Usage fixes for encyclopedia text.

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Eric S. Raymond 2011-01-25 16:54:09 +00:00
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[topic]
id=caste
title= _ "Caste"
#TODO ESR
text= _ "Depending on special treatments to the drake <ref>dst='egg' text='egg'</ref> a tribe can control the form the later <ref>dst='hatchling' text='hatchling'</ref> takes on. The outcome can either be a <ref>dst='unit_Drake Clasher' text='Clasher'</ref> or a <ref>dst='unit_Drake Fighter' text='Drake Fighter'</ref>."
text= _ "One of the variant forms of the drake: either be a <ref>dst='unit_Drake Clasher' text='Clasher'</ref> or a <ref>dst='unit_Drake Fighter' text='Drake Fighter'</ref>."
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[topic]
id=aerie
title= _ "Aerie"
text= _ "A drake home building, fortified. It contains the <ref>dst='breeding_pen' text='breeding pens'</ref>."
text= _ "A very large castle-like structure that is home to a <ref>dst='flight' text='flight'</ref>. It contains the <ref>dst='breeding_pen' text='breeding pens'</ref>."
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[topic]
id=breeding_pen
title= _ "Breeding Pen"
text= _ "Where the nonsentient <ref>dst='breeder' text='Breeders'</ref> live under the <ref>dst='dominant' text='Dominant'</ref>' s eye."
text= _ "The portion of an <ref>dst='aerie' text='aerie'</ref> where the nonsentient <ref>dst='breeder' text='Breeders'</ref> live under the <ref>dst='dominant' text='Dominant'</ref>' s eye."
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[topic]
id=breeding_cycle
title= _ "Breeding Cycle"
text= _ "The time that passes between one <ref>dst=egg text='Egg'</ref> laying to the next."
text= _ "The time that passes between one <ref>dst=egg text='egg'</ref> laying to the next."
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[topic]
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[topic]
id=abyss
title= _ "Abyss"
text= _ "A vast and deadly waterfall where the ocean falls of the world disc."
text= _ "In the cosmology of the Drakes, a vast and deadly waterfall where the ocean falls off the world-disc."
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[topic]
id=spiral_path
title= _ "Spiral Path"
text= _ "A quasi-secret organization among the drakes devoted to somehow avoiding a Malthusian final war. See also <ref>dst='straight_path' text='Straight Path'</ref>"
text= _ "A quasi-secret organization among the drakes devoted to avoiding a Malthusian final war. See also <ref>dst='straight_path' text='Straight Path'</ref>"
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[topic]
id=straight_path
title= _ "Straight Path"
text= _ "'Those who follow the straight path' or short 'The Straight Path' as a single word for drakish traditions of perpetual expansion and conquest. This term is mostly used by the members of the <ref>dst='spiral_path' text='Spiral Path'</ref>."
text= _ "'The drakish tradition of perpetual expansion and conquest. This term is mostly used by the members of the <ref>dst='spiral_path' text='Spiral Path'</ref>."
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[topic]
id=dominant
title= _ "Dominant"
text= _ "The <ref>dst='aspirant' text='Aspirant'</ref> that established as the drake leader, the only drake in the tribe that is allowed to reproduce with the <ref>dst='breeder' text='breeders'</ref>. Rarely, he may confer breeding privileges on others."
text= _ "The <ref>dst='aspirant' text='Aspirant'</ref> that emerges as the drake leader, the only drake in the tribe that is allowed to reproduce with the <ref>dst='breeder' text='breeders'</ref>. Rarely, he may confer breeding privileges on others."
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[topic]
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[topic]
id=recorder
title= _ "Recorder"
text= _ "Drakish scrollkeeper whose have mastered the drakish <ref>dst='drakish_script' text='script'</ref>. The recorders are the only <ref>dst='caste' text='caste'</ref> of Drake not determined by biology: they recruit their members from all of the other castes."
text= _ "A Redorder is a Drakish scrollkeeper whose has mastered the drakish <ref>dst='drakish_script' text='script'</ref>. The recorders are the only <ref>dst='caste' text='caste'</ref> of Drake not determined by biology: they recruit their members from all of the other castes."
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[topic]
id=laying
title= _ "Laying"
text= _ "a period in the <ref>dst='breeding_cycle' text='breeding cycle'</ref>."
text= _ "A portion of the <ref>dst='breeding_cycle' text='breeding cycle'</ref>."
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[topic]
id=hatching
title= _ "Hatching"
text= _ "a period in the <ref>dst='breeding_cycle' text='breeding cycle'</ref>."
text= _ "A portion of the <ref>dst='breeding_cycle' text='breeding cycle'</ref>."
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[topic]
id=hatchling
title= _ "Hatchling"
text= _ "A young drake that hasn't seen another generation hatch. The younger of the current generation of hatchlings are the most aggressive is the behavior of the <ref>dst='flight' text='flight'</ref>."
text= _ "A young drake that has not yet seen another generation hatch. The younger of the current generation of hatchlings are the most aggressive is the behavior of the <ref>dst='flight' text='flight'</ref>."
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[topic]
id=egg
title= _ "Egg, Drake"
text= _ "The <ref>dst=caste text='caste'</ref> the <ref>dst='hatchling' text='Hatchling'</ref> will belongs to is determined by the time it is laid."
text= _ "The <ref>dst=caste text='caste'</ref> the <ref>dst='hatchling' text='Hatchling'</ref> will belongs to is determined by the time it is laid and to some extent the ambient temperature."
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[topic]
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[topic]
id=long_pig
title= _ "Long Pig"
text= _ "South Seas pidgin for human meat."
text= _ "South Seas pidgin for human meat, used to translate a Drakish word with the same meaning."
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[topic]
id=arkan_thoria
title= _ "Arkan-thoria"
text= _ "<ref>dst='heart_mountains' text='Heart Mountains'</ref>"
text= _ "A river rising in the <ref>dst='heart_mountains' text='Heart Mountains'</ref> and running east to the Listra."
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[topic]
id=great_ocean
title= _ "Great Ocean"
text= _ "Lies to the west of the <ref>dst='great_continent' text='continent'</ref> and all rivers eventually flow to it. In the middle of the great ocean is a huge archipelago called <ref>dst='morogor' text='Morogor'</ref>."
text= _ "Lies to the west of the <ref>dst='great_continent' text='continent'</ref> and all rivers eventually flow to it. Far to the west in the the Great Ocean is a huge archipelago called <ref>dst='morogor' text='Morogor'</ref>."
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[topic]
id=old_continent
title= _ "Old Continent"
text= _ "Lies in the west of <ref>dst='morogor' text='Morogor'</ref>."
text= _ "Lies to the west of <ref>dst='morogor' text='Morogor'</ref> across the <ref>dst='Great Ocean' text='Great Ocean'</ref>."
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