Liberty: text editing and work on Harper's character (#7854)

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### Add-ons client
### Add-ons server
### Campaigns
* Liberty
* Make Harper a girl and revise some dialogue
### Editor
### Multiplayer
### Lua API
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* Ancient Wose - cost changed from 48 to 50.
* Merman Entangler - cost changed from 46 to 42.
* Javelineer - cost changed from 48 to 55.
* Elvish Sylph - hp changed from 60 to 68, ranged slow damage changed from 6 to 7, ranged magical damage changed from 10 to 16, cost changed from 67 to 148.
* Elvish Sylph - hp changed from 60 to 68, ranged slow damage changed from 6 to 7, ranged magical damage changed from 10 to 16, cost changed from 67 to 148.
* Undead:
* Skeleton - xp changed from 35 to 39.
* Ghoul - xp changed from 35 to 30.
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* Troll Warrior - cost changed from 44 to 49.
* Naga Myrmidon - cost changed from 48 to 47.
* Orcish Nightblade - cost changed from 43 to 53.
* Orcish Slurbow - cost changed from 43 to 37.
* Orcish Slurbow - cost changed from 43 to 37.
* Loyalists:
* Cavalryman - blade resistance changed from 30% to 20%, xp changed from 40 to 44.
* Bowman - xp changed from 39 to 35, melee damage changed from 4 to 5.

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#textdomain wesnoth-l
# This version forked from 1.2, 2/10/2007, and prepared for mainline by ESR
[textdomain]
name="wesnoth-l"
[/textdomain]
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name = "Sonny T Yamada (SkyOne)"
comment = "Sprite animations (defense and attack) of Rogue Mage line"
[/entry]
[entry]
name = "Dalas"
comment = "Modifying Harper's portrait"
[/entry]
[/about]
[/campaign]

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[part]
#po: Some languages, including Norwegian and Old English, don't have a single word for "uncle", dividing it into
#po: mother's-brother vs. father's-brother. Baldras is Harper's mother's brother.
#po: In some human societies, including the Navaho and Akan, this would give him a special responsibility for the boy.
#po: Erwen is Baldras' younger sister, so languages with a special word for that should use it
story= _ "The sun were out today, but it were raining too. Weird mix of brightness and woe. Reminds me of the day Harpers pa died in that orc raid. Since my sis Erwen passed when he were young, poor lad had nobody but me. Never wanted no kid of my own but... hes mine to take care of now. Fine lad, that one, just a bit careless like his pa. I needs to keep a good eye on him now, with all them orcs running round here of late."
story= _ "The sun were out today, but it were raining too. Weird mix of brightness and woe. Reminds me of the day Harpers pa died in that orc raid. Since my sis Erwen passed when she were young, poor lass had nobody but me. Never wanted no kid of my own but... shes mine to take care of now. Fine lass, that one, just a bit careless like her pa. I needs to keep a good eye on her now, with all them orcs running round here of late."
background=story/frontier.webp
[/part]
[/story]
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type=Footpad_Peasant
id=Harper
name= _ "Harper"
gender=female
profile=portraits/harper.webp
x,y=8,30
side=1
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Harper
# po: Harper has a bit of an accent, but not as much as Baldras.
# po: He's a bit of a reckless kid as Baldras alludes to, but he's much more polite
# po: Harper has a bit of an accent, but not as much as Baldras. She's a bit reckless as Baldras alludes to, but is more polite.
# po: Harper is quite the tomboy and her personality should reflect that, she should use words that are exciting and high spirited
# po: She's also pretty young (teenagerish) so her dialogue should reflect some lack of experience or immaturity
message= _ "Uncle, we got no time to talk! Them riders are heading full speed straight for Dallben. Well need to chase them down through those woods, and fast, or we wont be able to catch up."
[/message]
[message]
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Baldras
message= _ "We dont got no choice, lad. If I dont gives them what they want, theyll make trouble for everyone in Dallben."
message= _ "We dont got no choice, lass. If I dont gives them what they want, theyll make trouble for everyone in Dallben."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Harper
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[/endlevel]
[/event]
[event]
name=attack
[filter]
id=Harper
[/filter]
[filter_second]
type=Goblin Pillager
[/filter_second]
[message]
speaker=Harper
# po: Harper has a scar from a fire burn on the right side of her face
message= _ "My face kinda itches... I gotta be careful around these big ones."
[/message]
[/event]
[event]
name=attack
[filter]
side=2
[/filter]
[filter_attack]
[not]
type=fire
[/not]
[/filter_attack]
[message]
speaker=Fal Khag
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[/message]
[/event]
[event]
name=attack
[filter]
side=2
[/filter]
[filter_attack]
type=fire
[/filter_attack]
[message]
speaker=Harper
message= _ "Ahh! I <i>really</i> dont like fire..."
[/message]
[/event]
[event]
name=last breath
[filter]

