Following a discussion on IRC, change the name of Malin's hometown to...
...something that (a) doesn't sound like the Arabic word for ritually pure meat, and (b) fits with the phonotactics of other Wesnothian placenames.
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#textdomain wesnoth-did
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# ----- Saving Hal'al ----------------------------------------------------
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# ----- Saving Parthyn ----------------------------------------------------
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#define STORY_SAVING_HALAL
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[story]
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[part]
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story=_ "Malin Keshar was born 10 years after death of Haldric IV. He grew up in the northern border town of Hal'al, the second child and eldest son of the baron of the city. Every summer when the mountain passes became clear, orcs came down from the north to prove themselves in battle. Every year Hal'al's guards repelled the raids, though some of the townsfolk were always lost. Malin's father led raiding parties to disrupt the orc encampments and send the orcs back to the North."
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story=_ "Malin Keshar was born 10 years after death of Haldric IV. He grew up in the northern border town of Parthyn, the second child and eldest son of the baron of the city. Every summer when the mountain passes became clear, orcs came down from the north to prove themselves in battle. Every year Parthyn's guards repelled the raids, though some of the townsfolk were always lost. Malin's father led raiding parties to disrupt the orc encampments and send the orcs back to the North."
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[/part]
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[part]
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story=_ "When Malin was 10, a mage who passed through the town sensed strong magical abilities in the boy. His parents, seeing a chance for him to live away from the constant battles with the orcs, arranged for him to be sent to the mage community on the Isle of Alduin. There he studied for eight years, while back at home the orc raids increased in their frequency and ferocity. Before Malin could finish his training, however, he was expelled."
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[/part]
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[part]
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# good to have an arrow that arcs across the screen here
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story=_ "Malin returned to Hal'al just as summer began only to encounter more misfortune. Even as he arrived, an early, unexpected orc raid was being conducted against Hal'al. Malin watched as his father took an arrow in the chest and fell lifeless to the ground."
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story=_ "Malin returned to Parthyn just as summer began only to encounter more misfortune. Even as he arrived, an early, unexpected orc raid was being conducted against Parthyn. Malin watched as his father took an arrow in the chest and fell lifeless to the ground."
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[/part]
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[part]
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story=_ "Shaken by the loss of their commander, the human defense began to falter. As the orcs roared in anticipation of victory, skeleton warriors poured out of the woods to the orc's rear. The soldiers watched in amazement as the skeletons cut down orc after orc and then melted back into the forest."
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#define DIALOGUE_SH_START
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[message]
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speaker=narrator
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message=_ "Malin, troubled by his father's death, argues to no avail that Darken Volk be allowed to stay to help defend the town. The necromancer leaves Hal'al without incident."
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message=_ "Malin, troubled by his father's death, argues to no avail that Darken Volk be allowed to stay to help defend the town. The necromancer leaves Parthyn without incident."
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image=wesnoth-icon.png
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[/message]
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[message]
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#define DIALOGUE_SH_EXILE
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[message]
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speaker=Drogan
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message=_ "By all rights, I should have you executed on the spot, Malin. I certainly should have not given the necromancer the chance to corrupt you. Since I showed him mercy, however, I will give the same to you. You are hereby banished from Hal'al and all the Kingdom of Wesnoth."
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message=_ "By all rights, I should have you executed on the spot, Malin. I certainly should have not given the necromancer the chance to corrupt you. Since I showed him mercy, however, I will give the same to you. You are hereby banished from Parthyn and all the Kingdom of Wesnoth."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Malin Keshar
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story=_ "Fighting tears and rage, Malin follows the back-trail of the orcish band. He curses the elder mages for sending him from the Isle of Alduin half-prepared, only to be thrust into conflict. He curses Drogan for lacking the courage to see what must be done. Most fiercely, he curses the orcs for ravaging his family and home through their ceaseless attacks."
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[/part]
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[part]
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story=_ "Three days travel outside Hal'al, Malin meets Darken Volk, the same necromancer who had saved Hal'al and taught Malin to raise the dead not long ago. The necromancer takes pity on Malin in his friendless state, and asks Malin to travel with him. As the weeks pass, he teaches Malin more dark magic."
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story=_ "Three days travel outside Parthyn, Malin meets Darken Volk, the same necromancer who had saved Parthyn and taught Malin to raise the dead not long ago. The necromancer takes pity on Malin in his friendless state, and asks Malin to travel with him. As the weeks pass, he teaches Malin more dark magic."
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[/part]
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[/story]
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#enddef
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Darken Volk
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message=_ "Who knows? Perhaps removing the threat of orc raids will persuade the people of Hal'al to... welcome you home."
