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Installation docs update

* Updated TOC sort order
* Fixed some grammar in Rackspace doc
* Updated titles to remove Linux where not needed
James Turnbull 11 lat temu
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docs/sources/installation/gentoolinux.rst

@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@
 
 .. _gentoo_linux:
 
-Gentoo Linux
-============
+Gentoo
+======
 
 .. include:: install_header.inc
 

+ 7 - 7
docs/sources/installation/index.rst

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ Installation
 
 There are a number of ways to install Docker, depending on where you
 want to run the daemon. The :ref:`ubuntu_linux` installation is the
-officially-tested version, and the community adds more techniques for
+officially-tested version. The community adds more techniques for
 installing Docker all the time.
 
 Contents:
@@ -19,13 +19,13 @@ Contents:
 
    ubuntulinux
    fedora
-   binaries
-   security
-   upgrading
-   kernel
+   archlinux
+   gentoolinux
    vagrant
    windows
    amazon
    rackspace
-   archlinux
-   gentoolinux
+   kernel
+   binaries
+   security
+   upgrading

+ 8 - 9
docs/sources/installation/rackspace.rst

@@ -2,7 +2,6 @@
 :description: Installing Docker on Ubuntu proviced by Rackspace
 :keywords: Rackspace Cloud, installation, docker, linux, ubuntu
 
-===============
 Rackspace Cloud
 ===============
 
@@ -14,14 +13,14 @@ straightforward, and you should mostly be able to follow the
 
 **However, there is one caveat:**
 
-If you are using any linux not already shipping with the 3.8 kernel
+If you are using any Linux not already shipping with the 3.8 kernel
 you will need to install it. And this is a little more difficult on
 Rackspace.
 
 Rackspace boots their servers using grub's ``menu.lst`` and does not
-like non 'virtual' packages (e.g. xen compatible) kernels there,
-although they do work. This makes ``update-grub`` to not have the
-expected result, and you need to set the kernel manually.
+like non 'virtual' packages (e.g. Xen compatible) kernels there,
+although they do work. This results in ``update-grub`` not having the
+expected result, and you will need to set the kernel manually.
 
 **Do not attempt this on a production machine!**
 
@@ -34,7 +33,7 @@ expected result, and you need to set the kernel manually.
     apt-get install linux-generic-lts-raring
 
 
-Great, now you have kernel installed in ``/boot/``, next is to make it
+Great, now you have the kernel installed in ``/boot/``, next you need to make it
 boot next time.
 
 .. code-block:: bash
@@ -48,9 +47,9 @@ boot next time.
 Now you need to manually edit ``/boot/grub/menu.lst``, you will find a
 section at the bottom with the existing options.  Copy the top one and
 substitute the new kernel into that. Make sure the new kernel is on
-top, and double check kernel and initrd point to the right files.
+top, and double check the kernel and initrd lines point to the right files.
 
-Make special care to double check the kernel and initrd entries.
+Take special care to double check the kernel and initrd entries.
 
 .. code-block:: bash
 
@@ -79,7 +78,7 @@ It will probably look something like this:
      initrd		/boot/initrd.img-3.2.0-38-virtual
 
 
-Reboot server (either via command line or console)
+Reboot the server (either via command line or console)
 
 .. code-block:: bash
 

+ 2 - 2
docs/sources/installation/ubuntulinux.rst

@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@
 
 .. _ubuntu_linux:
 
-Ubuntu Linux
-============
+Ubuntu
+======
 
 .. warning::