DiD: have Malin speak more normally
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# po: More "country accent" words: "s'ppose" instead of suppose, "’em" instead of them, dropping the g at the end of a word for ’ (bickering -> bickerin’), "’bout" instead of "about", "’im" instead of him
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# po: "woulda" -> would have, "o’" -> of, "gotta" -> have to
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# po: Malin: rash and impulsive, he cares a lot about his home, but doesn't see that power itself can be a corrupting force (though he does not seek power just for the sake of it, it is for another purpose which is
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# po: to drive off the orcs). He's a little more informal in his speech, meaning more contractions and colloquialisms. As Malin gets more emotional, he talks with a stronger country accent (like S10).
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# po: to drive off the orcs). He's a little more informal in his speech, meaning more contractions and colloquialisms, stemming from his "country accent" (which is not as strong as Drogan's or Dela's due to his time on Alduin).
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# po: Things to be careful about while editing: there are some poems in S8 and S11, please be mindful when making wording changes there. Some commas are added for readability even though they may not be grammatically correct.
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# po:
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# po: If the target language has a specialized term for a fortified town, like Latin "oppidum", use it for Parthyn.
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[message]
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speaker=Drogan
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message= _ "What? Curses! Why’re thar still so many o’ ’em?"
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message= _ "What? Curses! Why be thar still so many o’ ’em?"
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[/message]
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[message]
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[message]
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speaker=Drogan
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message= _ "If we gotta do it, then yes. Leave Parthyn fer now and rebuild later, like we’ve always done."
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message= _ "Yes. Leave Parthyn fer now and rebuild later, like we always did."
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[/message]
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[message]
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[message]
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speaker=Drogan
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message= _ "If ya go out on a quest to seek depravity, none of us will support ya."
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message= _ "If ya go out on a quest to seek depravity, none o’ us will support ya."
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[/message]
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# Hint that the loyal units stay behind
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[message]
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speaker=Malin Keshar
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# po: Malin looses his cool and slips into "country talk"
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message= _ "Ya dare bring my father into this! I’ve fought with every fiber of my being against these orcs, and I’ve done it all ta protect my country and kinsmen. Is this how ye repay me? With scorn and disdain?"
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message= _ "You dare bring my father into this! I’ve fought with every fiber of my being against these orcs, and I’ve done it all to protect my country and kinsmen. Is this how you repay me? With scorn and disdain?"
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[/message]
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[message]
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[message]
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speaker=Malin Keshar
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# po: Malin looses his cool and slips into country talk again
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message= _ "You’re the traitor, Drogan! This be twice now that you’ve tried ta prevent me from protecting Parthyn. I’ll defend my home no matter the cost, even if it means I must cut ya down first."
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message= _ "You’re the traitor, Drogan! This is twice now that you’ve tried to prevent me from protecting Parthyn. I’ll defend my home no matter the cost, even if it means I must cut you down first."
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[/message]
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# Malin cools down briefly
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[message]
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speaker=Malin Keshar
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message= _ "What?! You ungrateful cur! You’d sack tha city and let everyone die, and fer what? Only ta spurn something you don’t understand? You’re a fool. Parthyn will only be under greater danger with you leadin’ it. If we’re to survive, <i>you</i> are the one who must leave!"
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message= _ "What?! You ungrateful cur! You’d sack tha city and let everyone die, and for what? Only to spurn something you don’t understand? You’re a fool. Parthyn will only be under greater danger with you leading it. If we are to survive, <i>you</i> are the one who must leave!"
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[/message]
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[message]
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speaker=Dela Keshar
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message= _ "Have you lost yer mind, Malin? There’s no way we’re banishin’ Drogan!"
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message= _ "Have ye lost yer mind, Malin? There’s no way we’re banishin’ Drogan!"
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[/message]
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[message]
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[message]
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speaker=Malin Keshar
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message= _ "Then why did ya listen to him instead of me? I was tryin’ to keep us together. He was tryin’ to tear us apart! You wouldn’t even lift a finger ta help me when he threatened ta attack me!"
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message= _ "Then why did you listen to him instead of me? I was trying to keep us together. He was trying to tear us apart! You wouldn’t even lift a finger to help me when he threatened to attack me!"
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[/message]
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[message]
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[message]
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speaker=Malin Keshar
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message= _ "You’ve always been like this. You never think fer yerself. It’s always just what other people tell ya. Not a single original thought in yer head."
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message= _ "You’ve always been like this. You never think for yourself. You always just follow whatever other people tell you. Not a single original thought in your head."
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[message]
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[message]
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speaker=Malin Keshar
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message= _ "That man used necromancy? He must be evil! Never mind that he be yer own brother, trying to protect his own home!"
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message= _ "That man used necromancy? He must be evil! Never mind that he be your own brother, trying to protect his own home!"
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[/message]
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[message]
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