help: Prose revision of the Add-ons section

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id=..addons
title= _ "Add-ons"
text = _ "Wesnoths extensibility allows the thriving user community to develop content by making use of the game engines full potential to deliver new scenarios, campaigns, and more beyond what the official content set has to offer.
text = _ "The degree of customization offered by the Wesnoth engine allows players to create their own game content, including new scenarios, campaigns, and much more beyond what is offered in the official content bundled with the game.
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id=using_addons
title= _ "Using Add-ons"
text= _ "The game supports various types of add-ons that are used differently according to their purpose." + _ "
text= _ "The game supports different types of add-on content, which are not all available in every gameplay mode." + _ "
<header>text='Campaigns and Scenarios'</header>" + _ "
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<header>text='Multiplayer Campaigns, Scenarios, and Map Packs'</header>" + _ "
<italic>text='Multiplayer'</italic> games can be played on fully customized, scripted scenarios or even specially designed campaigns. There are also packs providing sets of individual multiplayer scenarios not connected in the form of a campaign." + _ "
<italic>text='Multiplayer'</italic> games can be played on fully customized, scripted scenarios or even specially designed campaigns. There are also packs providing sets of individual multiplayer scenarios." + _ "
<header>text='Multiplayer Eras and Factions'</header>" + _ "
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<header>text='Multiplayer Modifications'</header>" + _ "
Modifications are optional, scenario- and era-independent scripts for <italic>text='Multiplayer'</italic> games that can alter the default ruleset in various ways." + _ "
Modifications are optional scenario- and era-independent scripts for <italic>text='Multiplayer'</italic> games that can alter the default ruleset in various ways. You can choose and configure modifications when creating a new game." + _ "
<header>text='Creator Resources'</header>" + _"
Content authors can use resource packs available on the add-ons server to enrich their own content with existing assets such as images, music, and code. These are not generally intended for the players use and cannot be directly used in-game on their own; however, other playable add-ons may depend on them and suggest or require their installation during download."
Content authors can use resource packs available on the add-ons server to enrich their own content with existing assets such as images, music, and code. These are not generally intended for direct use in-game; however, other playable add-ons may depend on them and suggest or require their installation during download."
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id=installing_addons
title= _ "Installing Add-ons"
text = _ "User-made add-ons can be obtained and updated through the <italic>text='Add-ons'</italic> option in the main menu. After connecting to the add-ons server (by default <italic>text='add-ons.wesnoth.org'</italic>), you will be presented with a list of add-ons available in the server for downloading.
text = _ "User-made add-ons can be obtained and updated through the <italic>text='Add-ons'</italic> option in the main menu. After connecting to the add-ons server (by default <italic>text='add-ons.wesnoth.org'</italic>), you will be presented with a list of add-ons available on the server for downloading.
The installation status for each add-on is shown below each entry. For add-ons that are <italic>text='upgradable'</italic> or <italic>text='outdated'</italic> on the server, their installed and remote versions will be shown on the <italic>text='Version'</italic> column.
The installation status for each add-on is shown below each entry. For add-ons that are <italic>text='upgradable'</italic> or <italic>text='outdated'</italic> on the server, their installed and published versions will be shown in the <italic>text='Version'</italic> column.
To search for add-ons by using keywords, type them in any order in the <bold>text='Filter'</bold> box, separated by spaces. You can also sort the add-on list by clicking the column headers. It is also possible to choose to display only add-ons of specific categories by clicking on the <bold>text='Options'</bold> button on the top-right corner.
To search for add-ons by keywords, type any relevant terms in any order in the <bold>text='Filter'</bold> box, separated by spaces. You can also sort the add-on list by clicking the column headers. It is also possible to choose to only display add-ons of specific categories by clicking on the <bold>text='Options'</bold> button on the top-right corner.
To install an add-on, select it from the list and click <bold>text='OK'</bold>, or simply double click the add-ons title. The <bold>text='Description'</bold> button provides you with additional details about the add-on, such as its full description, installation status, and available languages."
To install an add-on, select it from the list and click <bold>text='OK'</bold>, or simply double-click on the add-ons title. The <bold>text='Description'</bold> button provides you with additional details about the add-on, such as its full description, installation status, and available languages."
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id=removing_addons
title= _ "Removing Add-ons"
text = _ "To remove add-ons, click <bold>text='Remove Add-ons'</bold> in the add-ons server connection dialog. You will be presented with options to remove any number of add-ons you currently have installed.
text = _ "To remove add-ons, choose <bold>text='Remove Add-ons'</bold> in the add-ons server connection dialog. You will be presented with options to remove any number of add-ons you currently have installed.
This feature cannot remove add-ons for which there is publishing information (<italic>text='.pbl'</italic> files) attached, in order to prevent accidental loss. Instead, you have to manually delete the information files or the add-ons themselves using your platforms facilities."
It is not possible to remove add-ons for which there is publishing information (<italic>text='.pbl'</italic> files) attached, in order to prevent its accidental loss. If necessary, you must manually delete the information files or the add-ons themselves using a file manager provided by your platform."
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