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[part]
story= _ "Baldras journal, 6 Deeproot, 501 YW:
Me and Harper visited Erwens grave today. I helped the lad pick her a bunch of flowers — we even found some of her favorite, blue lillies. Harper dont remember her much, but he still thinks lots about her. Lad reminds me so much of his ma often times, real bright and brassy, even if he dont got her sense or wits. Im just hoping he be learning more with time."
Me and Harper visited Erwens grave today. I helped the lass pick her a bunch of flowers — we even found some of her favorite, blue lillies. Harper dont remember her much, but still thinks lots about her. Lass reminds me so much of her ma often times, real bright and brassy, even if she dont got the same sense or wits. Im just hoping she be learning more with time."
background=story/frontier.webp
[/part]
[part]
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Baldras
message= _ "Stand fast, nephew."
message= _ "Stand fast, Harper."
[/message]
{MOVE_UNIT id=Tarwen 4 10}
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Baldras
message= _ "Impulsive lad..."
message= _ "Impulsive lass..."
[/message]
[/event]
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side=3
[/filter_second]
# this is from Monty Python and the Holy Grail :)
[message]
speaker=second_unit
#po: this is from Monty Python and the Holy Grail :)
message= _ "Help, help! Im being repressed!"
[/message]
[/event]

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background=story/frontier.webp
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "In times like these... I still wish Erwen was here with us. Little sis were always the better of us two. She always knew how to keep her temper and her wits about her. What would she say to me now? Probably something like, “Quit yapping ya old dog and focus on what youre doing. Weve got to be getting them people to safety.” Cheeky kid, that one. But, shed be right, I has me a responsibility to our people. Got a lot of trouble ahead of us..."
story= _ "In times like these... I still wish Erwen was here with us. Little sis were always the better of us two. She always knew how to keep her temper and her wits about her. What would she say to me now? Probably something like, “Quit yapping ya old dog and focus on what youre doing. Whats done is done. Just look at whats ahead of ya and get them people to safety.” Cheeky, that one. But, shed be right, I has me a responsibility to our people. Got a lot of trouble ahead of us..."
background=story/frontier.webp
[/part]
[/story]
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[message]
speaker=Thhsthss
# wmllint: local spellings Thissss
# wmllint: local spelling Thissss
message= _ "Thissss was not part of the deal..."
[/message]
[/event]
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[message]
speaker=Baldras
message= _ "Something be very wrong here. These orcs has weapons with Army forge-markings."
message= _ "Something be very wrong here. These orcs has weapons with army forge-markings."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Relana

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name=turn 4
[message]
speaker=Harper
message= _ "By the Light! Them things look like evil spirits! Are they those undead you told me about, Uncle?"
message= _ "Them things look like evil spirits! Are they those undead you told me about, Uncle?"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Baldras

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[message]
speaker=narrator
message= _ "Relentlessly pursued by riders patrolling the road to Elensefar, Baldras and his men traveled unseen along the swampy banks of the Great River to the city of Carcyn. They hid until nightfall, then crept out to find the help Lord Maddock hinted was here."
message= _ "Relentlessly pursued by riders patrolling the road to Elensefar, Baldras and the villagers traveled unseen along the swampy banks of the Great River to the city of Carcyn. They hid until nightfall, then crept out to find the help Lord Maddock hinted was here."
image="wesnoth-icon.png"
[/message]
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[message]
speaker=Link
message= _ "If you were one of my quarries, your throat would be slit by now, boy. As it is, you two are still in imminent danger. Just a week ago, the Crown sent a contingent of heavy infantry here to supervise the city. Theyre patrolling the streets and forests for us."
message= _ "If you were one of my quarries, your throat would be slit by now. As it is, you two are still in imminent danger. Just a week ago, the Crown sent a contingent of heavy infantry here to supervise the city. Theyre patrolling the streets and forests for us."
[/message]
[message]
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Baldras
message= _ "A fine job lad, but more sure gots to be coming. Lets keep movin."
message= _ "A fine job lass, but more sure gots to be coming. Lets keep movin."
[/message]
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background=story/frontier.webp
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "It be real lonesome like this. I still has me Harper, and I be grateful for the boy, but he dont really understand an old man like me. I know the past be the past, but I just cant help but think of sis in times like these. How she used to be dragging me out on some silly little romp, a little job here and there for some gold or lil trinket, or sometimes just for fun... I never wanted to go, of course. I were always real lazy. Still am, even now."
story= _ "It be real lonesome like this. I still has me Harper, and I be grateful for the lass, but she dont really understand an old man like me. I know the past be the past, but I just cant help but think of sis in times like these. How she used to be dragging me out on some silly little romp, a little job here and there for some gold or lil trinket, or sometimes just for fun... I never wanted to go, of course. I were always real lazy. Still am, even now."
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[/part]
[part]
story= _ "Then, Harper tells me, “Come on Uncle, were on an adventure! Dont be so mopey, live a little!” I know he be trying to be cheery, but he really dont know how much he be reminding me of her sometimes..."
story= _ "Then, Harper tells me, “Come on Uncle, were on an adventure! Dont be so mopey, live a little!” I know she be trying to be cheery, but she really dont know how much she be reminding me of Erwen sometimes..."
background=story/frontier.webp
[/part]
[part]
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Harper
message= _ "The great fort standing between Aldril and Elensefar?"
message= _ "That big ol fort between Aldril and Elensefar?"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Baldras
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Helicrom
message= _ "Im not asking you to fight a war. A direct fight against Weldyns armies would be undoubtedly foolish. However, we have other means within our grasp. From Dan Tonk to Halstead, the fastest path lies through the pass between the Brown Hills and the Gryphon Mountains followed by the trek through these Grey Woods. We are in prime position to gnaw away at their troops, crippling their forces before they ever arrive at their destination."
message= _ "Im not asking you to fight a war. A direct fight against Weldyns armies would be undoubtedly foolish. However, we have other means within our grasp. From DanTonk to Halstead, the fastest path lies through the pass between the Brown Hills and the Gryphon Mountains followed by the trek through these Grey Woods. We are in prime position to gnaw away at their troops, crippling their forces before they ever arrive at their destination."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Baldras
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[message]
speaker=Helicrom
message= _ "My men and I shall pincer them from the other side of this path. When we are done, no one shall fear the open roads and night sky more than the armies of Weldyn. Strike quickly, strike silently... and leave no one alive."
message= _ "We shall pincer them from the other side of this path. When we are done, no one shall fear the open roads and night sky more than the armies of Weldyn. Strike quickly, strike silently... and leave no one alive."
[/message]
[store_unit]
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[message]
speaker=Baldras
message= _ "I know what you is going to say, Harper. That we should be fighting for our homes, just like we do against them orcs. But we be risking everything on this, lad."
message= _ "I know what you is going to say, Harper. That we should be fighting for our homes, just like we do against them orcs. But we be risking everything on this, lass."
[/message]
[message]
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[message]
speaker=Helicrom
message= _ "The boy is naive, but his spirit is in the right place. You risk your homes and the lives of your people, yes, but what good will they be if you live in tyranny? Believe me, I have been there. I would rather die than go back."
message= _ "The girl is naive, but her spirit is in the right place. You risk your homes and the lives of your people, yes, but what good will they be if you live in tyranny? Believe me, I have been there. I would rather die than go back."
[/message]
[message]

