Minor fixes to dates and typography.
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name = "Eric S. Raymond (esr)"
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[/entry]
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[entry]
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name = "A-Rod"
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name = "A-Red"
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[/entry]
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[/about]
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[about]
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# chronic problem in the northeast even during the Kingdom's strongest
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# periods. The logical time would be shortly after the death of
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# Haldric IV in 350, the beginning of the First Dark Age. I'm arbitrarily
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# setting it at 353; Kalenz began his wanderings ten years later, so the
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# timing for Arne to meet him later in life isn't bad.
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# setting it at 363; Kalenz began his wanderings ten years later, so the
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# timing for Arne to meet him later in life isn't bad. (Later moved
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# to 363 so the timing of the Epilog A-Red's backstory changes works
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# better.)
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# Placing the campaign is a little trickier. Our main textual
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# clue is that there is a dense wood, said by legend to be
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# haunted, a few days' ride north. Later, the boss's keep is said to
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# be still further north. Neither of these directions has plot importance,
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# but they do suggest a locale for Maghre - near the Gray Woods. The
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# but they do suggest a locale for Maghre - near the Grey Woods. The
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# battle maps exclude it from being in a featureless plain, though;
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# there are hills to the south and west.
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#
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background=story/Two_Brothers_M1P2.png
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[/part]
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[part]
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story=_ "12 V, 353 YW
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story=_ "12 V, 363 YW
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Excerpt from the journal of Bjarn of Maghre
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If I could but face this 'Mordak'! I think my magic might prove stronger than his. But he bides in the hills, well-guarded by his servants, and I muster frightened peasants to fight his minions with blades and sticks. I need my brother; he always had a better head for battle than I.
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If I could but face this ‘Mordak’! I think my magic might prove stronger than his. But he bides in the hills, well-guarded by his servants, and I muster frightened peasants to fight his minions with blades and sticks. I need my brother; he always had a better head for battle than I.
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Will he heed the call? I do not know if he has kept the amulet; we have not spoken since that evil day at Toen Caric. If he will not come for me, perhaps he will return to aid our village in its hour of desperate need.
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[/part]
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# wmllint: local spelling Grey
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[part]
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story=_ "16 V, 353 YW
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story=_ "16 V, 363 YW
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Excerpt from the journal of Arne of Maghre
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We've been searching three days for Bjarn, and turned up nothing. My best hunch was to head north into the borderlands, where the necromancer's minions could safely hide; everywhere else is more farmland. At first I thought the search might be useless, but late in the first day we found a set of tracks. Some of them had been made by skeletal feet.
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[/part]
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[part]
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# wmllint: local spelling clanless
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story=_"19 IV, 353 YW
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story=_"19 IV, 363 YW
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Excerpt from the journal of Rotharik the Clanless
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The last of Mordak's servants arrived this morning bearing the news of his death, as well as a bundle so well-bound it was barely recognizable as a man. Mordak was always reckless. This whole desperate scheme was his, and I suppose I could blame him for everything that we have suffered through if it still mattered. It was he who brought the wrath of the orcs down on us, too. But all the same, he managed to accomplish what he set out to do. I still cannot believe the finality of what has happened; until now we had always managed to make it through somehow.
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[story]
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# wmllint: local spelling Grey
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[part]
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story=_"27 V, 353 YW
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story=_"27 V, 363 YW
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Excerpt from the journal of Bjarn of Maghre
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Almost home now. The last week has been full of mixed feelings for me--blissful and difficult by turns. It was wonderful to be out of that dungeon cell and in the sunlight again without the threat of death or worse hanging over my head...but with that behind me, I turned to the almost equally daunting task of making amends with my brother.
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