UtBS: fixed dialogue typos

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Asa Swain 2006-04-27 15:06:49 +00:00
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5 changed files with 72 additions and 72 deletions

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@ -1728,7 +1728,7 @@ name=victory
[message]
description=Garak
message= _ "I fear what dangers lurk in the harsh sands and to beyond to the north, but because you are our leader, I will follow your counsel."
message= _ "I fear what dangers lurk in the harsh sands and beyond to the north, but because you are our leader, I will follow your counsel."
[/message]
[message]

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@ -222,7 +222,7 @@ victory_when_enemies_defeated=no
[story]
[part]
story= _ "Chapter 6: The dwarf Grendel lead us through a maze of twisting passages speaking scarcely a word. Finally after what seemed like hours of marching he stopped. He motioned us to be very quiet and we crept forward, all I could hear was the soft patter of feet and my heavy breathing. Even that little noise seemed to echo off the cramped walls of our rough hewn passage. I was suddenly aware of the sheer mass of rock and earth above us and for a moment I despaired of ever seeing the sun again. Then I grabbed my sword with fresh determination and vowed to see this mission through."
story= _ "Chapter 6: The dwarf Grendel led us through a maze of twisting passages speaking scarcely a word. Finally, after what seemed like hours of marching, he stopped. He motioned us to be very quiet and we crept forward; all I could hear was the soft patter of feet and my heavy breathing. Even that little noise seemed to echo off the cramped walls of our rough-hewn passage. I was suddenly aware of the sheer mass of rock and earth above us and for a moment I despaired of ever seeing the sun again. Then I grabbed my sword with fresh determination and vowed to see this mission through."
[/part]
[/story]
@ -591,7 +591,7 @@ name=start
[message]
description=Grendel
message= _ "This passage leads very close to the troll's main lair, you can hear them tromping back and forth just past the eastern wall. All that separates us from the trolls is a thin wall of stone. I've had me boys mine the end of the tunnel with explosives; when you move a unit adjacent to the final wall, I'll blow the charges and open the way. The troll leader should only be lightly defended, he's sent most of his best warriors to the front. You'll know the head troll when you see him, he's big, green and extra ugly."
message= _ "This passage leads very close to the trolls' main lair; you can hear them tromping back and forth just past the eastern wall. All that separates us from the trolls is a thin wall of stone. I've had me boys mine the end of the tunnel with explosives; when you move a unit adjacent to the final wall, I'll blow the charges and open the way. The troll leader should only be lightly defended; he's sent most of his best warriors to the front. You'll know the head troll when you see him, he's big, green and extra ugly."
[/message]
[message]
@ -774,7 +774,7 @@ first_time_only=no
[message]
description=Grendel
message= _ "My work here is done. I must report back to my King. I have many more things to do before the day is done, but I will ere you finish your mission. Fight well!"
message= _ "My work here is done. I must report back to my King. I have many more things to do before the day is done, but I will once you finish your mission. Fight well!"
[/message]
# Have him leave
@ -874,7 +874,7 @@ name=moveto
[message]
description=Troll Interrogator
message= _ "Tell us where you leader is hiding!"
message= _ "Tell us where your leader is hiding!"
[/message]
[message]
@ -989,7 +989,7 @@ name=moveto
[message]
description=Ulg
message= _ "I'm gonna make you squeal dwarf!"
message= _ "I'm gonna make you squeal, dwarf!"
[/message]
[/event]
@ -1360,7 +1360,7 @@ message= _ "Woah. This place is hot."
[message]
speaker=unit
message= _ "This cavern is so hot it's stifling, I can already feel my armor heating up, if we tarry here too long we'll roast alive. And I don't even want to think about what would happen if I tried to walk across the lava. On the other hand, the lava does light up the cavern nicely. I'm just thankful the trolls constructed a bridge across the lava."
message= _ "This cavern is so hot it's stifling; I can already feel my armor heating up. If we tarry here too long we'll roast alive. I don't even want to think about what would happen if I tried to walk across the lava. On the other hand, the lava does light up the cavern nicely. I'm just thankful the trolls constructed a bridge across the lava."
[/message]
[message]
@ -1422,7 +1422,7 @@ message= _ "Uh, I take that back. Still, the trolls don't seem to be advancing.
