Punctuation, capitalization, and minor usage fixes for TRoW.

Also, alter Haldric's portrait so he's not wearing a rabid-dog snarl all
the time.  Original portrait is now haldric-mad.png; I have added uses
at apprpriate places.

It would be nice if someone with more art skills than me would unclench
Haldric's fist in the non-mad portrait.
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Eric S. Raymond 2007-09-25 22:11:35 +00:00
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24 changed files with 49 additions and 18 deletions

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[/message]
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
message= _ "Onward to victory!"
[/message]
[message]
@ -224,6 +225,7 @@
[/filter]
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
message= _ "Feel my wrath, you fiend!"
[/message]
[/event]

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[/option]
[option]
message= _ "Your word can't be trusted. Prepare to meet your Gods!"
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[command]
[message]
description=Wesfolk Leader
@ -382,7 +383,7 @@
[/message]
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "But Father!"
message= _ "But, Father!"
[/message]
[message]
id=msgT1_16
@ -433,7 +434,7 @@
[/filter]
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "Our Home! Where shall we go!"
message= _ "Our home! Where shall we go!"
[/message]
[message]
description=King Eldaric IV

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@ -137,6 +137,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "Argh, the orcish vanguard must have flanked us even further to the east! They're already holding the mouth of the pass. We have to get out of the mountain pass before winter comes or we're all dead meat!"
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[message]
@ -195,7 +196,7 @@
[message]
description=Burin the Lost
message= _ "I'm a dwarf! Damn fool of a boy! I got lost while exploring deep underground, almost a century ago. I've never found my way home. But it seems nice enough here."
message= _ "I'm a dwarf, you fool of a boy! I got lost while exploring deep underground, almost a century ago. I've never found my way home. But it seems nice enough here."
[/message]
[message]
@ -224,6 +225,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "We're trapped in the pass! I can see their reinforcements! All is lost! Is that... Is that snow?... We're doomed!"
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[/event]

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@ -271,6 +271,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "Maybe they'll clear it some time after the APOCALYPSE is OVER!"
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[message]
description=Minister Edmond

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@ -184,6 +184,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "It is as we suspected, the orcs have sacked the Midlands. This is not a civilized way to fight a war! Look there, there are still orcs about... To arms!"
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[message]

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@ -303,6 +303,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "Without the help of these tree-folk we'll be trapped in these woods till we die! There will be nothing to hold the orcs back!"
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[message]
description=Burin the Lost
@ -372,7 +373,7 @@
[then]
[message]
description=Lady Outlaw
message= _ "Young Prince, while the Lich-lords have betrayed us by allying themselves with that orcish scum, I can't bring myself to fight against one of the greatest leaders of my people."
message= _ "Young Prince, while the lich-lords have betrayed us by allying themselves with that orcish scum, I can't bring myself to fight against one of the greatest leaders of my people."
[/message]
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
@ -406,6 +407,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "We have run out of time... We'll be trapped in these woods until we die!"
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[/event]
[/scenario]

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@ -160,6 +160,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "Let's send these monsters to their final rest."
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[/event]
@ -304,7 +305,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "It's funny that the Lich-Lord didn't have this on his person. Since I don't actually know what this thing does, I'll just put it in the bottom of my pack for right now."
message= _ "It's funny that the lich-Lord didn't have this on his person. Since I don't actually know what this thing does, I'll just put it in the bottom of my pack for right now."
[/message]
[if]

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[/message]
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "That's horrible!"
[/message]
@ -964,6 +964,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "We needed him to get out of here. We're trapped!"
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[endlevel]
@ -1016,7 +1017,7 @@
[message]
description=Commander Aethyr
message= _ "My family was from Southbay. My father was a soldier there. The city's sewer entrance is near that fossil of a Lich."
message= _ "My family was from Southbay. My father was a soldier there. The city's sewer entrance is near that fossil of a lich."
[/message]
[message]

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@ -675,6 +675,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "I can hear their reinforcements coming! We're trapped! All is lost!"
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[/event]

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@ -187,6 +187,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "Nooo! The wizards are flooding the sewer. We're doomed!"
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[/event]
@ -404,7 +405,7 @@
name=victory
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "Finally on to Southbay!"
message= _ "Finally, on to Southbay!"
[/message]
{CLEAR_VARIABLE wiz_dead}

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@ -128,6 +128,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "You should not say such things!"
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[message]
description=King Addroran IX

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@ -306,7 +306,7 @@
[/move_unit_fake]
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "Ouch! Hot, hot, hot! Gee, somebody should really attach this thing to a scepter or something! I think I'll save it for closer ranged combat for now."
message= _ "Ouch! Hot, hot, hot! Gee, somebody should really attach this thing to a scepter or something! I think I'll save it for closer-ranged combat for now."
[/message]
[message]
description=Lady Jessica
@ -666,6 +666,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "We needed him to hold Southbay. We're done for!"
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[endlevel]