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message=_ "Who knows? Perhaps removing the threat of orc raids will persuade the people of Parthyn to... welcome you home."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Malin Keshar
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Malin Keshar
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message=_ "With the might of the undead at my command, many orcs will die this day. They shall pay for getting me banished from Hal'al."
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message=_ "With the might of the undead at my command, many orcs will die this day. They shall pay for getting me banished from Parthyn."
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[/message]
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#enddef
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#define DIALOGUE_OW_START
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[message]
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speaker=Malin Keshar
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message=_ "Since the very founding of Wesnoth you have hounded humans at every turn. You have raided my home at every opportunity. You have trampled our fields, slaughtered our livestock. You have brought war to a place of peace, and death to a place of life. You have killed without remorse, and despoiled that which was once beautiful. You have murdered my father and caused endless trouble to me. Now I shall have my revenge on you. Expect no mercy from me, because you have long since lost the right to it. I will crush you into the dust. The attacks on Hal'al will stop here and now. When I bring word of your demise the town will cheer my triumphant return."
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message=_ "Since the very founding of Wesnoth you have hounded humans at every turn. You have raided my home at every opportunity. You have trampled our fields, slaughtered our livestock. You have brought war to a place of peace, and death to a place of life. You have killed without remorse, and despoiled that which was once beautiful. You have murdered my father and caused endless trouble to me. Now I shall have my revenge on you. Expect no mercy from me, because you have long since lost the right to it. I will crush you into the dust. The attacks on Parthyn will stop here and now. When I bring word of your demise the town will cheer my triumphant return."
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Borth
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[/message]
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#enddef
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# ----- Return to Hal'al -------------------------------------------------
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# ----- Return to Parthyn -------------------------------------------------
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#define STORY_RETURN_TO_HALAL
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[story]
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[part]
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[/message]
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[message]
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role=advisor
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message=_ "Master, do not listen to the lies he tells. There is always a choice, and he chooses to attack you. He jeopardizes the safety of Hal'al!"
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message=_ "Master, do not listen to the lies he tells. There is always a choice, and he chooses to attack you. He jeopardizes the safety of Parthyn!"
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Malin Keshar
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Malin Keshar
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message=_ "Then you are the traitor, Drogan, for preventing me from protecting the city. I will defend Hal'al, and if you stand in my way I will cut you down for the treason you commit."
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message=_ "Then you are the traitor, Drogan, for preventing me from protecting the city. I will defend Parthyn, and if you stand in my way I will cut you down for the treason you commit."
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[/message]
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#enddef
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#define DIALOGUE_AAL_REALIZE
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[message]
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speaker=Malin Keshar
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message=_ "You let me believe Hal'al would accept me back so when they didn't I would be willing to attack my own countrymen!"
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message=_ "You let me believe Parthyn would accept me back so when they didn't I would be willing to attack my own countrymen!"
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Darken Volk
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#define DIALOGUE_AAL_END
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[message]
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speaker=Malin Keshar
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message=_ "The paladins will not be able to pursue me through the mountains, and Dela will not dare take the soldiers too far from Hal'al."
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message=_ "The paladins will not be able to pursue me through the mountains, and Dela will not dare take the soldiers too far from Parthyn."
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[/message]
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#enddef
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story=_ "So reads the book that Malin has reclaimed. 'The spells of necromancy bind the spirit, but only once it has been unbound from the body. To attain lich-dom, the mage must make the necessary incantations with his dying breaths. He thus binds his own spirit in much the same way necromancers bind the spirits of others. Because he retains his own will, however, the lich can call upon the awesome powers of the spirit world.'"
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[/part]
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[part]
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story=_ "The words, and the idea, stick in the back of his mind. With all of Wesnoth forbidden to him, Malin finds refuge in a nameless frontier village where few questions are asked. When word filters to the town that Hal'al has been overrun by orcs, it rekindles hatred within him. With renewed purpose, he raises his undead minions and travels northward."
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story=_ "The words, and the idea, stick in the back of his mind. With all of Wesnoth forbidden to him, Malin finds refuge in a nameless frontier village where few questions are asked. When word filters to the town that Parthyn has been overrun by orcs, it rekindles hatred within him. With renewed purpose, he raises his undead minions and travels northward."
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[/part]
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[part]
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story=_ "Malin soon finds the track of an enormous orc army, and follows them until he reaches their camp. As he sees the number or orcs, the enormity of his quest begins to dawn on him. He attacks the camp anyway but is quickly driven back, and badly injured by a thrown orcish dagger as he retreats. He finds refuge in a small cave."