[message]
speaker=narrator
message= _ "Any unit that ends it's turn on a lava hex, except the Desert Shyde and Star who can fly over the lava, will take 25 damage at the beginning of the next turn. This lava damage can kill units. Desert Shydes and Stars will just take $temp_damage damage per turn when flying over lava, though they too can die if they spend too much time over lava. Also because of the heat in the cavern, all units on cave floor hexes will take $temp_damage damage at the start of each turn. This heat damage can reduce a unit to 1 hit point, but it can't kill it. "
message= _ "Any unit that ends its turn on a lava hex, except the Desert Shyde and Star who can fly over the lava, will take 25 damage at the beginning of the next turn. This lava damage can kill units. Desert Shydes and Stars will just take $temp_damage damage per turn when flying over lava, though they too can die if they spend too much time over lava. Also because of the heat in the cavern, all units on cave floor hexes will take $temp_damage damage at the start of each turn. This heat damage can reduce a unit to 1 hit point, but it can't kill it. "
[/message]
{CLEAR_VARIABLE temp_damage}
@ -1587,7 +1587,7 @@ add=1
[message]
side=1
x,y=16-29,11-23
message= _ "What the heck is that? I sure doesn't look good. The last thing we need in here is even more fire."
message= _ "What the heck is that? It sure doesn't look good. The last thing we need in here is even more fire."
[/message]
[set_variable]
@ -1891,7 +1891,7 @@ value=3
[message]
x,y=18,23
message= _ "Despite the fire guardians, the elves has almost crossed the lava!"
message= _ "Despite the fire guardians, the elves have almost crossed the lava!"
[/message]
[message]
@ -2022,16 +2022,16 @@ side=1
side=7
#ifdef EASY
income=0
gold=100
income=2
gold=110
#endif
#ifdef MEDIUM
income=2
gold=125
income=4
gold=140
#endif
#ifdef HARD
income=4
gold=150
income=6
gold=170
#endif
[/modify_side]
@ -2106,7 +2106,7 @@ message= _ "Destroy the invaders! Make them pay for their slaughter!"
[message]
description=High Advisor
message= _ "Arise our brothers of ages past, arise and destroy the intruders!"
message= _ "Arise, our brothers of ages past! Arise and destroy the intruders!"
[/message]
{UNIT_ (Troll Zombie) () 7 39 22}
@ -2236,17 +2236,17 @@ time=200
[message]
description=Grendel
message= _ "News travels fast. The chaos you have sown has caused the foul trolls to start retreating. And now the architect of our suffering is dead. This war is far from over, but with your help we won this battle. You have our gratitude. Our King has instructed us to bring you to him, he wants to talk with you and reward you. He waits in our most hallowed halls, a place that no elf has seen for generations upon generations. It is a great honor, but you have done great deeds this day. Elves killing a troll chieftain! We will tell this story for years."
message= _ "News travels fast. The chaos you have sown has caused the foul trolls to start retreating. And now the architect of our suffering is dead. This war is far from over, but with your help we won this battle. You have our gratitude. Our King has instructed us to bring you to him; he wants to talk with you and reward you. He waits in our most hallowed hall, a place that no elf has seen for generations upon generations. It is a great honor, but you have done great deeds this day. Elves killing a troll chieftain! We will tell this story for years."
[/message]
[message]
description=Nym
message= _ "With their knowledge of all these secret tunnels, you think they could have led us straight here instead of making us go through those 'light defenses'. It would have saved us a lot of unnecessary fighting in actually getting to the troll chieftain."
message= _ "With their knowledge of all these secret tunnels, you'd think they could have led us straight here instead of making us go through those 'light defenses'. It would have saved us a lot of unnecessary fighting in actually getting to the troll chieftain."
[/message]
[message]
description=Zhul
message= _ "Perhaps they wanted to further test our prowess in battle. And besides every troll we kill is one they don't have to. Still, I think we caused a bigger distraction then they were expecting."
message= _ "Perhaps they wanted to further test our prowess in battle. And besides, every troll we kill is one they don't have to. Still, I think we caused a bigger distraction then they were expecting."
[/message]
[message]
@ -2256,7 +2256,7 @@ message= _ "Shhhh, you two. Yes, of course, we would be honored to come and meet
[message]
description=Grendel
message= _ "Hmmmm, yes, after what you have done, I think I could arrange something. We have a few larger halls that should hold your people, a bit cramped, but safe. Since you first arrived, we've had a few lads watch over them, you hid your folk in a good defensive location, but you can never be too sure. I'll get them to help escort your people to safety. We certainly wouldn't want any surprises."
message= _ "Hmmmm, yes, after what you have done, I think I could arrange something. We have a few larger halls that should hold your people, a bit cramped, but safe. Since you first arrived, we've had a few lads watch over them; you hid your folk in a good defensive location, but you can never be too sure. I'll get them to help escort your people to safety. We certainly wouldn't want any surprises."
[/message]
[message]
@ -2327,7 +2327,7 @@ side=1
[message]
description=Dwarf Ghost
message= _ "Hail, friend elf. Ages ago, I too fought the trolls and came to this place. But by ill luck I was burned to the death by the lava and died nearby unblessed and unhonored. Find my body and grant me the peace I so dearly wish for. Do this and I will let you pass."
message= _ "Hail, friend. Ages ago, I too fought the trolls and came to this place. But by ill luck I was burned to death by the lava and died nearby unblessed and unhonored. Find my body and grant me the peace I so dearly wish for. Do this and I will let you pass."