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@ -288,7 +288,7 @@
name=victory
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "We've defeated the Nagas. The fleet should be able to regroup here."
message= _ "We've defeated the nagas. The fleet should be able to regroup here."
[/message]
[message]

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@ -324,7 +324,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "May the currents carry you swiftly my friend. (whispered) Jessica, send word that a third of the fleet is to return to the Green Isle, to look for more survivors. If they return tell them to keep returning until no more survivors are found."
message= _ "May the currents carry you swiftly, my friend. (whispered) Jessica, send word that a third of the fleet is to return to the Green Isle, to look for more survivors. If they return tell them to keep returning until no more survivors are found."
[/message]
[message]
description=Prince Haldric

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@ -166,6 +166,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "Lord Logalmier, I shall defeat your dragon."
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[if]
[variable]
@ -197,6 +198,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "Those cold blooded monsters will feel my wrath!"
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[if]
[variable]
@ -613,7 +615,7 @@
[message]
description=Lord Logalmier
message= _ "No. The dwarves have returned to the north. But humans mine as well. No? They are your resources to guard now. In the future we would be willing to trade with you."
message= _ "No. The Dwarves have returned to the north. But humans mine as well. No? They are your resources to guard now. In the future we would be willing to trade with you."
[/message]
[move_unit_fake]

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@ -348,7 +348,7 @@
numerical_equals=0
[/variable]
[then]
{UNIT (Fire Dragon) (Shek'kahan) ( _ "Shek'kahan") 5 20 27}
{UNIT (Fire Dragon) ("Shek'kahan") ( _ "Shek'kahan") 5 20 27}
[set_variable]
name=dragon_awake
@ -375,7 +375,7 @@
numerical_equals=0
[/variable]
[then]
{UNIT (Fire Dragon) (Shek'kahan) ( _ "Shek'kahan") 5 20 27}
{UNIT (Fire Dragon) ("Shek'kahan") ( _ "Shek'kahan") 5 20 27}
[set_variable]
name=dragon_awake
@ -388,6 +388,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "I do, you fiend!"
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
{GOLD_TO_BADDIES}
[/then]
@ -432,7 +433,7 @@
[then]
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "The Dragon's Cave has yielded some treasure!"
message= _ "The dragon's cave has yielded some treasure!"
[/message]
{LOOT 200 1}
[/then]
@ -470,7 +471,7 @@
[then]
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "We've slain the Dragon: "
message= _ "We've slain the dragon: "
[option]
message= _ "Let's get out of here!"
@ -515,6 +516,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "More saurians are arriving. They've surrounded us! We're doomed."
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[/event]
[/scenario]

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[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "Us, monsters? Hmph... prepare to meet our blades."
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[message]
@ -195,6 +196,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "Ick! When you kill them they divide."
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[/event]

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[/message]
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "Get her before she can cause too much trouble!"
message= _ "Get her before she ensorcels us all!"
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[objectives]
side=1
@ -355,7 +356,7 @@
[message]
description=Minister Edmond
message= _ "All soldiers of Darkness will meet the same fate by my hand."
message= _ "All soldiers of darkness will meet the same fate by my hand."
[/message]
[/event]

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@ -270,6 +270,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "We are a refugee people. We must push back their vanguard, and secure our beachhead. If they capture our ships all is lost. We will be crushed under a tide of orcs."
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[store_unit]

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[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "They've undoubtedly spotted the smoke from the orcish fires. We have to defeat these monsters before everybody starves at sea, or before Jevyan launches an attack with his fleet."
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[message]
description=Commander Aethyr

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[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "Recent events have taught me one thing: that survival trumps honor. Besides, they won't be screaming at me - I'll be dead."
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[message]
description=Lady Jessica
@ -213,6 +214,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "No, this is my sacrifice to make!"
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[message]

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[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "This ends here, Jevyan. Even if I believed your words I couldn't give you the Ruby of Fire."
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[message]
description=Lich-Lord Jevyan
@ -343,6 +344,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "A fool, or a desperate band of refugees!"
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[message]
description=Lich-Lord Jevyan
@ -359,6 +361,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "It matters little, because here you fall!"
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[message]
description=Sir Ruddry
@ -375,6 +378,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "Charge!"
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[message]
description="Ut'Tan-Grorag"
@ -676,6 +680,7 @@
[message]
description=Prince Haldric
message= _ "Aethyr! No! He was critical for convincing Jevyan that the elves have the Ruby of Fire."
image=portraits/haldric-mad.png
[/message]
[endlevel]