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icon=units/undead-necromancers/dark-sorcerer.png~RC(magenta>black)
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name=_ "Descent Into Darkness"
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define=CAMPAIGN_DESCENT
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first_scenario=Saving_Halal
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first_scenario=Saving_Parthyn
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difficulties=EASY,NORMAL,HARD
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difficulty_descriptions={MENU_IMG_TXT2 "units/undead-necromancers/adept.png~RC(magenta>black)" _"Neophyte" _"(Normal)"} +
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";*" + {MENU_IMG_TXT2 "units/undead-necromancers/dark-sorcerer.png~RC(magenta>black)" _"Evoker" _"(Challenging)"} +
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[scenario]
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id=Saving_Halal
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id=Saving_Parthyn
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next_scenario=Peaceful_Valley
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#textdomain wesnoth-did
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name=_ "Saving Hal'al"
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map_data="{campaigns/Descent_Into_Darkness/maps/Saving_halal.map}"
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name=_ "Saving Parthyn"
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map_data="{campaigns/Descent_Into_Darkness/maps/Saving_Parthyn.map}"
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turns=15
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victory_when_enemies_defeated=no
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# Place starting units for Drogan and Malin
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{UNIT (Spearman) (River fort guard) ( _ "River fort guard") 1 30 11}
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{UNIT (Bowman) (River fort guard) ( _ "River fort guard") 1 31 12}
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{UNIT (Spearman) (River fort guard) ( _ "River fort guard") 1 31 13}
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{UNIT (Spearman) (Kerith) ( _ "Kerith") 1 30 11}
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{UNIT (Bowman) (Owain) ( _ "Owain") 1 31 12}
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{UNIT (Spearman) (Aethun) ( _ "Aethun") 1 31 13}
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{UNIT (Spearman) (Hal'al town guard) ( _ "Hal'al town guard") 3 5 17}
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{UNIT (Swordsman) (Hal'al town guard) ( _ "Hal'al town guard") 3 6 17}
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{UNIT (Spearman) (Hal'al town guard) ( _ "Hal'al town guard") 3 6 18}
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{UNIT (Spearman) (Yran) ( _ Yran) 3 5 17}
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{UNIT (Swordsman) (Luddry) ( _ Luddy) 3 6 17}
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{UNIT (Spearman) (Gwilam) ( _ Gwilam) 3 6 18}
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{VARIABLE malin_used_necromancy 0}
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[/event]
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[/filter]
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[message]
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speaker=narrator
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message=_ "Welcome to Hal'al"
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message=_ "Welcome to Parthyn"
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image=scenery/signpost.png
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[/message]
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[/filter]
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[message]
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speaker=Drogan
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message=_ "The orcs have broken through our line. Hal'al is open to attack!"
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message=_ "The orcs have broken through our line. Parthyn is open to attack!"
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[/message]
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[endlevel]
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result=defeat
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[/filter]
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[message]
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speaker=unit
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message=_ "Who will be left to defend Hal'al?"
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message=_ "Who will be left to defend Parthyn?"
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[/message]
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[endlevel]
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result=defeat
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[scenario]
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id=Orc_war
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next_scenario=Return_to_Halal
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next_scenario=Return_to_Parthyn
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#textdomain wesnoth-did
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name=_ "Orc War"
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[/else]
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[/if]
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# Store the 3rd orc leader for use in Return to Hal'al
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# Store the 3rd orc leader for use in Return to Parthyn
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[store_unit]
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[filter]
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canrecruit=1
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[scenario]
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id=Return_to_Halal
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id=Return_to_Parthyn
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next_scenario=A_Small_Favor
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#textdomain wesnoth-did
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name=_ "Return to Hal'al"
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map_data="{campaigns/Descent_Into_Darkness/maps/Return_to_halal.map}"
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name=_ "Return to Parthyn"
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map_data="{campaigns/Descent_Into_Darkness/maps/Return_to_Parthyn.map}"
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turns=-1
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victory_when_enemies_defeated=no
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[/objective]
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[objective]
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condition=lose
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description= _ "Kill any people from Hal'al but Drogan"
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description= _ "Kill any people from Parthyn but Drogan"
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[/objective]
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[objective]
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condition=lose
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[/filter]
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[message]
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speaker=narrator
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message=_ "Welcome to Hal'al"
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message=_ "Welcome to Parthyn"
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image=scenery/signpost.png
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[/message]
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[then]
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[message]
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speaker=Malin Keshar
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message=_ "Now the people of Hal'al will never accept me back!"
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message=_ "Now the people of Parthyn will never accept me back!"
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[/message]
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[endlevel]
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result=defeat
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