[/message]
[/then]
@ -2467,7 +2467,7 @@ side=1
[message]
speaker=unit
message= _ "For a troll this is quite an ornate tomb. The coffin itself is quite impressive. Inside the skeleton has crumbled to dust, and there are a few colored stones and trinkets, but what really sticks out is this emerald wand. I don't have much experience with magical items, but the asp with emerald eyes and large fangs carved around it's shaft leave little doubt as to its power. We don't normally tolerate using poison, but extreme circumstances call for extreme measures and I have feeling we may find this useful before our journey is over."
message= _ "For a troll this is quite an ornate tomb. The coffin itself is quite impressive. Inside, the skeleton has crumbled to dust and there are a few colored stones and trinkets, but what really sticks out is this emerald wand. I don't have much experience with magical items, but the asp with emerald eyes and large fangs carved around its shaft leave little doubt as to its power. We don't normally tolerate using poison, but extreme circumstances call for extreme measures and I have a feeling we may find this useful before our journey is over."
[option]
message= _ "It might be useful, I'll take it."
[command]
@ -2479,7 +2479,7 @@ side=1
[command]
[message]
speaker=unit
message= _ "The wand fit comfortably in my hand. It doesn't seem to have much of a range, but in close combat it could be quite useful."
message= _ "The wand fits comfortably in my hand. It doesn't seem to have much of a range, but in close combat it could be quite useful."
[/message]
[/command]

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@ -253,7 +253,7 @@ victory_when_enemies_defeated=no
[story]
[part]
story= _ "Chapter 6: The troll Zurg lead us through a maze of twisting passages speaking scarcely a word. Finally after what seemed like hours of marching he stopped. He motioned us to be very quiet and we crept forward, all I could hear was the soft patter of feet and my heavy breathing. Even that little noise seemed to echo off the cramped walls of our rough hewn passage. I was suddenly aware of the sheer mass of of rock and earth above us and for a moment I despaired of ever seeing the sun again. Then I grabbed my sword with fresh determination and vowed to see this mission through."
story= _ "Chapter 6: The troll Zurg led us through a maze of twisting passages speaking scarcely a word. Finally after what seemed like hours of marching he stopped. He motioned us to be very quiet and we crept forward; all I could hear was the soft patter of feet and my heavy breathing. Even that little noise seemed to echo off the cramped walls of our rough-hewn passage. I was suddenly aware of the sheer mass of of rock and earth above us and for a moment I despaired of ever seeing the sun again. Then I grabbed my sword with fresh determination and vowed to see this mission through."
[/part]
[/story]
@ -561,7 +561,7 @@ name=start
[message]
description=Zurg
message= _ "This amazing tunnel, it leads very close to dwarves main lair. You can hear their tiny footsteps just on other side of wall. All that separates us from the dwarves is a thin wall of stone. When you move a unit adjacent to the final wall, on your order Zurg will destroy it with fire magic. Dwarf chieftain is only lightly guarded, he send best warriors to hunt trolls. Heh, we give you easy task. You know dwarf chieftain when you see him, he shorter and uglier than most."
message= _ "This amazing tunnel, it leads very close to dwarves' main lair. You can hear their tiny footsteps just on other side of wall. All that separates us from the dwarves is a thin wall of stone. When you move a unit adjacent to the final wall, on your order Zurg will destroy it with fire magic. Dwarf chieftain is only lightly guarded, he send best warriors to hunt trolls. Heh, we give you easy task. You know dwarf chieftain when you see him, he shorter and uglier than most."
[/message]
[message]
@ -571,7 +571,7 @@ message= _ "Did you dig these tunnels all by yourselves?"
[message]
description=Zurg
message= _ "No, most are tiny dwarf tunnels. We like natural tunnels, big and tall enough for mighty trolls. When the world was young, Griknagh cut many tunnels and caverns into the rock far below us. We traveled deep deep down, following the trickle of ancient streams, far deeper than the puny dwarves. But now we come back up, great leader say there bad things now deep below. Bad for trolls. We come back up to reclaim ancient lands. But we find them filled with many many little stinky dwarves. All the beautiful stones are gone, greedy dwarves take them all. So we fight to reclaim our lands. But Zurg, talk too much. We have job to do. Find dwarven leader and kill him and we will reward you well."
message= _ "No, most are tiny dwarf tunnels. We like natural tunnels, big and tall enough for mighty trolls. When the world was young, Griknagh cut many tunnels and caverns into the rock far below us. We traveled deep deep down, following the trickle of ancient streams, far deeper than the puny dwarves. But now we come back up, great leader say there bad things now deep below. Bad for trolls. We come back up to reclaim ancient lands. But we find them filled with many many little stinky dwarves. All the beautiful stones are gone, greedy dwarves take them all. So we fight to reclaim our lands. But Zurg talk too much. We have job to do. Find dwarven leader and kill him and we will reward you well."
