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Taurus 2007-05-12 06:18:06 +00:00
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story= _ "So impressed was Rahul with the intelligence, prowess and leadership of Black-Eye Karun that he invited him to join the Northern Alliance. After much deliberation Black-Eye Karun decided to accept the offer. However, on the way to the city of Dwarven Doors - the headquarters of the Northern Alliance - Karun and his small group of bodyguards were attacked and slain to the last man. There were no survivors to confirm the incident, but it soon became believed among the orcs that the Northern Alliance had deliberately set up this ambush in order to slay their paramount leader."
story= _ "So impressed was Rahul with the intelligence, prowess and leadership of Black-Eye Karun that he invited him to join the Northern Alliance. After much deliberation Black-Eye Karun decided to accept the offer. However, on the way to the city of Dwarven Doors - the headquarters of the Northern Alliance - Karun and his small group of bodyguards were attacked and slain to the last man. There were no survivors to confirm the incident, but it soon became believed among the orcs that the Northern Alliance had deliberately set up this ambush in order to slay their paramount leader break the unity of the orcs."
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story= _ "The peace treaty still held, because with the death of Black-Eye Karun, the unity of the orcs was shattered and they descended into internecine squabbling. Thus the years that followed were relatively peaceful and prosperous - if only for the humans."
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story= _ "The peace treaty still held however, partially because the treaty - although arranged by the Northern Alliance - was between the local earldoms and didn't have any direct connection with the Northern Alliance. The other - and perhaps main - reason why the treaty held was that with the death of Black Eye Karun, the unity of the orcs was shattered and they once again descended into inner squabbling. Thus the years that followed were relatively peaceful and prosperous - for the humans anyway." background=sotbe.png
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story= _ "Retailiating, the orcs systematically slaughtered human colonies and villages on their lands. Then, Earl Lanbec'h, the most powerful human warlord of the North, determined to abolish the Orcish menace and raised an army to commanded by his son-in-law Baron Albert."
story= _ "Retailiating, the orcs systematically slaughtered human colonies and villages on their lands. Then, Earl Lanbec'h - the most powerful human warlord of the North - determined to abolish the Orcish menace raised an army and conferred leadership of it to his son-in-law Baron Albert."
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story= _ "He was not disappointed. A few days later the main body of the human army arrived."
story= _ "He was not disappointed. A few days later the main body of the human army arrived. Driven to a hungry rage due to the death of his son-in-law, Earl Lanbec'h led the army himself."
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description=Kapou'e
message= _ "We have almost crossed the mountains. The lands of the free tribes must be near now. So far so good. Hey, what are those signs there?"
message= _ "We have almost crossed the mountains. The lands of the free tribes must be near now. So far so good."
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description=Kwili
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description=Kapou'e
message= _ "Whatever else happens, we have to pass through these mountains. I won't leave enemies in our rear. Stab, smite, and slay!"
message= _ "Whatever else happens, we have to pass through these mountains and I dislike leaving enemies in our rear. Stab, smite, and slay!"
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