Like the White Mages, the Mages of Light also cure adjacent friendly units."
 get_hit_sound=groan.wav
 	[attack]
 	name=mace

data/units/Merman.cfg

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ alignment=lawful
 advanceto=Merman Lord
 cost=12
 usage=swimmer
-unit_description="A skilled creature of the sea, the Merman is powerful and quick in any amphibious environment, but struggles on land."
+unit_description="Skilled creatures of the sea, Mermen are powerful and quick in any watery environment, but struggle greatly to move on land."
 get_hit_sound=mermen-hit.wav
 	[attack]
 	name=trident

data/units/Merman_Lord.cfg

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ alignment=lawful
 advanceto=null
 cost=28
 usage=swimmer
-unit_description="The Merman Lord is a master of the sea, skilled in use of the trident, the Merman Lord easily defeats any enemy who is foolish enough to wander into his preferred environment."
+unit_description="Merman Lords are masters of the sea. Skilled in use of the trident, Merman Lords easily defeat any enemy foolish enough to wander into their preferred environment."
 get_hit_sound=mermen-hit.wav
 	[attack]
 	name=trident

data/units/Naga.cfg

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ alignment=neutral
 advanceto=Sea Hag
 cost=11
 usage=swimmer
-unit_description="The naga, like the merman, are inhabitants of the seas. While they are smaller and nimbler than their counterparts, they share their distaste for dry land."
+unit_description="Like the Mermen, Nagas are inhabitants of the seas. Smaller and more nimble than their counterparts, they share a distaste for dry land."
 get_hit_sound=mermen-hit.wav
 	[attack]
 	name=trident

data/units/Necromancer.cfg

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ alignment=chaotic
 advanceto=Lich
 cost=15
 usage=mixed fighter
-unit_description="A necromancer is a mage that decided to follow the paths of the dark arts. By tapping into the power of the undead, the necromancer can cast spells that drain the lifeforce from his foes and add it to his own."
+unit_description="Necromancer are Mages that have decided to follow the paths of the dark arts. By tapping into the power of the undead, Necromancers can cast spells that drain the lifeforce from their foes and add it to their own."
 get_hit_sound=groan.wav
 	[attack]
 	name=staff

data/units/Paladin.cfg

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ advanceto=null
 cost=100
 usage=fighter
 ability=heals
-unit_description="A knight of the highest virtue, the Paladin has all the skills of the knight, but can also heal adjacent friendly units."
+unit_description="Knights of the highest virtue, Paladins have all the skills of the Knight, and can also heal adjacent friendly units."
 get_hit_sound=groan.wav
 	[attack]
 	name=sword

data/units/Pikeman.cfg

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ alignment=lawful
 advanceto=Halbardier
 cost=22
 usage=fighter
-unit_description="Pikemen are are more experienced soldiers who have changed their spears for long pikes. They can be deadly when fighting cavalry."
+unit_description="Pikemen are more experienced soldiers who have changed their spears for long pikes. They can be deadly when fighting cavalry."
 get_hit_sound=groan.wav
 	[attack]
 	name=pike

data/units/Poacher.cfg

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ alignment=chaotic
 advanceto=null
 cost=16
 usage=archer
-unit_description="The poacher rely on his experience hunting by night in forests and swamps."
+unit_description="Poachers rely on their hunting experience and are most valuable at night and in forests and swamps."
    #Poachers are better than normal units at woods and swamps
    [defense]
    forest=40

data/units/Princess.cfg

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ advanceto=null
 cost=110
 ability=leadership
 usage=fighter
-unit_description="A noble at birth, the princess has learnt swordplay with the greatest generals, and battle tactics with the greatest sages, making her both a great combatant and leader. The units of lower level around the princess will fight better due to her presence. The princess is also nimble and dextrous, having skills like that of a thief."
+unit_description="A noble at birth, the Princess has learnt swordplay with the greatest generals, and battle tactics with the greatest sages, making her both a great combatant and leader. The units of lower level around the Princess will fight better due to her presence. The princess is also nimble and dextrous, having skills like that of a thief."
 get_hit_sound=groan.wav
 	[attack]
 	name=sword

data/units/Red_Mage.cfg

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ alignment=neutral
 advanceto=Arch Mage
 cost=60
 usage=mixed fighter
-unit_description="The red mage attacks with powerful fireballs, that are guaranteed a good chance of hitting. Good at both day and night, and deft of foot, the red mage is valuable in almost all situations"
+unit_description="Red Mages attack with powerful magic fireballs that are guaranteed a good chance of hitting. Deft of foot, and skilled fighters both day and night, Red Mages are therefore valuable in almost all situations."
 get_hit_sound=groan.wav
 	[attack]
 	name=dagger

data/units/Revenant.cfg

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ alignment=chaotic
 advanceto=null
 cost=19
 usage=fighter
-unit_description="A Revenant is an undead raised from a once mighty warrior. While the warrior's will and soul are all but lost, the fighting skills certainly remain."
+unit_description="Revenants are undead creatures raised from once mighty warriors. While the warriors' will and soul are all but lost, their fighting skills certainly remain with the Revenant."
 get_hit_sound=skeleton-hit.wav
 	[resistance]
 	blade=60

data/units/Rogue.cfg

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ advanceto=Assassin
 cost=30
 usage=fighter
 ability=skirmisher
-unit_description="Rogues are masters of agility, they can move past an enemy, ignoring zones of control. They also possess the backstab ability, which allows them to do double damage if an ally of the rogue is on the opposite side of an enemy they are attacking"
+unit_description="Rogues are masters of agility and can move right past an enemy, ignoring any zones of control. Master thieves, they too have the backstab ability, which allows them to do double damage if an ally of theirs is on the opposite side of an enemy they are attacking."
 get_hit_sound=groan.wav
 	[attack]
 	name=dagger

data/units/Royal_Guard.cfg

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ alignment=lawful
 advanceto=null
 cost=35
 usage=fighter
-unit_description="Members of the Royal Guard are hand picked from the strongest and sturdiest of the army. They are deployed only in critical situations and, so far, they have always succeeded in the job at hand."
+unit_description="Members of the Royal Guard are hand picked from the strongest and sturdiest of the army. They are deployed only in critical situations and, so far, have always succeeded in their assigned tasks."
 get_hit_sound=groan.wav
 	[attack]
 	name=sword