[/message]
[message]
@ -829,7 +829,7 @@ message= _ "Sir?"
[message]
description=Dwarf Sergeant
message= _ "Constant vigilance boys, the enemy could be anywhere!"
message= _ "Constant vigilance, boys; the enemy could be anywhere!"
[/message]
[message]
@ -887,7 +887,7 @@ description=Dwarf Conscript
[message]
speaker=unit
message= _ "I love you Sarge..."
message= _ "I love you, Sarge..."
[/message]
[/then]
@ -1218,7 +1218,7 @@ message= _ "It was a mistake to depend on trickery, we will defeat you fighting
[message]
description=Jorgi
message= _ "So I challenge you, man to man, if you are not cowards, step out onto these bridges and meet your fate!"
message= _ "So I challenge you, man to man. If you are not cowards, step out onto these bridges and meet your fate!"
[/message]
[/event]
@ -1277,7 +1277,7 @@ description=Jorgi
[message]
description=Jorgi
message= _ "I couldn't do it. Blow the backup charges! If we can't stop them the maybe the black lake will."
message= _ "I couldn't do it. Blow the backup charges! If we can't stop them then maybe the black lake will."
[/message]
{BACKUP_CHARGES}
@ -1406,7 +1406,7 @@ side=1
[message]
speaker=unit
message= _ "It's a huge underground lake. The water look dark and deep and is cold to the touch. There also seems to be some glowing moss on the walls which illuminates the cavern, making it easier to see."
message= _ "It's a huge underground lake. The water looks dark and deep and is cold to the touch. There also seems to be some glowing moss on the walls which illuminates the cavern, making it easier to see."
[/message]
[/event]
@ -1442,7 +1442,7 @@ value=1
[/modifications]
[/unit]
#on easy, don't allow side to recruit dread bats, but create on at start
#on easy, don't allow side to recruit dread bats, but create one at start
#ifdef EASY
[unit]
@ -1620,7 +1620,7 @@ side=1
[message]
speaker=unit
message= _ "The ledge just drops off here. The water might be shallow enough to wade across, but I think I vaguely see something moving underneath the surface. Maybe it's just fish, but I don't like the looks of it."
message= _ "The ledge just drops off here. The water might be shallow enough to wade across, but I think I vaguely see something moving underneath the surface. Maybe it's just fish, but I don't like the look of it."
[/message]
[/event]
@ -1931,7 +1931,7 @@ side=1
gold=150
#endif
#ifdef HARD
income=6
income=7
gold=175
#endif
[/modify_side]
@ -2047,17 +2047,17 @@ time=200
[message]
description=Zurg
message= _ "Little elves fight good. Zurg impressed. With dwarf chieftain dead, cowardly dwarves flee before us. Our struggle not over, still much more fighting, but elf and troll have won this battle. We thank you. Great Leader has allowed you to come speak with him. Great honor, never has one of your kind ever been allowed in his presence. But he wishes to talk with you and reward you. Please come with me."
message= _ "Little elves fight good. Zurg impressed. With dwarf chieftain dead, cowardly dwarves flee before us. Our struggle not over, still much more fighting, but elf and troll have won this battle. We thank you. Great Leader has allowed you to come speak with him. Great honor, never has one of your kind been allowed in his presence. But he wishes to talk with you and reward you. Please come with me."
[/message]
[message]
description=Nym
message= _ "With their knowledge of all these secret tunnels, you think they could have led us straight here instead of making us go through those 'light defenses'. It would have saved us a lot of unnecessary fighting in actually getting to the dwarf chieftain."
message= _ "With their knowledge of all these secret tunnels, you'd think they could have led us straight here instead of making us go through those 'light defenses'. It would have saved us a lot of unnecessary fighting in actually getting to the dwarf chieftain."
[/message]
[message]
description=Zhul
message= _ "Perhaps they wanted to further test our prowess in battle. And besides every dwarf we kill is one they don't have to. Still, I think we caused a bigger distraction then they were expecting."
message= _ "Perhaps they wanted to further test our prowess in battle. And besides, every dwarf we kill is one they don't have to. Still, I think we caused a bigger distraction then they were expecting."
[/message]
[message]
@ -2100,7 +2100,7 @@ side=1
[message]
description=Dwarf Hermit
message= _ "They've come for my precious. It's mine, yes it is. They shant have it, no they shant. We shall kill them all, yes, yes we will."
message= _ "They've come for my precious. It's mine, yes it is. They shan't have it, no they shant. We shall kill them all, yes, yes we will."
