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Docker-DCO-1.1-Signed-off-by: John Gardiner Myers <jgmyers@proofpoint.com> (github: johngmyers)
John Gardiner Myers 11 年 前
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      docs/sources/use/networking.rst

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docs/sources/use/networking.rst

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Configure Networking
 
 
 Docker uses Linux bridge capabilities to provide network connectivity
 Docker uses Linux bridge capabilities to provide network connectivity
 to containers. The ``docker0`` bridge interface is managed by Docker
 to containers. The ``docker0`` bridge interface is managed by Docker
-itself for this purpose. Thus, when the Docker daemon starts it :
+for this purpose. When the Docker daemon starts it :
 
 
 - creates the ``docker0`` bridge if not present
 - creates the ``docker0`` bridge if not present
 - searches for an IP address range which doesn't overlap with an existing route
 - searches for an IP address range which doesn't overlap with an existing route
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ At runtime, a :ref:`specific kind of virtual
 interface<vethxxxx-device>` is given to each container which is then
 interface<vethxxxx-device>` is given to each container which is then
 bonded to the ``docker0`` bridge.  Each container also receives a
 bonded to the ``docker0`` bridge.  Each container also receives a
 dedicated IP address from the same range as ``docker0``. The
 dedicated IP address from the same range as ``docker0``. The
-``docker0`` IP address is then used as the default gateway for the
+``docker0`` IP address is used as the default gateway for the
 container.
 container.
 
 
 .. code-block:: bash
 .. code-block:: bash
@@ -55,8 +55,8 @@ which is dedicated to the 52f811c5d3d6 container.
 How to use a specific IP address range
 How to use a specific IP address range
 ---------------------------------------
 ---------------------------------------
 
 
-Docker will try hard to find an IP range which is not used by the
-host.  Even if it works for most cases, it's not bullet-proof and
+Docker will try hard to find an IP range that is not used by the
+host.  Even though it works for most cases, it's not bullet-proof and
 sometimes you need to have more control over the IP addressing scheme.
 sometimes you need to have more control over the IP addressing scheme.
 
 
 For this purpose, Docker allows you to manage the ``docker0`` bridge
 For this purpose, Docker allows you to manage the ``docker0`` bridge
@@ -118,25 +118,25 @@ In this scenario:
 Container intercommunication
 Container intercommunication
 -------------------------------
 -------------------------------
 
 
-Containers can communicate with each other according to the ``icc``
-parameter value of the Docker daemon.
+The value of the Docker daemon's ``icc`` parameter determines whether
+containers can communicate with each other over the bridge network.
 
 
 - The default, ``-icc=true`` allows containers to communicate with each other.
 - The default, ``-icc=true`` allows containers to communicate with each other.
 - ``-icc=false`` means containers are isolated from each other.
 - ``-icc=false`` means containers are isolated from each other.
 
 
-Under the hood, ``iptables`` is used by Docker to either accept or
+Docker uses ``iptables`` under the hood to either accept or
 drop communication between containers.
 drop communication between containers.
 
 
 
 
 .. _vethxxxx-device:
 .. _vethxxxx-device:
 
 
-What's about the vethXXXX device?
+What is the vethXXXX device?
 -----------------------------------
 -----------------------------------
 Well. Things get complicated here.
 Well. Things get complicated here.
 
 
 The ``vethXXXX`` interface is the host side of a point-to-point link
 The ``vethXXXX`` interface is the host side of a point-to-point link
 between the host and the corresponding container; the other side of
 between the host and the corresponding container; the other side of
-the link being materialized by the container's ``eth0``
+the link is the container's ``eth0``
 interface. This pair (host ``vethXXX`` and container ``eth0``) are
 interface. This pair (host ``vethXXX`` and container ``eth0``) are
 connected like a tube. Everything that comes in one side will come out
 connected like a tube. Everything that comes in one side will come out
 the other side.
 the other side.