Changes to some message text.

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John Muccigrosso 2004-02-26 06:36:35 +00:00
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@ -80,13 +80,13 @@ Defeat:
[story]
[part]
id=isledamn_1
story="But the voyage did not go as smoothly as had been hoped. A storm lashed down on the ship, all hands were on deck, trying desperately to save the ship. As Konrad attempted to secure the mast, a sudden gust of wind flung him overboard..."
id=isledamn_1a
story="But the voyage did not go as smoothly as had been hoped. A storm blew up and bore down on the ship. Though all hands were on deck working desperately, a sudden gust of wind flung Konrad overboard as he attempted to secure the sails..."
image="misc/story9.png"
[/part]
[part]
id=isledamn_2
story="The mermen saved Konrad from the seas, but were not able to get him back to the ship. Instead, they had to resort to taking him to a nearby island..."
id=isledamn_2a
story="The mermen finally saved Konrad from the sea, but were unable to get him back to the ship. With great effort though, they reached a nearby island..."
image="misc/map.png"
[/part]
[/story]
@ -100,18 +100,18 @@ Defeat:
[/message]
[message]
description=Kalba
id=isledamn_4
message="There have been ill tidings about this island, my lord. It is said that the fiends of the undead have overtaken it, and it has fallen into ugly wasteland."
id=isledamn_4a
message="We have heard only the worst things about this place, my lord. It is said that the fiends of the undead have come in great numbers and turned the island into an ugly wasteland."
[/message]
[message]
description=Konrad
id=isledamn_5
message="Let us hope these rumors are not true! I have none of my men with me! How would I defend myself?"
message="Let's hope these rumors are not true! I have none of my men with me! How could I defend myself?"
[/message]
[message]
description=Kalba
id=isledamn_6
message="There are still some bands of humans hidding on this island, my lord, perhaps if you recruit some of them to help you, we might have some hope of holding off the undead hordes!"
message="There are still some bands of humans hiding on the island, my lord. If you recruit some of them to help, we might have some hope of holding off the undead hordes!"
[/message]
[unit]
description=Bob
@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ Defeat:
[message]
description=Bob
id=isledamn_7
message="Maybe we could make a deal! Help us to defeat those evil creatures."
message="Maybe we can make a deal! Help us defeat those evil creatures!"
[/message]
[disallow_recruit]
side=1
@ -271,7 +271,7 @@ Defeat:
[message]
id=isle_damned_found2
description=Konrad
message="It is a shame complete victory could not be ours, but thank goodness I am rescued! On to Elensefar!"
message="It's a shame complete victory could not be ours, but thank goodness I am rescued! On to Elensefar!"
[/message]
[/command]
[command]