[/message]
[/event]
@ -2119,7 +2119,7 @@ message= _ "Curse them! We hates them!"
[message]
speaker=second_unit
message= _ "What's this? His clothes were in rags, and yet he had this ancient jeweled amulet hanging from around his neck. It contains a huge amethyst that seems to glow faintly with a strange purple light. I wonder where he got such a trinket?"
message= _ "What's this? His clothes were in rags, and yet he had this ancient jeweled amulet hanging around his neck. It contains a huge amethyst that seems to glow faintly with a strange purple light. I wonder where he got such a trinket?"
[/message]
[set_variable]
@ -2215,7 +2215,7 @@ side=1
[message]
speaker=unit
message= _ "Hey wait a minute, that amulet glows the same color as theis rune. Maybe if I put the amulet on and step into the rune..."
message= _ "Hey wait a minute, that amulet glows the same color as this rune. Maybe if I put the amulet on and step into the rune..."
[/message]
[colour_adjust]
@ -2339,7 +2339,7 @@ side=1
[message]
speaker=unit
message= _ "Based on the runes covering the walls this must be the tomb of some ancient dwarf. The tomb seems empty except for this ornate stone coffin. The skeleton inside the coffin has long since vanished into dust. All that's left are a few ceremonial trinkets and this shining golden belt. Inscribed on this inside are the words: 'May you have the toughness to stay standing long after your enemies fall' Grave robbing is never a good thing to do, but this belt looks magical and it's former owner certainly won't miss it."
message= _ "Based on the runes covering the walls this must be the tomb of some ancient dwarf. The tomb seems empty except for this ornate stone coffin. The skeleton inside the coffin has long since vanished into dust. All that's left are a few ceremonial trinkets and this shining golden belt. Inscribed on this inside are the words: 'May you have the toughness to stay standing long after your enemies fall' Grave robbing is never a good thing to do, but this belt looks magical and its former owner certainly won't miss it."
[option]
message= _ "I fear no ghosts, I'll take it."

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@ -60,19 +60,19 @@ victory_when_enemies_defeated=no
[story]
[part]
story= _ "Chapter 7: We returned quickly and found the rest of our people, safely hidden a few miles back from the fighting. Seeing Grendel with us, a troop of dwarves silently appeared out of adjoining secret passages. Once we had assured the rest of the elves that they were friends, Grendel lead us silently and quickly through a maze of secret tunnels towards the Dwarves' home."
story= _ "Chapter 7: We returned quickly and found the rest of our people, safely hidden a few miles back from the fighting. Seeing Grendel with us, a troop of dwarves silently appeared out of adjoining secret passages. Once we had assured the rest of the elves that they were friends, Grendel led us silently and quickly through a maze of secret tunnels towards the Dwarves' home."
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "I do not know how long we tramped through those tiny dark passages, time seemed to flow differently down there, deep under the earth. But when we finally got to our destination, what I saw was breathtaking. We entered into a large cavern, where the dwarves had built a huge city out of stone. Protected by stone walls and gates that were bigger than I had ever seen, the place seemed virtually impregnable. As we entered I marveled at their stonework and I saw that the place was crawling with dwarves. It was bigger than any village I had ever seen."
story= _ "I do not know how long we tramped through those tiny dark passages; time seemed to flow differently down there, deep under the earth. But when we finally got to our destination, what I saw was breathtaking. We entered into a large cavern, where the dwarves had built a huge city out of stone. Protected by stone walls and gates that were bigger than I had ever seen, the place seemed virtually impregnable. As we entered I marveled at their stonework and I saw that the place was crawling with dwarves. It was bigger than any village I had ever seen."
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "The dwarves lead us through to the far side of the city, where they let us stay in several auxiliary caverns, which normally served as store rooms. The accommodations were a bit cramped, but for the first time since I had plunged into the earth, I felt safe."
story= _ "The dwarves led us through to the far side of the city, where they let us stay in several auxiliary caverns, which normally served as store rooms. The accommodations were a bit cramped, but for the first time since I had plunged into the earth, I felt safe."
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "The dwarf king was away cleaning up after the recent battle, and would not be back for several days. I happily spent what little time I had learning as much as I could about these strange people. I was very impressed by their craftmanship, they made weapons and armor of a quality I had never seen before. We were also quite the curiosity to the dwarves, I have no idea when the last saw an elf. While some seemed suspicious or frightened of us, the dwarves overall were very polite and met out every need. Finally the summons came to meet with the dwarven king..."
story= _ "The dwarf king was away cleaning up after the recent battle, and would not be back for several days. I happily spent what little time I had learning as much as I could about these strange people. I was very impressed by their craftmanship; they made weapons and armor of a quality I had never seen before. We were also quite the curiosity to the dwarves; I have no idea when they last saw an elf. While some seemed suspicious or frightened of us, the dwarves overall were very polite and met our every need. Finally the summons came to meet with the dwarven king..."
