Low dialog polish.

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Eric S. Raymond 2010-08-10 15:42:11 +00:00
parent 14d4372419
commit 4c21a49f07
7 changed files with 73 additions and 27 deletions

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id=Spahr
message= _ "They took all our treasure! Quickly, place ambushers on all trails from here to Wesmere. I will give 500 gold to whoever kills their leader. They must not escape."
[/message]
[message]
id=Kalenz
#po: "fare" is an archaic English verb meaning to travel or move.
message= "_ Turnabout is fair play. Now that we've retrieved the gold, let us fare swiftly back to Wesmere and bring the gold back as Cleodil whishes. The Saurians will likely be infesting the direct route, so we will detour to the north. "
[/message]
[message]
id=Landar
#TODO ESR
message= "_ It is on us to use it against our enemies, no matter from whom it was stolen from. At least it is the owners' advantage if it is spend for elvenblood preserving their safety."
message= _ "But Kalenz, this is a boon unlooked for! With the surplus gold we could take the war immediately to the Orcs. We could come down upon them like thunder while they believe us still reeling from their invasion!"
[/message]
[message]
id=Cleodil
#TODO ESR
message= "_ Let's hope it will bring fortune to the hearts of all those folks it has been stolen from. But it's not on us to rule over it's purpose. We must return it to the Ka'lian."
message= _ "But the Ka'lian's gold is the Ka'lian's. Would you have us divide our forces, some to return it to them while others attempt your thunder-stroke?"
[/message]
[message]
id=Kalenz
#TODO ESR
#po: "fare" is an archaic English verb meaning to travel or move.
message= "_ Turnabout is fair play. Now that we've retrieved the gold, let us fare swiftly back to Wesmere and bring the gold back as Cleodil whishes. The Saurians will likely be infesting the direct route, so we will detour to the north. "
message= _ "Cleodil's doubt is wise. Only a foolish commander divides his numbers in the presence of superior numbers; to do so is to invite defeat in detail."
[/message]
[message]
id=Cleodil
message= _ "Landar, thoughts that brew in hot blood are seldom well-found."
[/message]
[message]
id=Landar
message= _ "It...is so. Again you speak wisdom. Very well; to the Ka'lian!"
[/message]
#ifdef MULTIPLAYER
{LOOT 900 1}

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[/message]
[message]
id=Landar
#TODO ESR
message= "_ This is not the end. The elvish star has just begun to raise it's light."
message= _ "Galtrid, speak not of defeat. Elvenkind shall rise! Our enemies shall perish in blood and fire!"
[/message]
[message]
id=Cleodil
#TODO ESR
message= "_ You maybe right. But under which light will it set the elvish fate?"
message= _ "It is a dark day indeed when elves must steel themselves with dreams of slaughter."
[/message]
[message]
id=Grubr
@ -447,7 +445,7 @@
[/message]
[message]
id=Kalenz
message= _ "These are hardened orc and troll veterans. Men, prepare for a long, hard fight..."
message= _ "These are hardened orc and troll veterans. Men, prepare for a long, difficult fight..."
[/message]
[/event]
### INTRO ####

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title= _ "Aftermath"
story= _ "After leaving the council, our friends talked in private..."
[/part]
[part]
background="story/characters/kalenz.png"
scale_background=no
story={CAPTION ( _ "Kalenz")} + _ "Perhaps you were wiser than I, Landar. Had we divided our forces, we would not be bound to inaction now."
[/part]
[part]
background="story/characters/cleodil.png"
scale_background=no
story={CAPTION ( _ "Cleodil")} + _ "I too am troubled by the council's passivity. But it was not our decision to make."
[/part]
[part]
# TODO replace with angry portrait?
background="story/characters/kalenz.png"

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@ -370,9 +370,13 @@
message= _ "Crossing the river without a bridge? We dwarves know water is a very dangerous thing!"
[/message]
[message]
id=Kalenz
id=Cleodil
message= _ "Indeed, this river is, I believe, Arkan-Thoria. There are fell legends about it. May be they are but children's tales...still, be very careful when you cross it."
[/message]
[message]
id=Kalenz
message= _ "You speak my thought, Cleodil. Close in behind me; I'll guard you from harm myself. Look to your weapons as we cross, all! And be wary."
[/message]
#TODO change for multiplayer
[message]

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speaker=unit
message= _ "It's...it's monstrous!"
[/message]
[message]
id=Cleodil
message= _ "I sense no malice in it; we are the interlopers here. Spare it if you can."
[/message]
#TODO this unit is normaly under fog of war.
[scroll_to_unit]

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message= _ "So it is true! The elves have come to our aid!"
[/message]
[message]
id=Landar
#TODO ESR
message= "_ I can't believe that I am here myself."
id=Olurf
message= "_ Hey! Do I look like an elf?"
[/message]
[message]
id=Olurf
#TODO ESR
message= "_ Do I look like an elf?"
id=Landar
message= "_ I can scarce believe I am fighting besides these betrayers."
[/message]
[message]
id=Cleodil
#TODO ESR
message= "_ Don't worry Landar, the orcs being defeated is in our own interrest."
message= "_ We cannot be choosy about our allies when our need is dire."
[/message]
[message]
id=Kalenz
message= "_ Indeed not. Save your anger for our enemies, Landar"
[/message]
[message]
id=Landar
message= "_ I shall. But when our need is not so dire, there must be a reckoning..."
[/message]
[message]
id=Tan-Grub
@ -720,9 +725,7 @@
[then]
[message]
role=l3_store
#TODO ESR it's not Kalenz that is arriving but the speaker.
#Something like "Kalenz is here!" or "We have found Kalenz!" fits better.
message= _ "Kalenz has arrived!"
message= _ "Kalenz! We come to fight beside you!"
[/message]
[message]
id=Kalenz
@ -732,8 +735,18 @@
role=l3_store
message= _ "The Great Council has decided it was too risky to send troops here. But some of us dissented and have come to fight beside you."
[/message]
#TODO some speak for Landar
#TODO some speak for Cleodil
[message]
id=Landar
message= _ "That is well! If the Ka'lian is too fearful or blind to see what is needed, we must do it ourselves."
[/message]
[message]
id=Cleodil
message= _ "It is not well that we have become so divided as this."
[/message]
[message]
id=Kalenz
message= _ "No, it is not. But if we do not defeat these orcs here and now our divisions will all be moot. I will take every sword-arm I can get and be glad of them."
[/message]
[/then]
[/if]
#TODO else -- the player has to know that the kalian refused help.
@ -814,6 +827,10 @@
id=Cleodil
message= _ "And we revived the alliance with the humans, which is no small thing."
[/message]
[message]
id=Olurf
message= _ "A good fight against foul enemies. These orcs make a dwarf's hackles rise; I might even fight them for free, next time."
[/message]
[message]
id=Aldar
message= _ "The King is here! Hail Haldric II, King of Wesnoth!"

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message= _ "This is my time and I will kill anyone who disputes it!"
[/message]
[message]
id=Kalenz
id=Landar
message= _ "The plan is working! Now we will take back what's ours!"
[/message]
[message]
id=Kalenz
message= _ "Softly, Landar. We still have to get out of here..."
[/message]
[/event]
{campaigns/Legend_of_Wesmere/utils/deaths.cfg}