TRoW Proofread Pass Third Draft

In response to concerns in #6143.
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max-torch 2021-10-04 12:38:36 +08:00
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[message]
speaker=Prince Haldric
message= _ "Father, I am of age now. May I lead our forces in battle?"
message= _ "Father, I am of age now. May I lead our forces into battle?"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=King Eldaric IV
message= _ "Youre showing initiative, son! Im proud of you! Yes, you may lead our forces in battle, it is time — but Ill stay near to keep an eye on you. There is more to this raid than meets the eye, I think."
message= _ "Youre showing initiative, son! Im proud of you! Yes, you may lead our forces into battle, it is time — but Ill stay near to keep an eye on you. There is more to this raid than meets the eye, I think."
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[message]
speaker=Prince Haldric

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{AMLA_DEFAULT}
cost=60
usage=mixed fighter
description= _ "Born in the Wesfolk aristocracy, she and her people were excluded from society by their lords, who betrayed their loyalty when they started losing a war against Haldric's people. This outcast still conserves her nobleness in her veins, and on the battlefield she has earned valuable experience, which continues to increase with time, as does her natural leadership."
description= _ "Born in the Wesfolk aristocracy, she and her people were excluded from society by their lords, who betrayed their loyalty when they started to lose a war against Haldrics people. This outcast still conserves her nobleness in her veins, and on the battlefield she has earned valuable experience, which continues to increase with time, as does her natural leadership."
die_sound={SOUND_LIST:HUMAN_FEMALE_DIE}
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hits=miss