[/part]
[/story]
@ -586,7 +586,7 @@ name=start
[message]
speaker=narrator
message= _ "This chamber is beautifully decorated. Ornate frescoes and dwarven runes cover the walls, and the room in dominated by a large beautifully carved stone throne. Flanking the throne are two detailed statues of some sort of beast you aren't familiar with. The floor is covered in dark slate, and path of smooth tiles directs visitors up to a small stone seat which faces the throne."
message= _ "This chamber is beautifully decorated. Ornate frescoes and dwarven runes cover the walls, and the room is dominated by a large intricately-carved stone throne. Flanking the throne are two detailed statues of some sort of beast you aren't familiar with. The floor is covered in dark slate, and a path of smooth tiles directs visitors up to a small stone seat which faces the throne."
[/message]
[message]
@ -601,7 +601,7 @@ name=start
[message]
description=King Thurongar
message= _ "I've heard of your recent exploits against the troll menace. They've been a quite thorne in our side for a while now. They used to be just an occasional pest, but now wherever we go we find another infestation. They've been getting smarter with their tactics, we've lost several of our outlying settlements to their attacks. Still, we're not done fighting and with your recent victory perhaps this battle is turning in our favor. But tell me, what is are so many elves doing so deep under the earth?"
message= _ "I've heard of your recent exploits against the troll menace. They've been quite a thorne in our side for a while now. They used to be just an occasional pest, but now wherever we go we find another infestation. They've been getting smarter with their tactics; we've lost several of our outlying settlements to their attacks. Still, we're not done fighting and with your recent victory perhaps this battle is turning in our favor. But tell me, what are so many elves doing so deep under the earth?"
[/message]
[message]
@ -611,7 +611,7 @@ name=start
[message]
description=King Thurongar
message= _ "Interesting. We'd offer to let you live with us, but I'm afraid we don't have much free space, this city is almost filled to capacity. And looking at you, I don't think that the under-realm is quite the place for your kind. I think your god may have somewhere else intended for you."
message= _ "Interesting. We'd offer to let you live with us, but I'm afraid we don't have much free space; this city is almost filled to capacity. And looking at you, I don't think that the under-realm is quite the place for your kind. I think your god may have somewhere else intended for you."
[/message]
[message]
@ -626,7 +626,7 @@ name=start
[message]
description=King Thurongar
message= _ "But dwarves are excellent delvers, and we keep meticulous maps of all the tunnels we have explored. So we should still have maps of the tunnels leading back to the surface. Of course I doubt you could be able to understand our maps, so, $dwarf_name here has volunteered to lead you to the surface."
message= _ "But dwarves are excellent delvers, and we keep meticulous maps of all the tunnels we have explored. We should still have maps of the tunnels leading back to the surface. Of course I doubt you would be able to understand them, so, $dwarf_name here has volunteered to lead you to the surface."
[/message]
[if]
@ -653,7 +653,7 @@ name=start
[message]
description=$dwarf_name
message= _ "You did a great service for my brothers. In exchange, as much as I hate the light, I am the one who known the upper tunnels the best, so I'll be your guide."
message= _ "You did a great service for my brothers. In exchange, as much as I hate the light, I am the one who knows the upper tunnels the best, so I'll be your guide."
[/message]
[/else]
@ -678,12 +678,12 @@ name=start
[message]
x,y=12-14,12-14
message= _ "You helped us strike a huge blow against those savages and it was an honor to fight by your side. You are the bravest elves we have ever known. We'd like to come with you, but, well, we don't like going that close to the surface, and besides there's still lots of fighting to be done down here. Don't you worry, we won't rest until we have killed every last of troll."
message= _ "You helped us strike a huge blow against those savages and it was an honor to fight by your side. You are the bravest elves we have ever known. We'd like to come with you, but, well, we don't like going that close to the surface, and besides there's still lots of fighting to be done down here. Don't you worry, we won't rest until we have killed every one of trolls."
[/message]
[message]
description=Kaleh
message= _ "I understand. Thank you, you were a huge help to us. It was a honor to fight by your side."
message= _ "I understand. Thank you, you were a huge help to us. It was an honor to fight by your side."
[/message]
[/then]
@ -698,7 +698,7 @@ name=start
[message]
description=Elyssa
message= _ "I'm afraid, Kaleh, that the time has come for our paths to seperate."
message= _ "I'm afraid, Kaleh, that the time has come for our paths to separate."
