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Docker-DCO-1.1-Signed-off-by: Sven Dowideit <SvenDowideit@home.org.au> (github: SvenDowideit)
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      docs/sources/examples/python_web_app.rst

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docs/sources/examples/python_web_app.rst

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ Python Web App
 
 
 .. include:: example_header.inc
 .. include:: example_header.inc
 
 
-While using Dockerfiles is the preffered way to create maintainable
+While using Dockerfiles is the preferred way to create maintainable
 and repeatable images, its useful to know how you can try things out
 and repeatable images, its useful to know how you can try things out
 and then commit your live changes to an image.
 and then commit your live changes to an image.
 
 
@@ -62,8 +62,8 @@ Commit the container to create a new image
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 ------------------------------------------
 
 
 Save the changes we just made in the container to a new image called
 Save the changes we just made in the container to a new image called
-``/builds/github.com/hykes/helloflask/master``. You now have 3 different
-ways to refer to the container, name, short-id ``c8b2e8228f11``, or 
+``/builds/github.com/shykes/helloflask/master``. You now have 3 different
+ways to refer to the container: name ``pybuilder_run``, short-id ``c8b2e8228f11``, or 
 long-id ``c8b2e8228f11b8b3e492cbf9a49923ae66496230056d61e07880dc74c5f495f9``.
 long-id ``c8b2e8228f11b8b3e492cbf9a49923ae66496230056d61e07880dc74c5f495f9``.
 
 
 .. code-block:: bash
 .. code-block:: bash
@@ -76,12 +76,11 @@ Run the new image to start the web worker
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 -----------------------------------------
 
 
 Use the new image to create a new container with
 Use the new image to create a new container with
-network port 5000, and return the container ID and store in the
-``WEB_WORKER`` variable (rather than naming a container/image, you can use the ID's).
+network port 5000 mapped to a local port
 
 
 .. code-block:: bash
 .. code-block:: bash
 
 
-    $ WEB_WORKER=$(sudo docker run -d -p 5000 /builds/github.com/hykes/helloflask/master /usr/local/bin/runapp)
+    $ sudo docker run -d -p 5000 --name web_worker /builds/github.com/shykes/helloflask/master /usr/local/bin/runapp
 
 
 
 
 - **"docker run -d "** run a command in a new container. We pass "-d"
 - **"docker run -d "** run a command in a new container. We pass "-d"
@@ -94,7 +93,7 @@ network port 5000, and return the container ID and store in the
 View the container logs
 View the container logs
 -----------------------
 -----------------------
 
 
-View the logs for the new container using the ``WEB_WORKER`` variable, and
+View the logs for the new ``web_worker`` container and
 if everything worked as planned you should see the line ``Running on
 if everything worked as planned you should see the line ``Running on
 http://0.0.0.0:5000/`` in the log output.
 http://0.0.0.0:5000/`` in the log output.
 
 
@@ -103,7 +102,7 @@ terminal and continue with the example while watching the result in the logs.
 
 
 .. code-block:: bash
 .. code-block:: bash
 
 
-    $ sudo docker logs -f $WEB_WORKER
+    $ sudo docker logs -f web_worker
      * Running on http://0.0.0.0:5000/
      * Running on http://0.0.0.0:5000/
 
 
 
 
@@ -118,7 +117,7 @@ should see the line ``Hello world!`` inside of your console.
 
 
 .. code-block:: bash
 .. code-block:: bash
 
 
-    $ WEB_PORT=$(sudo docker port $WEB_WORKER 5000 | awk -F: '{ print $2 }')
+    $ WEB_PORT=$(sudo docker port web_worker 5000 | awk -F: '{ print $2 }')
 
 
     # install curl if necessary, then ...
     # install curl if necessary, then ...
     $ curl http://127.0.0.1:$WEB_PORT
     $ curl http://127.0.0.1:$WEB_PORT
@@ -137,8 +136,8 @@ running, it will still be listed here with a status of 'Exit 0'.
 
 
 .. code-block:: bash
 .. code-block:: bash
 
 
-    $ sudo docker stop $WEB_WORKER
-    $ sudo docker rm $WEB_WORKER pybuilder_run
+    $ sudo docker stop web_worker
+    $ sudo docker rm web_worker pybuilder_run
     $ sudo docker rmi /builds/github.com/shykes/helloflask/master shykes/pybuilder:latest
     $ sudo docker rmi /builds/github.com/shykes/helloflask/master shykes/pybuilder:latest
 
 
 And now stop the running web worker, and delete the containers, so that we can 
 And now stop the running web worker, and delete the containers, so that we can