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[part]
story= _ "From the Annals of Alduin, 98 YW
One score and eight years ago, in 70 YW, the King of Wesnoth and the Lord of Elensefar signed a treaty of trade and alliance in order to further the security of humankind. The realization of this treaty required the creation of a safe path between Weldyn and Elensefar, with all manner of hostile creature or beast scoured from these civilized lands. From Dan Tonk, the establishment of Aldril and Carcyn secured the once hazardous passage alongside the Grey Woods, completing the way between the two cities. With this, the alliance can truly be deemed a coalition of men."
One score and eight years ago, in 70 YW, the King of Wesnoth and the Lord of Elensefar signed a treaty of trade and alliance in order to further the security of humankind. The realization of this treaty required the creation of a safe path between Weldyn and Elensefar, with all manner of hostile creature or beast scoured from these civilized lands. From DanTonk, the establishment of Aldril and Carcyn secured the once hazardous passage alongside the Grey Woods, completing the way between the two cities. With this, the alliance can truly be deemed a coalition of men."
[/part]
[part]
background=story/Halstead.webp
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Dommel
message= _ "I do not care. I would be a fool and an oaf to let a band of stinky raider orcs into Halstead without a fight."
message= _ "As if those could possibly be real. I would be a fool and an oaf to let a band of stinky raider orcs into Halstead without a fight."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Vashna

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[/part]
[part]
story= _ "I sended Harper off to Delwyn. Hope hell find something there. In the meantimes, Ill rest this tired body for a little and go see sis, maybe pick her up some lilies. Seems like thisll probably be the last time I gets to see her..."
story= _ "I sended Harper off to Delwyn. Hope shell find something there. In the meantimes, Ill rest this tired body for a little and go see sis, maybe pick her up some lilies. Seems like thisll probably be the last time I gets to see her..."
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "Shell tell me not to be sad, of course. That life just be a big adventure and filled with fun, that I shouldnt think about stuffs I cant change. The world be huge and vast, much bigger than small little people like me. I dont got the power to change it, so why not try to live as best I can? Besides, shell say that I still gots me a little piece of her in Harper, so I should cherish the lad."
story= _ "Shell tell me not to be sad, of course. That life just be a big adventure and filled with fun, that I shouldnt think about stuffs I cant change. The world be huge and vast, much bigger than small little people like me. I dont got the power to change it, so why not try to live as best I can? Besides, shell say that I still gots me a little piece of her in Harper, so I should cherish the lass."
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "I do, Erwen, I really do. This all be real hard. I dont be no brave soul, nor some great warrior, but I does my best. And I havent forgotten about all them good times we had together ― somehow, some way, they keeps me going. Me and Harper, we wont give up till the very end."
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[part]
story= _ "14 Scryers Bloom, 501 YW
Harper got back today from Delwyn. Said he didnt find no one alive there, but he did bring back a note he found. Lets see what it says."
Harper got back today from Delwyn. Said she didnt find no one alive there, but she did bring back a note she found. Lets see what it says."
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[/part]
[part]