[/message]
[message]
@ -708,17 +708,17 @@ name=start
[message]
description=Elyssa
message= _ "I have learned a lot about the dwarves in my time here, and yet there's so much more to learn. Have you seen their forges? They really know how to work fire and use it in amazing ways. They have some interesting ideas in how they might improve their smithing with my magical fire. And have you seen their records? They have kept records of their dealings that go back generations upon generations. They even know of the dwarven clan who helped craft the scepter of fire. Imagine if I could find the dwarves who helped build such an artifact?"
message= _ "I have learned a lot about the dwarves in my time here, and yet there's so much more to learn. Have you seen their forges? They really know how to work fire and use it in amazing ways. They have some interesting ideas about how they might improve their smithing with my magical fire. And have you seen their records? They have kept records of their dealings that go back generations upon generations. They even know of the dwarven clan who helped craft the scepter of fire. Imagine if I could find the dwarves who helped build such an artifact!"
[/message]
[message]
description=Nym
message= _ "But we need you, what would we do without you?"
message= _ "But we need you! What would we do without you?"
[/message]
[message]
description=Elyssa
message= _ "With the help of the dwarves, I think you will do just fine. I don't know what home your god has planned for you Kaleh, but I believe in you, and I know that you will find a place for your people. My place is here, with the dwarves. And you don't really need me, you have each other."
message= _ "With the help of the dwarves, I think you will do just fine. I don't know what home your god has planned for you, Kaleh, but I believe in you, and I know that you will find a place for your people. My place is here, with the dwarves. And you don't really need me, you have each other."
[/message]
[message]
@ -750,12 +750,12 @@ name=start
[message]
description=Elyssa
message= _ "I will let you decide, use it in the best way that you see fit."
message= _ "I will let you decide; use it in the best way that you see fit."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=narrator
message= _ "You can choose which unit you want to take the flaming sword. If you want another unit to wield the sword Kaleh can recruit or recall other units."
message= _ "You can choose which unit you want to take the flaming sword. If you want another unit to wield the sword, Kaleh can recruit or recall other units."
[/message]
[/then]

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@ -60,15 +60,15 @@ victory_when_enemies_defeated=no
[story]
[part]
story= _ "Chapter 7: We returned quickly and found the rest of our people, safely hidden a few miles back from the fighting. Once we had assured the rest of the elves that the trolls were our allies, Zurg lead us silently and quickly away from the front lines through a maze of secret tunnels."
story= _ "Chapter 7: We returned quickly and found the rest of our people, safely hidden a few miles back from the fighting. Once we had assured the rest of the elves that the trolls were our allies, Zurg led us silently and quickly away from the front lines through a maze of secret tunnels."
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "I do not know how long we tramped through those tiny dark passages, time seemed to flow differently down there, deep under the earth. But finally we stepped out into a large cavern. Dominating the cavern were the remains of what must have originally been a dwarf city. The large stone walls were riddled with giant holes and the iron gates had been blasted asunder. As we entered through the gates, we saw dead dwarves and other more grisly signs of recent battle. All around us were many trolls, working hard to repair the walls and other defenses. Zurg lead us through the chaos to several side caverns which had until recently been used as storerooms. There was plenty of space for us to bed down and stay out of the way, and the dwarves had left behind plenty of provisions. "
story= _ "I do not know how long we tramped through those tiny dark passages; time seemed to flow differently down there, deep under the earth. But finally we stepped out into a large cavern. Dominating the cavern were the remains of what must have originally been a dwarf city. The large stone walls were riddled with giant holes and the iron gates had been blasted asunder. As we entered through the gates, we saw dead dwarves and other more grisly signs of recent battle. All around us were many trolls, working hard to repair the walls and other defenses. Zurg led us through the chaos to several side caverns which had until recently been used as storerooms. There was plenty of space for us to bed down and stay out of the way, and the dwarves had left behind plenty of provisions. "
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "Zurg told us that they had just captured this city from the dwarves, and that the Great Leader had moved here to set up his base of operations. They were clearly worried about a dwarf counterattack. Luckily the trolls were quite skilled at stonework and the walls were quickly repaired. The trolls didn't talk much, but were very intelligent and clearly weren't the bloodthirsty savages they were purported to be. Overall they actually seemed quite peaceful, except when provoked. I learned that rulership was balanced between the warriors and the shamans, the troll shamans were the ones that chose the military leader of the people."
story= _ "Zurg told us that they had just captured this city from the dwarves, and that the Great Leader had moved here to set up his base of operations. They were clearly worried about a dwarf counterattack. Luckily the trolls were quite skilled at stonework and the walls were quickly repaired. The trolls didn't talk much, but were very intelligent and clearly weren't the bloodthirsty savages they were purported to be. Overall they actually seemed quite peaceful, except when provoked. I learned that the leadership was balanced between the warriors and the shamans. The troll's military leader was chosen and advised by a council of their shamans."
