DiD: have Malin speak more normally

This commit is contained in:
nemaara 2019-11-02 23:55:57 -04:00
parent 33231b9748
commit 032f5235b1
2 changed files with 11 additions and 13 deletions

View file

@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
# po: More "country accent" words: "s'ppose" instead of suppose, "em" instead of them, dropping the g at the end of a word for (bickering -> bickerin), "bout" instead of "about", "im" instead of him
# po: "woulda" -> would have, "o" -> of, "gotta" -> have to
# po: Malin: rash and impulsive, he cares a lot about his home, but doesn't see that power itself can be a corrupting force (though he does not seek power just for the sake of it, it is for another purpose which is
# po: to drive off the orcs). He's a little more informal in his speech, meaning more contractions and colloquialisms. As Malin gets more emotional, he talks with a stronger country accent (like S10).
# po: to drive off the orcs). He's a little more informal in his speech, meaning more contractions and colloquialisms, stemming from his "country accent" (which is not as strong as Drogan's or Dela's due to his time on Alduin).
# po: Things to be careful about while editing: there are some poems in S8 and S11, please be mindful when making wording changes there. Some commas are added for readability even though they may not be grammatically correct.
# po:
# po: If the target language has a specialized term for a fortified town, like Latin "oppidum", use it for Parthyn.
@ -260,7 +260,7 @@
[message]
speaker=Drogan
message= _ "What? Curses! Whyre thar still so many o em?"
message= _ "What? Curses! Why be thar still so many o em?"
[/message]
[message]
@ -594,7 +594,7 @@
[message]
speaker=Drogan
message= _ "If we gotta do it, then yes. Leave Parthyn fer now and rebuild later, like weve always done."
message= _ "Yes. Leave Parthyn fer now and rebuild later, like we always did."
[/message]
[message]
@ -604,7 +604,7 @@
[message]
speaker=Drogan
message= _ "If ya go out on a quest to seek depravity, none of us will support ya."
message= _ "If ya go out on a quest to seek depravity, none o us will support ya."
[/message]
# Hint that the loyal units stay behind

View file

@ -316,8 +316,7 @@
[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
# po: Malin looses his cool and slips into "country talk"
message= _ "Ya dare bring my father into this! Ive fought with every fiber of my being against these orcs, and Ive done it all ta protect my country and kinsmen. Is this how ye repay me? With scorn and disdain?"
message= _ "You dare bring my father into this! Ive fought with every fiber of my being against these orcs, and Ive done it all to protect my country and kinsmen. Is this how you repay me? With scorn and disdain?"
[/message]
[message]
@ -365,8 +364,7 @@
[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
# po: Malin looses his cool and slips into country talk again
message= _ "Youre the traitor, Drogan! This be twice now that youve tried ta prevent me from protecting Parthyn. Ill defend my home no matter the cost, even if it means I must cut ya down first."
message= _ "Youre the traitor, Drogan! This is twice now that youve tried to prevent me from protecting Parthyn. Ill defend my home no matter the cost, even if it means I must cut you down first."
[/message]
# Malin cools down briefly
@ -590,12 +588,12 @@
[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "What?! You ungrateful cur! Youd sack tha city and let everyone die, and fer what? Only ta spurn something you dont understand? Youre a fool. Parthyn will only be under greater danger with you leadin it. If were to survive, <i>you</i> are the one who must leave!"
message= _ "What?! You ungrateful cur! Youd sack tha city and let everyone die, and for what? Only to spurn something you dont understand? Youre a fool. Parthyn will only be under greater danger with you leading it. If we are to survive, <i>you</i> are the one who must leave!"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Dela Keshar
message= _ "Have you lost yer mind, Malin? Theres no way were banishin Drogan!"
message= _ "Have ye lost yer mind, Malin? Theres no way were banishin Drogan!"
[/message]
[message]
@ -742,7 +740,7 @@
[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "Then why did ya listen to him instead of me? I was tryin to keep us together. He was tryin to tear us apart! You wouldnt even lift a finger ta help me when he threatened ta attack me!"
message= _ "Then why did you listen to him instead of me? I was trying to keep us together. He was trying to tear us apart! You wouldnt even lift a finger to help me when he threatened to attack me!"
[/message]
[message]
@ -752,7 +750,7 @@
[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "Youve always been like this. You never think fer yerself. Its always just what other people tell ya. Not a single original thought in yer head."
message= _ "Youve always been like this. You never think for yourself. You always just follow whatever other people tell you. Not a single original thought in your head."
[/message]
[message]
@ -762,7 +760,7 @@
[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "That man used necromancy? He must be evil! Never mind that he be yer own brother, trying to protect his own home!"
message= _ "That man used necromancy? He must be evil! Never mind that he be your own brother, trying to protect his own home!"
[/message]
[message]