[/part]
[part]
@ -590,7 +590,7 @@ name=start
[message]
speaker=narrator
message= _ "It is clear that this chamber used to be quite ornately decorated, but almost all of it has been destroyed, revealing a stone and dirt floor. What remains is a large stone throne, which has been covered with skulls and animal skins and bright paint. The walls were once covered with frescoes and dwarven runes, but several trolls are busy chipping them off. The floor was once tiled in dark slate, but only two small patches of tiles remain around the two chairs in this chamber. You're surprised to see that small tile path running up the center of the chamber has been left untouched, it leads to a small stone chair facing the large throne."
message= _ "It is clear that this chamber used to be quite ornately decorated, but almost all of it has been destroyed, revealing a stone and dirt floor. What remains is a large stone throne, which has been covered with skulls and animal skins and bright paint. The walls were once covered with frescoes and dwarven runes, but several trolls are busy chipping them off. The floor was once tiled in dark slate, but only two small patches of tiles remain around the two chairs in this chamber. You're surprised to see that small tile path running up the center of the chamber has been left untouched. It leads to a small stone chair facing the large throne."
[/message]
[message]
@ -620,12 +620,12 @@ name=start
[message]
description=Great Leader Darmog
message= _ "Darmog has never been aboveground, but Darmog understand your story. A leader must protect and care for his people. Every people deserve to find their own home, if we can help you we will."
message= _ "Darmog has never been aboveground, but Darmog understand your story. A leader must protect and care for his people. Every people deserve to find their own home. If we can help you we will."
[/message]
[message]
description=Spiritual Advisor
message= _ "We may be able to help you find a way back to the sunlit lands. In our temples we do keep records of the past. We have not walked above the earth for many many generations, not since the darkness drove us underground. But we are masters of the underground lands, and we have explored many tunnels. Recently one of our scouts found a path that lead north back to the sunlit lands, I think it may be the way you are trying to go. In reward for your achievements, we will help you. $troll_name has volunteered to protect you and lead you back to the sunlight lands."
message= _ "We may be able to help you find a way back to the sunlit lands. In our temples we do keep records of the past. We have not walked above the earth for many many generations, not since the darkness drove us underground. But we are masters of the underground lands, and we have explored many tunnels. Recently one of our scouts found a path that leads north back to the sunlit lands, I think it may be the way you are trying to go. In reward for your achievements, we will help you. $troll_name has volunteered to protect you and lead you back to the sunlight lands."
[/message]
[if]
@ -643,7 +643,7 @@ name=start
[message]
description=Nog
message= _ "You rescued Nog's brother, and he died like a warrior in battle, not like a coward in chains. Nog is very greatful, you proved yourselves to be brave strong warriors, and Nog will help you find way back to lighted lands."
message= _ "You rescued Nog's brother, and he died like a warrior in battle, not like a coward in chains. Nog is very greatful. You proved yourselves to be brave strong warriors, and Nog will help you find way back to lighted lands."
[/message]
[/then]
@ -682,7 +682,7 @@ name=start
[message]
description=Kaleh
message= _ "I understand. Thank you, you were a huge help to us. It was a honor to fight by your side."
message= _ "I understand. Thank you, you were a huge help to us. It was an honor to fight by your side."
[/message]
[/then]
@ -697,7 +697,7 @@ name=start
[message]
description=Elyssa
message= _ "I'm afraid, Kaleh, that the time has come for our paths to seperate."
message= _ "I'm afraid, Kaleh, that the time has come for our paths to separate."
[/message]
[message]
@ -712,12 +712,12 @@ name=start
[message]
description=Nym
message= _ "But we need you, what would we do without you?"
message= _ "But we need you! What would we do without you?"
[/message]
[message]
description=Elyssa
message= _ "With the help of the trolls, I think you will do just fine. I don't know what home your god has planned for you Kaleh, but I believe in you, and I know that you will find a place for your people. My place is here, with the trolls. And you don't really need me, you have each other."
message= _ "With the help of the trolls, I think you will do just fine. I don't know what home your god has planned for you, Kaleh, but I believe in you, and I know that you will find a place for your people. My place is here, with the trolls. And you don't really need me, you have each other."
[/message]
[message]
@ -749,12 +749,12 @@ name=start
[message]
description=Elyssa
message= _ "I will let you decide, use it in the best way that you see fit."
message= _ "I will let you decide; use it in the best way that you see fit."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=narrator
message= _ "You can choose which unit you want to take the flaming sword. If you want another unit to wield the sword Kaleh can recruit or recall other units."
message= _ "You can choose which unit you want to take the flaming sword. If you want another unit to wield the sword, Kaleh can recruit or recall other units."
[/message]
[/then]